Ontorisa wrote:The Jaclean empire wrote:Alright well I don't see where I'm so overpowered and unrealistic so please help me where I'm wrong,
Plate armour? Come on bud. 59 years old? And he's 6'6, 200+ pounds? And you're saying he can move as if he's never aged a day? Give me a break. As well, it's just the biography, the experience and so forth. As well, no way he could be able to obtain a status like that with the Feral Men. They don't give two shits who they're fighting honestly. I don't like your application nor the character you've put together, to be put bluntly.and yes a write-in like just writing a high quality paragraph to show that you can RP good.
Attach it to your app then.
I didn't seen anything in the app about him moving as though he'd never aged a day, and a nearly 60 year old combatant isn't exactly unheard of (William Marshal (70 at the Battle of Lincoln), Robert Guiscard (66 during his first campaign in Byzantium), Jean Thurel (61 at the Battle of Minden), etc).
