Star Wars: Rise of the Order (OOC|OPEN)

[Warg the Immortal]

They're firearms, "slugthrower" is the Star Wars name for them. They're generally only used when one doesn't have access to blaster technology; for instance, Tusken Raiders use slugthrowers. Typically, Star Wars slugthrowers are very long bolt-action or semi-automatic rifles.

Oh so just ballistic weaponry? How can lightsabers deflect lasers/plasma but can't evaporate lead? That'd also mean ammo for a ballistic weapon would be an arm and a leg in costs sadly

Wouldn't cost much if you made your own. And it goes faster than a blaster so its able to ignore (somewhat) the bladed of the sabre, its like passing your finger through a candle, do it quick and nothing happens, do it slow and you burn your finger

[Camicon]

Oh so just ballistic weaponry? How can lightsabers deflect lasers/plasma but can't evaporate lead? That'd also mean ammo for a ballistic weapon would be an arm and a leg in costs sadly

Wouldn't cost much if you made your own. And it goes faster than a blaster so its able to ignore (somewhat) the bladed of the sabre, its like passing your finger through a candle, do it quick and nothing happens, do it slow and you burn your finger

Precisely. When something passes through a place of extreme heat quickly enough it doesn't give those more energetic molecules time to interact with it, i.e. it won't heat up.

If a slug is large enough, and moving fast enough, the lightsaber won't have enough time to fully vaporize it.

[Soviet Farm]

Tag. Would a Grey Jedi working with the eternal Alliance be allowable?

[Esselman]

Alright let's take a dent in this one:

How do non-force users kill force users? Are there esome sort of abilities or something?

Nonetheless sim torn on a knights of Ren or First Order normal, since I don't know whether multiple characters are allowed or not and i don't know how many Knights are already apped and I don't want to force an RP with only Knights of Ren

I think the first question was answered adequately by you guys so that's fine there. So far there is one Knight of Ren and the amount of characters I allow is 2, will update the rules to reflect this.

If you've watched the Star Wars rebels some people keep their lightsabers in separate pieces so people don't know what they are until they put them together

I have, but as in Star Wars the Clone Wars, short, dagger-like lightsaber can be used along with a larger one for lethal slashes.

So, we're either dealing with humanoid General Greviouses, or Rebels's Sith Inquisitors v2.0... which one is it OP?

My answer combines Valyria's post, as seen here:

I still believe the Knights of Ren have a connection to the Dark Side of the Force. I believe they are force users, thus they were able to defeat Luke's new Jedi Order.

However, I believe they do not have Lightsabers or if they do they are unstable like Kylo's and based on ancient designs. Thus they use different weapons as shown in that scene in episode 7.

So the Knights of Ren do have a connection to the dark side of the force as Snoke uses them as a tool of the dark side. They resemble fallen jedi who followed a more radical ideology of the force and thus were able to destroy the new Jedi academy that Luke had founded. Some will have lightsabers though not all as I do think it makes since for them to have taken them from the slain Jedi much in the way Grievous did. Much like the general they are able to tap into the "dark arts" but still require a degree of training that only a superior force connection would allow so easily, i.e. Kylo Ren.

Also just because you have a lightsaber doesn't mean you could defeat a proficient Jedi or Sith as seen by Grievous and Finn.

Finally, the Knights of Ren would most likely prefer their normal weapons as they were able to take down Jedi with them, and being these are the only Jedi they have ever faced, it stands to reason that they wouldn't rely on stolen sabers as they probably think them ineffective.

Tag. Would a Grey Jedi working with the eternal Alliance be allowable?

That is fine, I think there is another person who asked this before and may or may not have applied. I'll have to check again.

[Zelenyirus]

Alright let's take a dent in this one:

-snip-

So, just wondering but are we allowed to characters? I was thinking of having a Knights and a normal First Order guy.

[Soviet Farm]

So, does the Eternal Alliance have the same ranks as other military organizations?

[Esselman]

Alright let's take a dent in this one:

-snip-

So, just wondering but are we allowed to characters? I was thinking of having a Knights and a normal First Order guy.

You can have no more than two characters.

So, does the Eternal Alliance have the same ranks as other military organizations?

No, members of Eternal are referred to as agents. Leaders are Overseers and currently there is only one (the NPC)

[Spindle]

Alright guys, your beloved Co-OP is back and WHOAH, WHAT'S HAPPENED HERE? Okay, that's a lot of pages...

[Greater North American Confederacy]

tag for interest

[Danceria]

Hey, Esselman? How about that APP I sent ya?

[Soviet Farm]

Name: Har Rann
Age: 25
Gender: Male
Species: Shistavanen

Appearance: (pic preferred)WIP
Homeworld: Uvena Prime
Occupation: Agent of the Eternal Order
Biography: (2 paragraph minimum) WIP
Other Info (not necessary to be accepted)
Theme Song:
Important Family: (No Yoda or Darth Vader stuff here though)
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[Zelenyirus]

Name: Malark Ren


Age: 23


Gender: Male


Species: Human


Appearance: (pic preferred)

(He doesn't have two lightsabers by the way, for my char. He’ll be carrying 1 lightsaber and 1 vibrosword)

(Can't find any good artwork I don't expect him to actually be Jacen Solo)

Homeworld: Courscant


Affiliation: Knights of Ren


Rank: Knight? (I'm not sure what their ranking system would be/is)


Occupation: Knights of Ren


Biography: Malark started out as a young Knight at the Jedi Temple, having been raised on Courscant as a young child, he grew up joining the Jedi Temple from a younger age after the Empire fell. By the time he joined, he'd had some understanding of the force but not nearly as much as the Grandmaster Luke Skywalker. He learned different styles and ways of combat, more than just lightsaber as he saw it as a diversifying field of knowledge. Although that never fully blossomed due to the stigma of other weaponry aside from a lightsaber for a jedi. His family, while being wealthy individuals in the arms industry were hit hard by the Empire’s fall. He went out of his way to travel to different planets on “peacekeeping” missions. Discovering an array of new weapons, even learning how to make slug throwers and the ammunition from them after interrogating an older man he'd met, his first steps to corruption.

By the time Kylo Ren created the Knights, Malark was one of the last to join. But through his wide array of weapons and knowledge gained through his travels he managed to help bring down the Jedi Order. He has only one wish which is serving the New Empire (First Order) like his parents did before him and bring back the fear as well as myth of enforcers like the past Darth Vader. He has a plan to serve as faithfully as possible, although he's a Knight of Ren he doesn't always get along with the other members. More than often due to his attitude and personality than anything. He awaits the time until he's given another order to fulfill from Snoke. Working on new designs and studying throughout the weeks to learn more that could better help him in missions or combat.


Other Info: Carries with him one lightsaber and one vibrosword. He's talented in most martial arts but his main strength is in Slugthrowers and long range weapons such as sniper rifles as he sees himself as a Marksman and assassin before a Warrior. He carries a heavily modified and custom upgraded 6-2Aug2 Slugthrower. He keeps a Relby to his back at all times and always makes sure he has a backup blaster if things get too out of hand.

Theme Song: https://g.co/kgs/H3cJG7

Important Family: Xanar Malark (Father, CEO of Malark Arms)

Xunel Malark (Mother, Co-CEO of Malark Arms)

Other family is thought to have died in the rebellion era

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[The Valyria Empire]

Name:Njad Sho'lan "Mand'alore, The Rebuilder"
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Species: Human (Mandalorian)
Appearance:

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Homeworld: Ankhural
Affiliation: Himself and his people, leans towards supporting The First Order.
Rank: Mand'alor
Occupation: Leader of Death Watch.
Biography: Njad like many Mandalorians was born into Death Watch in the Sho'lan clan. Njad had a hard childhood, who was taught to hate the untrue Mandalorians which occupied their home. The Mandalorian government would go on to side with the Rebels, and as Death Watch moved about the faction would be split as well. Some argued for joining the Rebels while others wanted to side with the Empire. A civil war would break out in Death Watch with clan Sho'lan leading the Imperial side. After many months of guerrilla warfare between the two the two sides would meet in a massive battle resulting in the death of over 30 Mandalorians and the death of Njad's father. Njad was only fourteen when this event occurred, unsure who would lead their faction Njad decided that a peace should be made between the two sides.

Njad and the Imperial faction would meet in a dusty cave, there they would bicker and argue with Thrux, Njad''s brother almost ending the negotiations. However through a grande speech Njad was able to convince the Rebel sympathizers that the pacifist Mandalorians still ruled their homeworls. With this speech he was able to end the civil war however the war lowered Death Watche's size from 200 to 97. With the war ended Death Watch would need a new Mand'alor as well as to rebuild. The Mandalorians decided that they must have a new leader, thus a one on one tournament was held, hoping to find the one who is worthy to lead them.

Njad and his brother both entered the tournament hoping that they could lead the Mandalorians like their father had. Eventually it come down between the two brothers, with Thrux being labeled as the challenger that left Njad with picking the terms. Njad decided on hand to hand combat, no stimulants, no weapons, and no armor. In the blistering sun the two would begin their "dance" with Thrux using his superior strength to his advantage however Njad was quicker and got behind Thrux where he was grab him from behind and slam him into the ground. After wailing on his brother for three minutes, Thrux would yield. With both the tournament under his belt and the peace conference the people of Death Watch had found their new leader, Njad was only 17.

By the time Njad had reached 25, the Empire's ultimate the Death Star II would be destroyed over Endor. Death Watch's number had also slightly recovered from 93 up to 115. With the Empire in disarray, Njad knew he had to strike now. In quick swoop Death Watch had taken the planet of Mandalore while the Rebellion was too busy finishing the Empire. However, after ruling Mandalore once more for a year it would come crashing down. After the Rebel's victory at the Battle of Jakku they would soon come to Mandalore thus causing Death Watch to retreat with some losses with their numbers dropping down to 104.

Finally, Njad is now 32. Death Watch has become nomadic traveling the galaxy hoping that the newly formed Republic will soon falter. As word has reached Njad of the First Order the thought of having his numbers joining them has crossed his mind, with hopes that they can finally reclaim their home.
Other Info: Equipment - Westar-34 Blaster Pistols x2, Z-6 Jetpack x2, Darksaber x1, Wrist Flamethrower x1, Whipcord thrower x1, Dur-24 wrist laster x1, MM9 mini concussion rocket launcher, Mandalorian Armor (see picture).

Theme Songs: Standard Theme, Battle Theme
Important Family: Thrux Sho'lan (Older brother)
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Bio is finally done.

[Spindle]

Name: Malark Ren

I'd assume the Knights would have Knight as their vanilla rank, so your app looks fine and the qualifiers are acknowledged. Accepted.

Name:Njad Sho'lan "Mand'alore, The Rebuilder"

I think this one's already been accepted but there wasn't anything added in to make it stupid or OP so Mandalore the Rebuilder has been accepted.

[Esselman]

Alright updated cast list, might go ahead with IC today since I have time unless there are objections?

[The GAmeTopians]

I'm alive, will app this weekend.
Need a mostly-active CoOP?

[Camicon]

Alright updated cast list, might go ahead with IC today since I have time unless there are objections?

No objections.

[Danceria]

Name: Cosinga Sheev
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Appearance: Pics because it totally happened[url]
Homeworld: Unknown (Coruscant, presumbaly)
Affiliation: Resistance, New Jedi Order
Rank: Jedi Padawan
Occupation: Jedi Padawan
Biography: The orphan known as Cosinga Sheev was discovered in the smoldering and sewage covered gutters of Coruscant, mere moments after the Rebel Alliance liberated it from the last few Warlords that stood in the way of the Galactic Concordance. Jedi Master Luke Skywalker and his few apprentices discovered the boy, huddling and attempting to keep warm and noticed his uncanny talent in the Force. Thus, along with several other orphans who wished to join the New Jedi Order, he would find a new home on Yavin IV, former Rebel Base amidst the Massassi Temples.
Cosinga was...different. It would be immediately be apparent not only in his control and mastery of the Force, but a much darker influence as well. A shadowy influence could be sensed hanging over the child, and he complained of nightmares and vivid dreams of a ghastly wrinkled man in black robes cackling.

It did not take long for the Jedi to put two and two together, to realize that Palpatine had groomed this child to take his place should he fall, enslaving the galaxy to the Dark Side forever... these visions began to worsen and consume the young Cosinga, making him irritable, lash out and injure his fellow padawans, and ultimately flee into the jungles in order to protect the rest of the Temple from his...sessions.

Luke would not give up so easily, and pursue the young padawan with Jedi Tionee Solusar. They fought and Cosinga ultimately collapsed on the jungle floor, sobbing uncontrollably. Palpatine's influence was defeated that day...and thanks to Solusar's tutelage, Cosinga emerged from a frightened and timid child to a confident and charismatic diplomat, strong in the ways of the Force. His future as a Jedi seemed bright...
Other Info (not necessary to be accepted)
Theme Song: [url=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7fdjAqh-MGk]Here
Important Family: Unknown
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[Camicon]

Name: Cosinga Sheev
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Appearance: Pics because it totally happened
Homeworld: Unknown (Coruscant, presumbaly)
Affiliation: Resistance, New Jedi Order
Rank: Jedi Padawan
Occupation: Jedi Padawan
Biography: The orphan known as Cosinga Sheev was discovered in the smoldering and sewage covered gutters of Coruscant, mere moments after the Rebel Alliance liberated it from the last few Warlords that stood in the way of the Galactic Concordance. Jedi Master Luke Skywalker and his few apprentices discovered the boy, huddling and attempting to keep warm and noticed his uncanny talent in the Force. Thus, along with several other orphans who wished to join the New Jedi Order, he would find a new home on Yavin IV, former Rebel Base amidst the Massassi Temples.
Cosinga was...different. It would be immediately be apparent not only in his control and mastery of the Force, but a much darker influence as well. A shadowy influence could be sensed hanging over the child, and he complained of nightmares and vivid dreams of a ghastly wrinkled man in black robes cackling.

It did not take long for the Jedi to put two and two together, to realize that Palpatine had groomed this child to take his place should he fall, enslaving the galaxy to the Dark Side forever... these visions began to worsen and consume the young Cosinga, making him irritable, lash out and injure his fellow padawans, and ultimately flee into the jungles in order to protect the rest of the Temple from his...sessions.

Luke would not give up so easily, and pursue the young padawan with Jedi Tionee Solusar. They fought and Cosinga ultimately collapsed on the jungle floor, sobbing uncontrollably. Palpatine's influence was defeated that day...and thanks to Solusar's tutelage, Cosinga emerged from a frightened and timid child to a confident and charismatic diplomat, strong in the ways of the Force. His future as a Jedi seemed bright...
Other Info (not necessary to be accepted)
Theme Song: Here
Important Family: Unknown
Leave this: 299

I said no objections.

[Danceria]

Name: Cosinga Sheev
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Appearance: Pics because it totally happened
Homeworld: Unknown (Coruscant, presumbaly)
Affiliation: Resistance, New Jedi Order
Rank: Jedi Padawan
Occupation: Jedi Padawan
Biography: The orphan known as Cosinga Sheev was discovered in the smoldering and sewage covered gutters of Coruscant, mere moments after the Rebel Alliance liberated it from the last few Warlords that stood in the way of the Galactic Concordance. Jedi Master Luke Skywalker and his few apprentices discovered the boy, huddling and attempting to keep warm and noticed his uncanny talent in the Force. Thus, along with several other orphans who wished to join the New Jedi Order, he would find a new home on Yavin IV, former Rebel Base amidst the Massassi Temples.
Cosinga was...different. It would be immediately be apparent not only in his control and mastery of the Force, but a much darker influence as well. A shadowy influence could be sensed hanging over the child, and he complained of nightmares and vivid dreams of a ghastly wrinkled man in black robes cackling.

It did not take long for the Jedi to put two and two together, to realize that Palpatine had groomed this child to take his place should he fall, enslaving the galaxy to the Dark Side forever... these visions began to worsen and consume the young Cosinga, making him irritable, lash out and injure his fellow padawans, and ultimately flee into the jungles in order to protect the rest of the Temple from his...sessions.

Luke would not give up so easily, and pursue the young padawan with Jedi Tionee Solusar. They fought and Cosinga ultimately collapsed on the jungle floor, sobbing uncontrollably. Palpatine's influence was defeated that day...and thanks to Solusar's tutelage, Cosinga emerged from a frightened and timid child to a confident and charismatic diplomat, strong in the ways of the Force. His future as a Jedi seemed bright...
Other Info (not necessary to be accepted)
Theme Song: Here
Important Family: Unknown
Leave this: 299

I said no objections.

Phoenix Wright disagrees with you

[Spindle]

Alright updated cast list, might go ahead with IC today since I have time unless there are objections?

None from here. Although there are more planets for the OP.

Almania: A planet with a rocky past, Almania was once a viable candidate for joining the New Republic. Unfortunately, the Jedi Initiate Dolph took over the planet and led in a war against the New Republic which sent the planet tumbling into poverty and all-but destroyed the populations of the Almania's moons. With its population halved and its industrial base shattered, Almania was cast aside by the New Republic and ignored as the First Order grew in the darkness of the Unknown Regions. As a result, Almania was one of the first planets to be quietly taken over by the First Order and has a small dockyard in orbit with a few squadrons of Nebulons to defend it.

Axxila: An urban sprawl which resembles a twisted mirror of Coruscant, Axxila is best known to the First Order as the homeworld of Admiral Firmus Piett of Darth Vader's Death Squadron. To the rest of the galaxy, Axxila is known only for its status as the launching-off point for the Crimson Dagger Command's Cuitric Offensive, as well as forming the coreward end of the Axxila-Tangrene hyperlane. Despite its long history as an Imperial world, Axxila is currently under the control of the New Republic with significant public support, partially as a result of the Imperial Admiral Delak Krennel's attack on the planet in the death throes of the Galactic Empire.

Bandomeer: Bandomeer was once a verdant world, full of rolling hills and green plains before it was discovered that the planet was rich in valuable ores of all kinds. The result was swift and robbed Bandomeer of its previous natural beauty: Bandomeer fell under the control of the Offworld Mining Corporation until a pair of Jedi freed it and the Meerians elected their own Governor. Bandomeer was invaded during the birthing years of the Galactic Empire when it refused to sell ionite ore to the newly-formed power, an invasion and occupation which caused no little resentment amongst the Meerians themselves despite being a military success. Currently speaking, Bandomeer is a staunch ally and member world of the New Republic, and has a moderate Republic presence in order to keep its valuable mines safe.

Bimmiel: Bimmiel is a virgin world, hardly touched by sentient species beyond a few small, scattered settlements across the northern hemisphere. For the most part, this is due to a lack of desirable real estate - Bimmiel is almost exclusively barren wastelands, deserts and icy plains and is generally poor in mineral wealth or fantastical landscapes. In fact, there is very little to recommend Bimmiel in general, except for the occasional rumours of a cache of ancient Jedi artefacts from before the Galactic Republic and its hyperlane to Ciutric, coreward of it. Bimmiel is nominally under the control of the New Republic, although warships pass through infrequently at best and no troops are stationed on the ground for anything other than training exercises or punishment duties.

Bimmisaari: A remote world off of the well-beaten galactic paths, Bimmisaari is a planet renowned for its pacifistic nature and its deep commune with nature: the Bimms regarding their ecosystem as the most sacred thing in the galaxy and enormous Asaari Trees litter the planet with the exception of the few plains within which the Bimms construct their cities. Despite their pacifistic nature, the Bimms were never able to join the New Republic and New Republic warships do not enter the system on any regular basis, making the planet a juicy target for the First Order, ripe for the plucking.

Bonadan: Bonadan is a Corporate World, ruled by a number of corporate cartels. Heavily strip-mined, Bonadan is heavily depleted in terms of natural resources but it rich in terms of both population and the ten enormous spaceports which can service hundreds of ships at once. despite its technical neutrality between the First Order and the NEw Republic, Bonadan is surrounded by the First Order's territory and services First Order ships and cargo far more regularly than it does the New Republic - possibly because of the memories of lucrative trade and cheap labour which the Galactic Empire provided in the past, and the First Order promises again.

Boonta: Boonta is a planet controlled by the Hutt Cartel, most famous for its long-running podraces - which have been running for millennia. These draw in Humans by the thousands to either watch or participate in these activities without having to travel to Tatooine and this tourism comprises the vast majority of the planet's economy. Despite this, the majority of the planet's surface area - and orbit - is made up of an enormous scrapheap, for starships in orbit and for anything else on the planet. A number of proposals have been drawn up to search the scraps for saleable components, but the enormous profits raked in by the podracing has proven to be enough to keep a modest fleet in orbit so far. Of course, in the current galactic environment, those plans may be implemented soon enough...

Botajef: Botajef is an unnoticed jewel in the Borderlands, with the urban sprawl covering its southern continent being heavily devoted to the production, design and testing of starships, which combines with its location as the node of the Hydian Way and the Salin Corridor to make it a prime lynchpin between Axxila and Phindar. It should be noted that Botajef has a higher proportion of Mandalorians in its population than many other planets in the sector, a fact which has been attributed to its proximity to Mandalore amongst other factors. Botajef is a New Republic planet, although the New Republic presence there is light and use of the shipyards is mainly taken up by commercial uses.

Celanon: Celanon is the homeworld of the Nalroni species, a mammalian race who have a little standing in the region. One of the facts about the planet which generally surprises and overawes casual newcomers is its multicoloured skies thanks to the sheer number of advertisement boards - comparable even to the Corporate Worlds. In fact, the analogy can be extended beyond simply the skies: the central government of Celanon is comprised of the leaders of the planetary trade guilds, a holdover from the time the planet spent in the Confederacy of Independent Systems, almost to the end of the Clone Wars. Celanon is a member of the New Republic, but only has a light New Republic presence.

Centares: Centares was once a world which thrived on the tourism provided by its beautiful landscapes, as well as whatever mineral resources it could mine without spoiling its pristine ecosystem. With the advent of the Galactic Empire, Centares was strip-mined and cast aside without so much as a backwards glance although Centares still has plenty of spaceports and cities, the tourism is now gone and has been replaced by heavy industry, which does little to ease the damage done to the ecosystem. Centares is one of the most coreward First Order planets and, as such, the Order has a heavy presence there, using the planet as a jumping-off point for further attacks.

Ciutric: Ciutric is a heavily-industrialised planet with a proud history, managing to be the capital planet of the Ciutric Hegemony before its later collapse and playing host to Darth Bane for several years. His residence is still standing and makes more for the planet than the meagre shipyards in orbit. Other than this, the planet is notable for little else, with niche exceptions including the Daplona Base Training Centre and its picturesque forests, which also contribute to the burgeoning tourism industry which the planet exploits to feed its economy. Cuitric is a part of the New Republic but has little more than a Nebulon Squadron and an Embassy to show for it.

Columex: As the node between the Perlemian Trade Route and the Salin Corridor, Columex occupies an important position for trade into the Unknown Territories and Corporate Sector and, as such, was a focus of much First Order intent in their opening offensive. It did not help that the planet resolutely refused to join the Republic and has historically had issues with the Republic - issues which resulted in the planet seceding during the Clone Wars. As a result of these, Columex is currently a staunch First Order world and acts as an important source of Stormtroopers for their military.

Contruum: Contruum is a planet which has a long history of balancing its natural ecosystem with the demands of interstellar industry, something which has resulted in a beautiful planet despite its large Borium mining and refining industry, as well as a number of shipyards in orbit. Despite its historical issues with larger authorities, Contruum pettitioned to join the New Republic not long after the Thrawn Campaign and was accepted rapidly. Of all of its accolades - not least that it produced some of the first New Republic Nebula-class Star Destroyers - none of them rise above the planet's primary claim to fame: it is the homeworld of Airen and Pash Cracken. As a result of this, and its shipyards, Contruum has a significant, if unobtrusive, New Republic presence both on the ground and in space.

Elom: Elom is inhabited by two species, the Elomians and the Elom, both of which are bound tightly together as a result of their planet's occupation by the Galactic Empire. The use of the Elomians as slaves spread them across the galaxy and the Elom's efforts to rescue as many of their brethren as possible has resulted in a number of Elom and Elomins in the New Republic's military and government, despite their planet's reconquest by the First Order in the Order's first open offensive. Currently, Elom is being used as source of slaves for the First Order and as such has a heavy ground complement in order to control the billions of slaves, with a far lighter orbital complement in order to keep raiders away.

Felucia: A verdant, and largely uninhabited, planet, Felucia is deeply rooted in the Force and, as a result of the violence unleashed upon it during the Clone Wars, is now a horribly twisted and deadly planet. Although it may be incredibly deadly, small and scattered colonies make their livings on the surface of Felucia, exporting exotic species, researching the unusual properties displayed by the planet's flora and fauna or taking the native Felucians away to be slaves. Given their native Force-sensitivity, it is unsurprising that the slave industry has expanded massively since the First Order conquered the planet, and now a number of small garrisons exist alongside small communities, keeping watch for any transgressions against the Order.

Garos IV: Garos IV is a planet wrested away from the Galactic Empire as it disintegrated in the wake of the Thrawn Campaign. It is notable for several reasons, not least the University of Garos, which is considered one of the premier learning institutes outside of the Core Worlds. Other than this, the existence of a failed Ssi-ruuvi hyperdrive site on the planet stimulates much academic research in a wide variety of fields - from archaeology to engineering - and is a minor tourist attraction, and the planet was used by Grand Admiral Thrawn to produce his cloaking devices. The exact location of the facility which was used to do so has never been discovered, although rumours flare up every so often. Garos IV has a small contingent of the Republic Army on its surface, and an equally small contingent of the Republic Navy protecting its orbit.

Jabiim: Jabiim is an unusual world in many ways. Firstly, as a result of its unstable magnetic field, electrical storms are common and, as such, repulsorlift vehicles are largely unusable on the planet. As well as this, Jabiim has a significant, if dwindling, supply of various ores which were first discovered when the planet was conquered by the Confederacy of Independent Systems during the Clone Wars. As a result of this, no less than three battles were fought there during the Clone Wars, and again in the Galactic Civil War. The result of this is that Jabiim is a world used to war and suffering, something its people have found renewed as they were conquered by the First Order. Currently, the main First Order presence is on the ground, in order to keep the slave population in check, with a light force in orbit in order to keep raiders away.

Klatooine: Klatooine has a single notable feature: the presence of Wintrium on its surface. This substance hardens as it ages, potentially becoming near-indestructible with enough time, and is found nowhere else in the galaxy. The most well-known location of Wintrium is the Fountain of the Elders, which the native Klatooinians revere as a sacred spot and forbid all technology within a kilometre around it. The presence of Wintrium also means that the planet has a ecosystem which can be found nowhere else and delicacies such as pak'pah fruits and paddy frogs can be found on Klatooine alone. The planet is controlled by the Hutt Cartel and, like Tatooine, most cities are built over wells in order to ensure that water will always be in supply.

Korriban: Korriban is an ancient world - it has been inhabited by some of the most powerful Sith of all time and their spirits still linger there as their bodies remain, mummified, in burial chambers no sane man would search for and none alive have found. To say that Korriban is steeped in the Dark Side is an understatement: Korriban has spent so long being suffused in the Dark Side that it causes physical pain to any Jedi who dares step onto its surface. It was, therefore, no surprise that Korriban was targetted specifically by the First Order for conquest and saw the largest fleet ever deployed by the First Order assigned to take it from the meagre Republic forces arrayed against them. It is also no surprise that Korriban's defences are smaller than would be expected, but also intensely loyal and savagely competent.

Ktil: Ktil is, by and large, an unremarkable planet, other than being the homeworld of the Ktilac species. It was once a member world of the Trade Federation and was a member of the Separatist movement during the Clone Wars. It is known to be a relaxing world and the Viceroy of the Trade Federation often visited it for holidays, but other than this it has little value other than its small spaceport and the few mining operations across its surface. In fact, despite being a New Republic member world, Ktil is only rarely visited by Republic patrols and has no more than a Battalion to keep it under Republic control

Lantilles: Although Lantilles was technically a neutral planet in the Galactic Civil War, it was highly supportive of the Rebels over the Empire and provided pilots to the Rebellion's cause. When the New Republic was formed, Lantilles was swift to join it and add its shipbuilding and shipping industries to the cause. Since then, Lantilles has been a dogged, reliable ally of the New Republic, even when it found itself right next to the frontlines of the First Order's advance. As a result of both its importance and its proximity to the front lines, Lantilles is heavily fortified on the ground and in space, equipped with the defences worthy of such a prize.

Lianna: At the confluence of the Perlemian Trade Route, the Cadinth Run and the Shaltin Tunnel, Lianna is a bustling port aligned with the First Order. As well as this, the planet is also the location of Santhe/Sienar Technologies' headquarters, making it vital to the First Order's war machine. Involved in the design, testing and construction of starships, TIE fighters and ground craft, Lianna has an important bargaining chip with the First Order, which has allowed it to remain technically neutral between the New Republic and the Order itself, even selling TIEs to the New Republic on occasion. Despite this, however, Lianna is heavily defended by the First Order, and with good reason.

Listehol: The Listehol system is an uninhabited system best known for marking one end of the Listehol run and very little else. The system has no strategic value, no minerals, no history and no inhabitable planets so even the First Order, who claim it as a part of their territory, do not go there. This makes it the perfect system for smugglers to enter First Order-occupied from and it already has a growing reputation amongst certain circles as the start of a potentially lucrative smuggling run through Zygeria and out to the New Republic...or vice versa, depending on one's views on slavery.

Lucazec: Lucazec would normally be an unimportant world: it has a little mineral wealth, but the mining infrastructure which was in place was destroyed by a Rebel cell. It has a few cities, but none are very large or have any points of interest. In fact, there is only one thing Lucazec is important for and that is its position: Lucazec sits on the Hydian Way slap-bang in the middle of New Republic space and First Order-claimed territory. This makes Lucazec the single most important staging point point in the war, giving easy access to Phindar, Garos, Mandalore, Columex, Ossus and Centares all from a single choke point. This is a great boon to the New Republic, who currently hold it, and plans are being drawn up to increase its currently modest defence force to an impressive size.

Mandalore: Mandalore, or Manda'yaim, is the homeworld of the Mandalorian people and a planet which has had more than its fair share of hardship. During the reign of the Galactic Empire, the population of Manadalore was enslaved and used to mine for the beskar ore found almost uniquely on Mandalore - a metal so hard it can resist even lightsabre strikes. Since the planet was liberated, thanks in part to Princesses Leia Organa, the Mandalorians have once more looked to their own defence, although their relationship with the New Republic has been cordial. With the rise of the First Order, Mandalore has nominally aligned itself with the New Republic, although it has accepted no help from them and Mandalorians can be found fighting on both sides of the war.

Mirial: Mirial is a planet on the Listehol Run, most famous for being the himeworld of the Force-sensitive Mirialan people, something the First Order is gladly exploiting in order to fill out its slave pens. Despite the crushing amount of troops stationed on the planet, there is a sizeable resistance group operating on the planet, one which is proving to be a serious thorn in the First Order's side. So far, it has proven itself capable of freeing slaves, sabotaging factories and even engaging in a few skirmishes with the First Order and coming out victorious. Whether or not these runaway slaves will be able to take their planet back, the First Order is not going to let go of its holdings without a fight...

Obroa-Skai: Obroa-Skai is best known as a library world, a planet where any scholarly information is available for those who wish to access it. This history stretches back through the ages, including a Jedi Academy which is believed to have been placed there thousands of years before the Battle of Yavin in order to collate the Order's knowledge. Despite its peaceful nature - and its technical neutrality from both the New Republic and the First Order - Obroa-Skai is a heavily-fortified world, a remnant of the long-abandoned Imperial occupation which attempted to hold the planet as the Empire crumbled. Because of their lack of manning, the planet was no obstacle to the New Republic's liberation.

Ossus: Ossus is a planet with a long history, stretching back thousands of years into the past. The fist philosophies to include the Light and Dark Side of the Force were penned here and the Grand Jedi Library was built here, a structure which Jedi and Academicians both made pilgrims to. Unfortunately, when the Crom Cluster was destroyed, Ossus was first pillaged and then scorched, destroying almost all life on the planet. Whether its current, Force-sensitive inhabitents are descendants of the Jedi who survived is currently unknown, albeit likely. Much information had been gleaned by the New Republic about the ancient Jedi before the planet was wrested from them by the First Order, who have given the planet a modest orbital defence but have refused to place any troops on the ground for unknown reasons.

Phindar: Phindar is a planet in the Salin Corridor and has only recently discovered democracy: seventy years ago, in fact. Until that time, the planet was ruled by a crime syndicate before the Jedi Knights Qui-Gon Jinn and Obi-Wan Kenobi liberated it and instilled fair elections. Since then, Phindar has actively participated in every war to retain its own democracy: fighting with the Republic during the Clone Wars and then joining the Rebel Alliance and, later, the New Republic. As a result, Phindar is a planet staunchly set against the First Order and one which offers its sole dockyards, Phindar Station, and moderate defence fleet to the New Republic's cause.

Quermia: Located at the rimward ends of the Overic Griplink and the Perlemian Trade Route, Quermia controls a significant portion of trade moving out into the Unknown Regions from the Borderlands, and so was one of the first planets to fall to the First Order, coerced into joining the regime in order to permit them a staging post for further expansions into the Borderlands. As a result, Quermia is the lynchpin of First Order logistics in the region, and the First Order's theatre command for the Borderlands is located on Quermia, from which attacks are planned, defences are coordinated and propaganda is devised and disseminated. It is, therefore, no surprise that Quermia is one of the most heavily-defended planets in First Order space, second only to Starkiller Base.

Raxus Prime: Raxus Prime is a hellhole of a planet, covered in sweeping junkyards and monolithic foundries with the occasional domed town where workers trudge to and from work despondently: the arrival of the First Order only worsened this. An industrial world like no other, more than ninety percent of Raxus Prime's surface is made up of junkyards roamed by feral Junk Droids, whose strange behaviours have long been theorised as a coordinated construction of...something. Entire capital ships have been left to rot on Raxus Prime, so there is no shortage of parts for them to work with, but far more esoteric secrets might lay hidden beneath layers of scrap, such as the Force Harvester the Separatists acquired during the Clone Wars. So far, the First Order has been too terrified to look for such buried secrets but as the war progresses, who knows what they might do?

Raxus Secundus: When compared to Raxus Prime, Raxus Secundus is a paradise and, indeed, it is incredibly idyllic on the surface. Its atmosphere is breathable, its ecosystem is stable and its landscapes are fantastic, but Raxus Secundus manages to be so idyllic because it was largely ignored by the Galactic Empire and the First Order. It has very little population, almost no manufacturing base and only exports a little food so there has never been a reason for either power to deal with it in any way. Although it was the Separatist capital, it surrendered to the Republic with no fighting once the Droid Army was shut down and so was spared even reprisals. All in all, Raxus Secundus is an unremarkable world and one which very few people would consider worth fighting over.

Roche Asteroids: The Roche Asteroids are the home of the Verpine, a technologically proficient race of insectoids, and is a New Republic member world as well as an important source of research and development for and production of spacecraft of all types, hosting the headquarters of Roche Industries and Slayn & Korpil. On top of these, the Roche Asteroids are the only known source of larmalstone and these combine with the asteroids' proximity to the front lines to give Roche a high defensive priority and a sizeable defensive force.

Serenno: The birthplace of infamous Separatist leader Count Dooku, Serenno has had a long history of resisting authority in whatever way it can and is a hotbed of sedition even to this day. Other than its history as the homeworld of the Confederacy of Independent Systems, there is very little else to distinguish Serenno from any other civilised world in the Borderlands. The role of its Counts was significantly diminished by the Galactic Empire as a punishment for the planet's sedition and so its once-famous Counts are now little more than ornamental. The fact that the New Republic has not yet allowed Serenno to reinstate their previous system has been a cause of much discontent.

Sy Myrth: Lying at the crossroads of the Salin corridor and the Triellus Trade Route, Sy Myrth is a choke point for trade and fleets moving into the Borderlands from Hutt-controlled territories. As a result, it was one of the key planets the First Order spearheaded towards when they opened their first offensive against the New Republic and it is currently the construction site of a Golan-II platform as the First Order attempts to lock the system down so that they can pull ships out and use them to shore up their defences elsewhere. Until the Golan-II is completed, however, they will be forced to keep a sizeable force there, just in case the Hutts decide to cease their neutrality.

Taanab: Taanab is an agricultural world, with weather-controlling satellites and hexagonal farmlands visible from orbit, all designed to increase the crop yield of the world as much as possible. As a result of this, and the natural charity of the natives, Taanab is the breadbasket of the Borderlands, exporting its produce at low prices into the planets rimward of it and making just enough to expand their ventures year on year. The planet has been a member of the New Republic since the New Republic's inception and is a much-valued member. However, Taanab's distance from the front lines means that its defence is not yet considered a priority, so her defence force is no more than a Squadron of capital ships.

Tangrene: Tangrene, the rimward end of the Axxila-Tangrene Hyperlane, is a craggy planet with a dark past. Inhabited by the Tangrene before the arrival of the Galactic Empire, the planet was overwhelmed by the Empire and the natives were enslaved to construct the vast series of fortifications which make the planet a fortress capable of repelling any assault. The population was then wiped out by the commanding Moff in order to ensure that there was no dissidence. After the collapse of the Empire, the planet was abandoned and, despite the New Republic having claimed the planet as their own, no ships ever move through the system and no troops are stationed on the ground.

Telos IV: Telos IV is a planet which has learned how to overcome adversity. During the Jedi Civil War, Telos IV's surface was razed in an orbital bombardment after it refused to surrender, yet today it once again blooms with life thanks to the restoration plans of the Old Republic and the efforts of its own people. As a part of its restoration, the enormous Citadel Station was placed in orbit and was alter outfitted as a defence station. When the First Order attempted to invade Telos, Citadel Station and the few ships of Telos IV's defence fleet broke the enemy soundly, meaning that Telos IV remains a New Republic stronghold perilously close to First Order territory. Currently, its wearied defence fleet is being reinforced in order to keep a hold of the system, but this will take time and the First Order is nothing if not aggressive...

Tirahnn: Tirahnn is an ancient planet, having joined the old Galactic Republic almost twenty thousand years ago. Tirahnn's main claim to fame is its renowned bazaars, which sell almost anything which can be legally - or not-so-legally - obtained and brought to the planet. This makes it a hotbed for smugglers, thieves and shady folks from all walks of life, who hawk their wares for anyone to buy with no questions asked and even fewer answered. Despite its statues as a member world of the New Republic, Tirahnn is only loosely policed, with a few starfighter bases and little else.

Wayland: A planet long-shrouded in mystery, Wayland was lost for millennia after its location was removed from the Republic's databases. When it was rediscovered, it was used by Emperor Palpatine to hide away his collection of Sith artefacts and technological wonders which he preferred to keep secret. Later discovered by Grand Admiral Thrawn and the New Republic, the planet is currently little more than a legend to the First Order, despite their concerted efforts. In spite of this the New Republic has little presence on the ground, partially because of the continual strife between the primitive Human, Myneyrshi and Psadan colonists and partially because of the way that the Dark Side permeates the planet. But, of course, the main reason for the New Republic's reticence with Wayland is that they are not sure of the full extent of the defences installed in Mount Tantiss - where the Emperor kept his artefacts - and because their past experiences with the storehouse has revealed sophisticated conventional and esoteric defences.

Zygeria: Zygeria is the homeworld of the Zygerian species and has been an ally of the First Order ever since it rose from the Empire's ashes. Zygerian ships have been participating in raids on New Republic territory with ships provided by the First Order for years before any open offensives began and the First Order has allowed Zygerians a free hand when it comes to their slaving ways. In fact, several of the First Order's slaving hubs - Mirial and Jabiim in particular - are actually run almost entirely by Zygerians, with the First Order providing the manpower for the more menial tasks. Zygeria keeps its own, moderate, defence fleet and ground forces, despite their allegiance to the First Order, but these are usually off raiding New Republic worlds for their living cargo and rarely actually defending their planet.

Name: Cosinga Sheev

I like the character idea and the app looks good so Sheev is accepted. Although the app's code is a little bit broken and it's one massive URL.

[Danceria]

Hooray!

So for Jedi, Kylo Ren hasn't descended to the Emo Side as of yet...? Is the Jedi Temple still intact?

[Theyra]

Name: Ohomm Sukdenz
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Species: Weequay
Appearance:

Homeworld: Sriluur
Affiliation: Former New Jedi Order, Current Independent but, leaning back to the Jedi Order.
Rank: Jedi Padawan
Occupation: Bounty Hunter
Biography: Ohomm was born on the Weequay homeworld of Sriluur that was located in Hutt Space. Ohomm's father was a bounty and was teaching his how to be one as a way to not work for the Hutts. Despite his father's work, both he and his father hated the Hutts and loathed the idea of working for them. When Ohomm was ten a jedi came to the planet to track down Ohomm's father. The jedi wanted information from him and noticed that Yei's son was force-sensitive and asked to train Ohomm. Yei knowing that this was his son's way out of working with the Hutts, accepted and Ohomm went to train to be a jedi.

His time at the academy at Yavin IV was as good one and he proved to have a strong connection to the force. His swordsmen's skills were good and thanks to his father's training, had skills that most did not have. He made few friends at the academy due to his father's past and his introvert nature. But that did not deter him and from his training and the jedi.

When he was eighteen, Ohomm received a message from a unknown person and became very agitated. His master tried to calm him down but, he couldn't and left the order for his own reasons. But, he told his master and Master Luke Skywalker that he will return to finished his training when he is done with his business. Shortly after leaving he became a bounty hunter earned a reputation for himself. It is unknown if he finished his business or if he will return to finished his training. Though he secretly trains on what he remembers from his time at the academy and only uses his lightsader and force powers in a emergency.
Other Info Equipment- Modified blaster rifle, DL-44 pistol, standard commlink, grappling hook attachment on his left hand. Whipcord thrower, yellow bladed lightsaber.
Theme Song: N/A
Important Family: Yei Sukdenz -Father (Former bounty hunter)
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[The Valyria Empire]

Name: Malark Ren

I'd assume the Knights would have Knight as their vanilla rank, so your app looks fine and the qualifiers are acknowledged. Accepted.

Name:Njad Sho'lan "Mand'alore, The Rebuilder"

I think this one's already been accepted but there wasn't anything added in to make it stupid or OP so Mandalore the Rebuilder has been accepted.

Well even if it was accepted the Bio wasn't done thus it was an incomplete app. Thus I wanted to finish it before the IC goes up.

[Spindle]

Hooray!

So for Jedi, Kylo Ren hasn't descended to the Emo Side as of yet...? Is the Jedi Temple still intact?

Kylo has currently embraced the Emo Side and the Jedi Temple (assuming you mean the one Luke made, apologies if not) is currently so much rubble.

Name: Ohomm Sukdenz

Quick point: Luke was the only proper Jedi so it was most likely just one of his apprentices who found Ohom, just for reference. Other than that, the app looks fine, so Ohomm is accepted.