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by Kylantha » Thu Oct 08, 2015 6:26 am
by Charmera » Thu Oct 08, 2015 6:27 am
Kylantha wrote:I might come back for this RP only. It's the only one I still want to continue. That is, if it still goes on. Otherwise, I will remove Alfie and all my other characters from this series and create one of my own which I will work as hard as I can on.
Zarkenis Ultima wrote:And here, we see a wild Shittonicus Charactericus, coloquially known as Charmera, in its natural habitat. It seems to be displaying behavior expected from one of its kind, producing numerous characters and juggling them with its front paws.
by Islamic Republic e Jariri » Wed May 03, 2017 1:49 pm
by Islamic Republic e Jariri » Wed May 03, 2017 2:35 pm
Harbertia wrote:Bravo!
by Harbertia » Thu May 04, 2017 4:47 pm
Islamic Republic e Jariri wrote:Harbertia wrote:Bravo!
Hey Harb - I was going to invite you for the epilogue - or Phase 4 of the revival. I wanted to do this scene at the end where the whole story told is actually a flashback recalled by Damien (the side of the epilogue from his perspective), discussing it over tea with none other than Salvia herself. That is if you're willing, to at some point in the near future, play Salvia one more time in one last scene?
by Islamic Republic e Jariri » Thu May 04, 2017 6:38 pm
by Charmera » Fri May 05, 2017 6:22 am
Islamic Republic e Jariri wrote:Plan to end the two year hiatus soon.
Am planning out a minor time skip and flashforward to set the final arc in motion.
Yes, the intention is not to prolong the RP but to give proper closure to character arcs.
Currently I'm picturing this - we open up a scene that flashforwards to the near future, where a mysterious enemy stands triumphant in apparent victory against certain characters, their fates uncertain. Mitchell will be one of the few left standing, missing an eye and facing a familiar adversary from 7 years ago in Book III - the Masked Man, now a servant of the mysterious enemy, as the two engage in a battle to the death.
Then we flashback to five days earlier and build up the events leading up to that inevitable moment.
Elements that need to be resolved:
- Cloak's message to Damien warning him about a mysterious enemy hunting abhumans.
- Scarlet's desire to confront and surpass Quicksilver who robbed her of her revenge against her father Metallo whom QS killed.
- Alfred's corrupted psyche taken over by the entity known as Nathaniel.
- Quicksilver's interesting relationship with Matthew... really curious where that will go.
- Alice and Kyle's love story.
Characters whose role needs to be figured out:
- Jessica - Super durable skin, doesn't outwardly age, enhanced strength and works at hospital.
- Shiloh Haverfield - displays similar abilities to Mitchell Evans, whom he revived from a comatose state, has possible crush on Portia.
- Portia - rich girl, has obvious crush on Shiloh, refers to Damien as 'Carrot Cake Kid' and not much else.
Am currently working on brainstorming other details to flesh it out...
There is also something else to account for - public perception of Quicksilver - she is known to the residents of the city as somewhat of an urban legend and is the leader of her own crime syndicate that comprises a large faction of the Washington Underworld (the collective term of crime families based in the city).
If she is to one day become President of the UAR then it would help if in the final arc she is perceived as a defender of the city - maybe during the final arc the mysterious enemy attempts to siege the capital city itself... yes, he could gain access to a missile manufactured by the RHK company, which QS could counter with her magnetism, saving the city and being hailed as a hero. How would she react that?
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Oh and the Mayor is currently Zach in disguise, working for the Ace of Clubs, a rival member of the Underworld, that will need to be resolved.
I wanted to do this arc about Jessica stopping the rampage of a abhuman serial killer but... I hadn't fully thought it through. Could continue it and just go with the flow or could skip it all together and just reference it as a minor adventure Jessica had whilst moving forward with introducing the final antagonist - the mysterious enemy - Manama.
Am working on his character... he will be separate from the Soul Eaters (who maybe should be one individual) but work in conjunction with them over shared goals. Manama is technically only after killing Alfred, but his minion the Masked Man is fixated on killing Mitchell, whose Matthew's brother, who might also be attacked by the Soul Eaters, while Alfred will be cured but forced to battle Mia whose more powerful Mosley persona resurfaces.
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Structure:
1. We flashforward showing all the main characters in difficult situations due the actions of Manama.
2. We flashback to five days earlier, resolving loose plot threads and moving everyone in that one situation.
3. We fully catch up to the flashforward scene, defeat Manama and deal with the consequences.
4. Finally we do a short epilogue set a few years later, showing what happened to all the characters.
Harbertia wrote:Islamic Republic e Jariri wrote:
Hey Harb - I was going to invite you for the epilogue - or Phase 4 of the revival. I wanted to do this scene at the end where the whole story told is actually a flashback recalled by Damien (the side of the epilogue from his perspective), discussing it over tea with none other than Salvia herself. That is if you're willing, to at some point in the near future, play Salvia one more time in one last scene?
I'm sure I'll be able to get myself into the mindset again- just do remember that I tend to 'seep' into my characters- so it wont' be a healthy experience for me but I can certainly do it. Especially since it's over tea and especially due to the events that have taken place in the RP.
Zarkenis Ultima wrote:And here, we see a wild Shittonicus Charactericus, coloquially known as Charmera, in its natural habitat. It seems to be displaying behavior expected from one of its kind, producing numerous characters and juggling them with its front paws.
by Charmera » Fri May 05, 2017 6:58 am
Zarkenis Ultima wrote:And here, we see a wild Shittonicus Charactericus, coloquially known as Charmera, in its natural habitat. It seems to be displaying behavior expected from one of its kind, producing numerous characters and juggling them with its front paws.
by Islamic Republic e Jariri » Fri May 05, 2017 9:53 am
by Harbertia » Fri May 05, 2017 11:23 am
by Islamic Republic e Jariri » Fri May 05, 2017 12:45 pm
Harbertia wrote:I can already imagine Salvia's conversations in regards to Damien expressing his desire to help Alfred. I'll be able to manage. I'll keep the end game goal in mind though so XD hahaha
by Islamic Republic e Jariri » Thu May 18, 2017 9:08 pm
by Harbertia » Thu May 18, 2017 11:22 pm
by Islamic Republic e Jariri » Fri May 19, 2017 4:33 am
Harbertia wrote:hmm... I too should practice.
*tries to find the last post with Salvia directly, and also the most recent Damien post*
I need to have an idea of Salvia's current position and Damien's recent activity.
Edit: Oh wait I just have to do an end scene XD hahaha ahahha well that takes a lot of stress away.
by Harbertia » Fri May 19, 2017 11:48 am
by Islamic Republic e Jariri » Sat Jun 03, 2017 6:13 pm
Kylantha wrote:Ashleigh Savoy / Claudia Leistner, 2027
Ashleigh nodded. There was indeed a way. "Certainly. But you see, dear immortal, the persona that each of us is infused with is what allows us a place in this world. It gives us leeway. We are after all, Forgotten souls. But given the will to live, we are merged with similarly distressed fellows and allowed to live, on the condition that we do as the Big Three say." The boy glanced over his shoulder, a twinkle in his eye. "The mask is a sign of that." he simply says just as a young man in a uniform torn up by bullets and burnt at the corners appears in front of Damien. Ashleigh gestures to the man. "This is Threnody. Also known as Ephraim Manning. The man whose wife and children were burnt alive by the Order he swore allegiance to.. He still wants revenge.. But his inhibitions held him back, and now it's far too late."
The man glared at Damien, his fists were clenched, and his stance said clearly that he wanted a fight. But he didn't make a move. Ashleigh continued to explain, stretching his narrow body backwards to emphasize how apathetic he was about all this. "You obviously don't understand our nature, immortal. Without a counterpart who wants revenge or closure or whatever, we are simply too weak to keep going on. And if dear Lady Death doesn't get to us first, someone else does, if you know what I mean. We're souls who... Driven into the ground... Filled with despair... Are under the line of sight of that woman, who would have certainly just cast us into the Nether for our wrongdoings. But here we are... Given a chance."
"But your brother's case was different. His legacy is a strong one. I hear the Royales have been at it for decades before those horrible, horrible fellows from the Har-- Oh... That's right. I'm not supposed to mention anything about that..." Ashleigh grinned. Manning faded into a dark, thick mist that seemed to sink into the adolescent boy's body.
"Anyway... What I mean is... There's no way to forcibly remove that pest from your brother without hurting both of them... Very, very badly." Ashleigh shrugged as if this were all a trivial matter. It was to him, anyway. "Let's just get this over with. I'd love a good deal with perhaps... Some disabled person right now. I do wonder what the next one will wish for. " he laughed, turning to face Damien as his mask materialized once again.
Claudia, standing at the side, felt unsettled. But she was also determined to help. After all, her cousin was out there, in danger. She had helped him a lot. And now that she was aware that something bad had taken over him, she knew what she had to do. But alas, she'd need to be careful lest she actually hurt her real cousin instead of this demon that the children were talking about. Without much understanding of the situation, she was likely to make mistakes.
"Master Royale, I believe it's best if we make our move now. Surely that dreadful boy isn't expecting an attack from us." she says, looking back towards Damien from a ledge facing the direction that led to the Museum of Natural History.
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