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by Kalumba » Fri Oct 14, 2011 8:57 pm
by Southern Cynocephali » Fri Oct 14, 2011 10:23 pm
Kalumba wrote:Southern Cynocephali is accepted as Nation 3 as well when they finish their sign up.
by Yanitza » Sat Oct 15, 2011 1:42 am
by Kalumba » Sat Oct 15, 2011 9:32 am
by Kalumba » Sat Oct 15, 2011 11:24 am
by Lydenburg » Sat Oct 15, 2011 11:59 am
by Kalumba » Sat Oct 15, 2011 12:12 pm
by Lydenburg » Sat Oct 15, 2011 12:25 pm
by Ruffnekia » Sat Oct 15, 2011 12:28 pm
by Lydenburg » Sat Oct 15, 2011 12:31 pm
Ruffnekia wrote:Nation Name: Tamaria
Government Style: Imperial Government because it is run by a princess of the Ruffnekian Imperial Family
Colonial Master: Ruffnekia
RP Example: None
Population: 17 Million, 130,000 colonials
Military Size: 400,000 using British weaponry
Brief History of your Colony: the colony was established in 1836 by settlers from the Empire and stumbled upon this thought to be uninhabited island and when the natives were found they welcomed the settlers with open arms and soon relations went from strength to strength and even to a point when they all decided to join into one province under the leadership of a princess of the royal family which they elected and the princess they elected was called Sophia who was the most intelligent person in the empire. there is no racial violence in the kingdom due to the education received during school so they are all received with open arms.
(can i be nation number one?)
by Kalumba » Sat Oct 15, 2011 12:35 pm
by Kalumba » Sat Oct 15, 2011 12:48 pm
Ruffnekia wrote:http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=4&t=144289 have a look
by Ruffnekia » Sat Oct 15, 2011 1:10 pm
by Lydenburg » Sat Oct 15, 2011 1:26 pm
Ruffnekia wrote:OK then
somewhere in the cistern forest.....
a squad was camping in a an open patch in the forest with torrential rain hitting the camp the soldiers were inside the main tent eating their diner around a fire, Captain Brusky a tall dark haired man led the team on their mission to hunt down a group of escaped convicts from a top secret military prison just days before "damn they should really improve these stupid rations" he said disgruntled as he shoved another spoonful of powdered style tomato soup with sausages into his mouth and then pulling a disgusting face at the foil looking packet in his hand.
"too right they should" said another man called private Jenkins he was a shallow man and was very cocky it came to a battle between them and an enemy squad. he happened to get stuck with the liquidy looking curry as he had managed to put too much boiling water into it making it very runny
by Ruffnekia » Sat Oct 15, 2011 1:28 pm
Lydenburg wrote:Ruffnekia wrote:OK then
somewhere in the cistern forest.....
a squad was camping in a an open patch in the forest with torrential rain hitting the camp the soldiers were inside the main tent eating their diner around a fire, Captain Brusky a tall dark haired man led the team on their mission to hunt down a group of escaped convicts from a top secret military prison just days before "damn they should really improve these stupid rations" he said disgruntled as he shoved another spoonful of powdered style tomato soup with sausages into his mouth and then pulling a disgusting face at the foil looking packet in his hand.
"too right they should" said another man called private Jenkins he was a shallow man and was very cocky it came to a battle between them and an enemy squad. he happened to get stuck with the liquidy looking curry as he had managed to put too much boiling water into it making it very runny
Just a well-meaning suggestion....Have you attempted using commas in any of your writing?
by Kalumba » Sat Oct 15, 2011 1:37 pm
by Ruffnekia » Sat Oct 15, 2011 1:38 pm
Kalumba wrote:I don't mean to be rude, but your grammar needs a bit of work. Capital letters are neccesary as are commas. Commas (,) are used to split up a sentence, while speech marks (") are used to indicate someone is talking. I'm not sure if your writing is good enough...
by Kalumba » Sat Oct 15, 2011 1:43 pm
by Lydenburg » Sat Oct 15, 2011 1:52 pm
Ruffnekia wrote:which bits because i have problems when choosing to put where commas go
by Kalumba » Sat Oct 15, 2011 1:54 pm
by Ruffnekia » Sat Oct 15, 2011 1:54 pm
Lydenburg wrote:Ruffnekia wrote:which bits because i have problems when choosing to put where commas go
I speak English as a second language, and I know where the commas go. If you need to be told exactly where to put them in a sentence, you quite obviously cannot ever become accustomed to writing the level of grammar that we expect here. Sorry, perhaps not this time. I suggest that you work on some other RP's first, and come back when you've had experience. This thread is really more inclined towards those who are better acquainted with roleplaying scenarios.
by Norvenia » Sat Oct 15, 2011 2:41 pm
Lydenburg wrote:Military Size: Equipment is almost entirely of foreign manufacture. Jumble of Soviet and Free World Cold War weaponry, all PMT.
Kalumba wrote:Technology: I think 1990’s technology is appropriate as the colonies will not have the money to acquire the latest technology fro their armies and industrial complexes. Small amounts of modern technology can be used but keep it within reason. There will be no nuclear weapons or any form of WMD.
by Kalumba » Sat Oct 15, 2011 3:01 pm
Norvenia wrote:Lydenburg wrote:Military Size: Equipment is almost entirely of foreign manufacture. Jumble of Soviet and Free World Cold War weaponry, all PMT.Kalumba wrote:Technology: I think 1990’s technology is appropriate as the colonies will not have the money to acquire the latest technology fro their armies and industrial complexes. Small amounts of modern technology can be used but keep it within reason. There will be no nuclear weapons or any form of WMD.?
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