Third Lucis War (OPEN/MT)

[Militarist Niflheim]

To: King Olaf IV of Jordslag and Commander of the Jordslag Army, King Noctis Lucis Caelum of the Commonwealth and Great Lucis
From: General Hans von Weidling, Commander of the Free Niflheim Forces

I would be honored to change my allegiance to the King and his Commonwealth. Many Bendicians have been imprisoned and Allied soldiers are freed. The Nippon, Lucians and all other from the nations have been freed. I will swear allegiance to defend the Commonwealth against the Bendician Expansionists.

As for the King, I ask of you one small request, I want to be appointed as commander of the Free Niflheim Army under your direct command. Once the war us over, Hollenzburg will return to the Commonwealth crown. The city is slowly being reconstructed again by our civilians who were still steadfast in recovering.

To King Olaf, once the war is over, I shall personally see to it that your troops will enjoy of what I could be able to offer in behalf of my honest King.

To my deepest and humble gratitude, I thank the two of you greatest allied leaders.

General Hans von Weidling, Head of the Free Niflheim Army under the Allied Banner.

[Novaya Equestria]

"General, why are the Niflheim Militarists surrendering?" Flash Code asked Keisuke via radio as the Novaya Equestrian Expeditionary Force stopped.

[Republic of Augusta]

The King, who is still waiting outside the palace, watched a parade take place in Lucis City.


"Whats this about?"

"Its about the Axis Surrender! We beat their a**es!"

The king had a dark expression on his face....

"Sir, are you okay?" His bodyguard asked...

"..."

"Sir!"

"... Y-yes.... Its.... Over... They've won.... All is lost..."

"What about Concordia... What about your dream for a new sovereign land!?"

"Its.... Its up in smoke, Jeffery... My dream.... For a better Republic here..... Is gone...."

The King began to shake in his wheelchair.

Then King Lucis came out of his palace to watch the parade, he saw the King, trebling in his wheelchair with defeat in his eyes. He reached out and touched Lucis' shoulder.

"Y-you've won.... We will pull out our forces from.... Concordia.... And.... As for me, do with me what you will."

He dropped out of his wheelchair and fell to Lucis' feet.

[The Emancipation Regiments]

"Well, that's it," said Matthewson.

"Is it finally over," asked one volunteer.

"Apprently so, seeing how the Militant forces are deteriorating," said another volunteer.

"Great now we get to finally go home," responded another volunteer.

"Not yet," again, said Matthewson.

"Why not?"

"There still one more party that we have to attend."

"That is?"

"Trials, mate."

[Togeria]

As the reached the soldiers they were at a stand still. They had just got done battling the few militarist left. This surrender was shocking to say the least.

"General, we have word that the militarist have surrendered."

"..."

"Sir?"

"Our objective is complete. Await further orders from the Lucian's before proceeding."

"Yes sir."

The Togerians now stayed, some played cards, others read a book or simply relax. Togeria knew the war wasn't fully over, but they needed to know how many died by militarist hands.

[Great Lucis and Accordo]

With the southern war ended, There was still a battle to be fought, With Bendicion

[Elesar]

As someone outside this RP, I really would like to call OP out on something. Your king is a serious Mary Sue. Like, painfully so. Never done anything wrong? Never betrayed anyone? Come on now. Even the best people have done things like that. And your villain. You haven't attributed anything good to him. The only kind of villain that's pure evil is a poorly written one. Even the worst people have good things about them. Even Hitler and Stalin had redeemable qualities. You seem to write things only in terms of black and white. Just saying.

[New Jordslag]

As someone outside this RP, I really would like to call OP out on something. Your king is a serious Mary Sue. Like, painfully so. Never done anything wrong? Never betrayed anyone? Come on now. Even the best people have done things like that. And your villain. You haven't attributed anything good to him. The only kind of villain that's pure evil is a poorly written one. Even the worst people have good things about them. Even Hitler and Stalin had redeemable qualities. You seem to write things only in terms of black and white. Just saying.

If you wish to post OOC and complain, please take this to TGs with Lucis or go to our OOC. OOC posting in a IC is rude. Thank you.