New Jordslag wrote:Zarkenis Ultima wrote:This is a work in progress, as I have to leave soon, but I would like to know if everything I have down so far is acceptable.
APP:
Name: Ereshkigal
Age: 21
Gender: Female
Appearance: Ereshkigal is a young woman of average height, but lean and muscular, with smooth, bronze colored skin. She has reddish black hair falling in curls down to her shoulders, slightly longer on the right side than on the left, and bright, piercing amber eyes, with a small, slightly crooked nose but otherwise soft facial features. Her hands are always covered in bandages.
Personality:
Bio:
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Core Name and Number: Core 289 - Einherjar
Brief Core Description: One of the last cores to be formed, the Einherjar is largely made up of the descendence of the various outcasts of the world, unfit for other cores and thus rounded up and herded together to be used as shock troopers for the Aheani. The Einherjar were swiftly indoctrinated, becoming a force loyal to their Aheani saviors and perfectly willing to fight for them, and in fact, fight for them was what they excelled at. Born to fight, the Einherjar, a melting pot which has evolved into its own culture, are a fierce, proud people, who move on through the hardships of life and believe their service to the Aheani to be their glory and greatest duty. Selfless in their service and silent in their pain, the people of this core are not very communicative, often having trouble to express their emotions in a way not involving sacrifice, and many tend to shy away from foreigners, though they are not rude towards them, necessarily. They interact the most through combat, and in fact, it is said that combat is the way Einherjar grow closer to others and to each other. Their capacity to understand each other during battle is such that many Einherjar are able to, with just one prior battle worth of combat experience, fight as a single entity on the battlefield. Such does not often happen with those of other cores, but the battle intuition of an Einherjar is something to acknowledge nonetheless. They view the other cores with little interest, though not with apathy or contempt, but they do view their rivalries with disdain, believing that, if all of them are in the service of the Aheani, there should be no reason to compete.
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Name: Obsidian Butterfly
Appearance:
Physical Modules:Offense Modules:
- Endurance
- Increased Suit Durability
- Suit Nanite Regeneration
Transport Modules:
- Energy Construct Creation
- Venom Injector
Unique Module:
- Blink Teleportation
- Hover Wings
Model Number: EI-0207
- Repulsion Field: The armor quickly generates a transluscent dome of light around itself. Anything whatsoever that impacts said dome will be instantly rejected, being sent back in the direction it came from with considerable force. The field is able to withstand an enormous ammount of damage, and lasts for considerable time, but Ereshkigal can not move or attack while the field is active, and the field will only deactivate when all of the module's energy is drained, effectively making it a once-per-battle ability. Anything caught inside the Repulsion Field will be safe as long as the field is active, and the field works only one way, so it is possible to fire at the enemy from within.
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RP Sample: Here you go. They're not my best, but they're the minimum I hope to uphold.
VERY Impressive. And I like the idea of an outcast Core.
But with an outcast core, my commie core isn't as equal as they claim to be