by Lubyak » Tue Apr 24, 2012 8:04 pm
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by Yorobia » Wed Apr 25, 2012 5:06 am
by The Ctan » Fri Apr 27, 2012 12:30 pm
by Cevalo Nacio » Fri Apr 27, 2012 8:26 pm
by Yorobia » Fri Apr 27, 2012 8:49 pm
Cevalo Nacio wrote:It was a sunny July day in Pieami, the economic capital of Cevalo Nacio, known for being the home of Pinkies Party Bakery and Orange Crush. Our story focuses on Luna Flight,a Pegasus with a job at a local pinkies bakery franchise. He went to one of the best private high schools in Cevalo Nacio and comes from an upper middle class background but now has to work at a bakery, as theres not much demand for Philosophy Majors.
It was a sunny July day in Pieami, the suns beating down on his face awoke Luna Flight from his slumber. He got up grogilly from his twin matress, looking back on it and sighing at the fact that his twin sized bed represented his wife-less and girlfreind-less existence. He shrugged off the feelings of lonelieness and trotted into his kitchen, pouring himself a bowl Trix with banana milk. He looked out the grimy window of his apartment, munching his Trix contentedly and staring intently at the Metropolis outside of his apartment. Looking out at Pinkie Tower (a 2500 foot tall monolithic tower, covered in neon lights of the Mane 6 that looked beautiful contrasted against the black background even during the day.) He tended to try and avoid glancing at his own street. The condemned houses, drug dealers and unicorns in cars with huge rims all made him nervous. After admiring the cityscape for 15 minutes, he glanced at his clock and said "Time for work."
He stepped out of his apartment, blinded by the sunlight. He strided down his street, immediateley noticed by a unicorn beggar. The unicorn said in a sludge of unicorn-esperanto "spare some change mate?" Luna handed the man 1 Bit and continued on thinking to himself. "Damned unicorns, cant they just learn plain esperanto?" The nation had improved since the Apartheid Hundoj (sentient talking dog) government was overthrown in the great pony coup, but unicorns still lagged in progress compared to the other pony groups, due to the extreme demonization that the Hundoj dealt them for their "unnatural lifestyles" He hoped for the best for unicorns, mentally reprimanding himself for his prejudiced thoughts. He continued on passing the local, hip cofee shop, know for hosting pony poets and indie rock bands. His freinds stopped him. His best freind Star Crunch, an Earth Pony decked in an ugly sweater, a beret and smoking an A "Cevalese Spirit" cigarettes said "Hey Luna, you wanna get some coffee and hang out, Death Cab for Pinkie is playing!" Luna thought back to work and sadly just said "no thanks" and continued on. It was terrible that his dad had cut off his trust fund. He was pretty mad when he discovered that he spent the money on a fixed gear bicycle, since than he's had to work himself.
He finally arrived to work 5 minutes late, he came in through the backdoor so his boss, Mr. Hoofie would not notice. He put on his cupcake hat and began taking up his position at the oven, beginning his monotonous routine of putting in cookie dough and removing cookie dough and removing cookies. While most people would find this sort of work intolerable, Luna didnt mind as it kept him from having to interact with anypony and allowed his mind to wander. What he found intolerable were the parties that sporadically happened everyday. He understood that Pinkie Pies bakeries gimmick was spontaneous partying. Sadly, it was the only place that accepted his job application. It wasnt a good job for this pony with Aspergers Syndrome or anypony that was a creature of habit. The most annoying point was always the late night parties that happened everynight. These parties were BYOB and the earth ponies from the university would always get hammered and tear the place up. After cleaning up the restraunt, he ran home, killing all of the built up stress within himself and settling into bed, nice and tired.
He thought about his nation, Yes Cevalo Nacio has its problems, but at least now everyone sees the doctor for free and goes to school. He realized that his nation and maybe even himself had a bright future. He rolled over and went to bed.
by Cevalo Nacio » Fri Apr 27, 2012 9:03 pm
by Lubyak » Sat Apr 28, 2012 4:21 am
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by Camelza » Sun Apr 29, 2012 3:03 am
by Enatai » Sun Apr 29, 2012 5:21 pm
Muffinvania wrote:You're saying Enatai is hot sweaty fun, we get it. Sheesh.
by Muffinvania » Sat May 05, 2012 9:42 am
Urmanian wrote:who cares about humans
by Salvarity » Sat May 05, 2012 10:02 am
by Immoren » Sun Jul 01, 2012 8:26 am
discoursedrome wrote:everyone knows that quote, "I know not what weapons World War Three will be fought, but World War Four will be fought with sticks and stones," but in a way it's optimistic and inspiring because it suggests that even after destroying civilization and returning to the stone age we'll still be sufficiently globalized and bellicose to have another world war right then and there
by Minroz » Mon Jul 02, 2012 8:09 am
by Lunar Republic Isands » Mon Jan 06, 2014 9:50 pm
by Alduinium » Sat May 10, 2014 2:56 pm
by The Lunar Domain » Thu May 15, 2014 10:21 am
- Population: 62,382,939
- Head of state: Queen Liexne III
- Head of government: President Eirik Geiralkson
- Political belief quote: "The fairest rules are those to which
everyone would agree if they did not know how much power
they would have." - John Rawls- Ideology: Social liberalism
by The Lunar Domain » Wed Jun 25, 2014 3:20 pm
- Population: 62,382,939
- Head of state: Queen Liexne III
- Head of government: President Eirik Geiralkson
- Political belief quote: "The fairest rules are those to which
everyone would agree if they did not know how much power
they would have." - John Rawls- Ideology: Social liberalism
by The Lunar Domain » Thu Jul 24, 2014 6:42 am
So I hit a wall of sorts and decided since my old stuff seems... Well other than being old, I kind of realized both how I evolved the story, and how it failed in some areas.
The Twilight Sparkle that seems simply evil for no reason doesn’t really match with the one we see later on, who has been pushed to the edge because of the past.
Characters are, on occasion, mentioned few times even though they play a truly major part in the story, such as Doctor ‘Farak and Charmed Tinkerer.
The exact relation between Applejack, or rather, Jackie Susan Apple is wildly different than how it is depicted later on; the same case occurs with Luna.
Most importantly, though, I feel as if my original intention for a detective story missed the mark a bit. Everyone knows, and probably still will know who Twilight truly is after, and this in my mind cut away from some of that mystery to detective fiction.
Basically, I’m rambling about how I’m rewriting old stuff.
Anyways, while writing the first section of this new version of an old post, I decided to listen to the instrumental version of A World of Blue combined with Rainy Mood to get the whole film noir feel going.
It was fun, to say the least. I’d recommend the experience, or with whatever film noir music of your picking.
Or I could just shut up. Any choice really works.
“Sæpe intereunt aliis meditantes necem.”
-Phaedrus
“Fiat justitia, ruat cœlum.”
-William Watson
- Population: 62,382,939
- Head of state: Queen Liexne III
- Head of government: President Eirik Geiralkson
- Political belief quote: "The fairest rules are those to which
everyone would agree if they did not know how much power
they would have." - John Rawls- Ideology: Social liberalism
by The Lunar Domain » Sun Jul 27, 2014 11:53 am
- Population: 62,382,939
- Head of state: Queen Liexne III
- Head of government: President Eirik Geiralkson
- Political belief quote: "The fairest rules are those to which
everyone would agree if they did not know how much power
they would have." - John Rawls- Ideology: Social liberalism
by The Lunar Domain » Wed Aug 13, 2014 7:34 am
- Population: 62,382,939
- Head of state: Queen Liexne III
- Head of government: President Eirik Geiralkson
- Political belief quote: "The fairest rules are those to which
everyone would agree if they did not know how much power
they would have." - John Rawls- Ideology: Social liberalism
by The Lunar Domain » Fri Aug 22, 2014 4:12 pm
- Population: 62,382,939
- Head of state: Queen Liexne III
- Head of government: President Eirik Geiralkson
- Political belief quote: "The fairest rules are those to which
everyone would agree if they did not know how much power
they would have." - John Rawls- Ideology: Social liberalism
by The Lunar Domain » Sat Sep 06, 2014 6:49 pm
- Population: 62,382,939
- Head of state: Queen Liexne III
- Head of government: President Eirik Geiralkson
- Political belief quote: "The fairest rules are those to which
everyone would agree if they did not know how much power
they would have." - John Rawls- Ideology: Social liberalism
by Lolloh » Sat Sep 06, 2014 8:15 pm
by The Lunar Domain » Sat Sep 13, 2014 2:42 pm
- Population: 62,382,939
- Head of state: Queen Liexne III
- Head of government: President Eirik Geiralkson
- Political belief quote: "The fairest rules are those to which
everyone would agree if they did not know how much power
they would have." - John Rawls- Ideology: Social liberalism
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