Rebuild of Reality [OOC] [Semi-Closed]

[The BranRiech]

Aw, cool!

Thanks. I'll get to posting soon here, Victoria 2 eats time.

Understandable. No effort must be wasted bringing the primitives of Africa to the light of civilization!

Or playing outrageous situations, like a Soviet Union taking over the world during the mid-1800s.

[Zarkenis Ultima]

Understandable. No effort must be wasted bringing the primitives of Africa to the light of civilization!

Or playing outrageous situations, like a Soviet Union taking over the world during the mid-1800s.

Or Brazil beating Germany.

[The BranRiech]

Or Brazil beating Germany.

That would never happen.

[Zarkenis Ultima]

Or Brazil beating Germany.

That would never happen.

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So it's outrageous, right?

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Y'now, nevermind.

[The BranRiech]

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So it's outrageous, right?

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Y'now, nevermind.

Even Germany losing to Brazil is just too outrageous.

[Zarkenis Ultima]

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So it's outrageous, right?

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Y'now, nevermind.

Even Germany losing to Brazil is just too outrageous.

Fine. Spain winning to the Netherlands then?

[Rupudska]

Even Germany losing to Brazil is just too outrageous.

Fine. Spain winning to the Netherlands then?

Spain can't even beat England. That is equally outrageous.

[Limborg]

Very intrested, not sure what i plan to do with this but here's my app.
Anyhow, what do you actually expect? I have no idea what i'm able to do and what not, i hope one can explain to me

Name: Sayyed Hassan Nasrallah
Age: 56
Nationality: Lebanese
Occupation: Professor in Islamic Studies, Professor in Warfare, Negotiator, leader of Hezbollah
Height: 1,70cm
Weight: 80kg
General Appearance/pic: http://www.islamicinvitationturkey.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/11/seyd_Hassan_Nasrollah_Hfz_by_islamicwallpers-1.jpg
http://www.kabobfest.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/12/nasrallah.jpg
Powers/abilities: Empathy (he can see/feel other peoples emotions), immortality (he doesn't know this himself, but he stopped aging after the "incident" physically he's still 42, he just can't die by natural causes)
Weapons (if any): None, i would like to know if its possible to have some guards around me, they won't play a real role unless my character would be attacked or so.
Personality: Sayyed Hassan Nasrallah is a very intelligent and charismatic person, he's a calm man who likes to learn alot.
Likes: reading, religious activities, people.
Dislikes: war, major changes, people who lie.
Bio: http://english.alahednews.com.lb/essaydetails.php?eid=5523&cid=511#.U9OKmk2KB3o
Current location/situation: France, situation not sure yet.
RP sample: http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=31&t=303591 (A shame that it died pretty quickly. This is however my first real character RP.

[Constaniana]

Very intrested, not sure what i plan to do with this but here's my app.
Anyhow, what do you actually expect? I have no idea what i'm able to do and what not, i hope one can explain to me

Name: Sayyed Hassan Nasrallah
Age: 56
Nationality: Lebanese
Occupation: Professor in Islamic Studies, Professor in Warfare, Negotiator, leader of Hezbollah
Height: 1,70cm
Weight: 80kg
General Appearance/pic: http://www.islamicinvitationturkey.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/11/seyd_Hassan_Nasrollah_Hfz_by_islamicwallpers-1.jpg
http://www.kabobfest.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/12/nasrallah.jpg
Powers/abilities: Empathy (he can see/feel other peoples emotions), immortality (he doesn't know this himself, but he stopped aging after the "incident" physically he's still 42, he just can't die by natural causes)
Weapons (if any): None, i would like to know if its possible to have some guards around me, they won't play a real role unless my character would be attacked or so.
Personality: Sayyed Hassan Nasrallah is a very intelligent and charismatic person, he's a calm man who likes to learn alot.
Likes: reading, religious activities, people.
Dislikes: war, major changes, people who lie.
Bio: http://english.alahednews.com.lb/essaydetails.php?eid=5523&cid=511#.U9OKmk2KB3o
Current location/situation: France, situation not sure yet.
RP sample: http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=31&t=303591 (A shame that it died pretty quickly. This is however my first real character RP.

Now, I'm not the OP here, but I'm pretty sure Rup isn't going to let you play as an actual terrorist leader.

[Limborg]

Now, I'm not the OP here, but I'm pretty sure Rup isn't going to let you play as an actual terrorist leader.

1. Since when is Hezbollah a terrorist organization?
2. I can change it to former leader, stating that the group disbanded or so...

[Rupudska]

Very intrested, not sure what i plan to do with this but here's my app.
Anyhow, what do you actually expect? I have no idea what i'm able to do and what not, i hope one can explain to me

Name: Sayyed Hassan Nasrallah
Age: 56
Nationality: Lebanese
Occupation: Professor in Islamic Studies, Professor in Warfare, Negotiator, leader of Hezbollah
Height: 1,70cm
Weight: 80kg
General Appearance/pic: http://www.islamicinvitationturkey.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/11/seyd_Hassan_Nasrollah_Hfz_by_islamicwallpers-1.jpg
http://www.kabobfest.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/12/nasrallah.jpg
Powers/abilities: Empathy (he can see/feel other peoples emotions), immortality (he doesn't know this himself, but he stopped aging after the "incident" physically he's still 42, he just can't die by natural causes)
Weapons (if any): None, i would like to know if its possible to have some guards around me, they won't play a real role unless my character would be attacked or so.
Personality: Sayyed Hassan Nasrallah is a very intelligent and charismatic person, he's a calm man who likes to learn alot.
Likes: reading, religious activities, people.
Dislikes: war, major changes, people who lie.
Bio: http://english.alahednews.com.lb/essaydetails.php?eid=5523&cid=511#.U9OKmk2KB3o
Current location/situation: France, situation not sure yet.
RP sample: http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=31&t=303591 (A shame that it died pretty quickly. This is however my first real character RP.

Oh wow. So many things wrong with this. DENIED DO NOT RESUBMIT. Create a whole new app from scratch.

[Limborg]

Oh wow. So many things wrong with this. DENIED DO NOT RESUBMIT. Create a whole new app from scratch.

Care to explain what's wrong? I don't even know what's possible or not so...

[Rupudska]

Oh wow. So many things wrong with this. DENIED DO NOT RESUBMIT. Create a whole new app from scratch.

Care to explain what's wrong? I don't even know what's possible or not so...

Oh boy. Oh boy.

>Using an IRL person

That would be an NPC by default already, and only I can make NPC apps.

>Head of a militant political group

A somewhat big no-no, I mean, if there wasn't already a designated Big Bad villain, I wouldn't mind to much, but no. Not to mention that, for now, events in the Middle East will be rather irrelevant. Also in case you didn't check the Asian map key, the Syrian government is dead. KO, gone.

>Linked biography

Which is a NEWS ARTICLE, and therefore NOT YOURS. I wouldn't care if your app was otherwise the best I've ever seen in my life, if you were to do that, I wouldn't even consider accepting it.

[Limborg]

Care to explain what's wrong? I don't even know what's possible or not so...

Oh boy. Oh boy.

>Using an IRL person

That would be an NPC by default already, and only I can make NPC apps.

>Head of a militant political group

A somewhat big no-no, I mean, if there wasn't already a designated Big Bad villain, I wouldn't mind to much, but no. Not to mention that, for now, events in the Middle East will be rather irrelevant. Also in case you didn't check the Asian map key, the Syrian government is dead. KO, gone.

>Linked biography

Which is a NEWS ARTICLE, and therefore NOT YOURS. I wouldn't care if your app was otherwise the best I've ever seen in my life, if you were to do that, I wouldn't even consider accepting it.

1) didn't know that.
2) i could remove it, making it former leader. what region/stuff is relevant?. what does it matter that the Syrian government is gone?
3) don't see the whole problem, but alright...

I'll see if i make a new app...

[Constaniana]

Now, I'm not the OP here, but I'm pretty sure Rup isn't going to let you play as an actual terrorist leader.

1. Since when is Hezbollah a terrorist organization?
2. I can change it to former leader, stating that the group disbanded or so...

It's a paramilitary Muslim extremist group. Also: "The United States,[38] France,[39] the Gulf Cooperation Council,[40] United Kingdom,[41] Australia,[42] Canada,[43] the Netherlands,[44][45][46][47] the European Union[48] and Israel classify Hezbollah as a terrorist organization,"

[Rupudska]

1)[I] didn't know that.
2) i could remove it, making it former leader. what region/stuff is relevant?. what does it matter that the Syrian government is gone?
3)[I] don't see the whole problem, but alright...

I'll see if i [can] make a new app...

Let's not forget

>Everything in red is an error or a word that should be there but isn't

And if you had actually read the OP, you would know what region is relevant. I would actually suggest at this point that you just forget making a new app and work on your English skills before joining.

[Limborg]

1. Since when is Hezbollah a terrorist organization?
2. I can change it to former leader, stating that the group disbanded or so...

It's a paramilitary Muslim extremist group. Also: "The United States,[38] France,[39] the Gulf Cooperation Council,[40] United Kingdom,[41] Australia,[42] Canada,[43] the Netherlands,[44][45][46][47] the European Union[48] and Israel classify Hezbollah as a terrorist organization,"

So, does that make it a terrorist group? no.

1)[I] didn't know that.
2) i could remove it, making it former leader. what region/stuff is relevant?. what does it matter that the Syrian government is gone?
3)[I] don't see the whole problem, but alright...

I'll see if i [can] make a new app...

Let's not forget

>Everything in red is an error or a word that should be there but isn't

And if you had actually read the OP, you would know what region is relevant. I would actually suggest at this point that you just forget making a new app and work on your English skills before joining.

I just wanted to start working on a new one, but seeing that you're a grammar nazi, i'm not even going to. And no, the OP doesn't clarify that.

[Constaniana]

It's a paramilitary Muslim extremist group. Also: "The United States,[38] France,[39] the Gulf Cooperation Council,[40] United Kingdom,[41] Australia,[42] Canada,[43] the Netherlands,[44][45][46][47] the European Union[48] and Israel classify Hezbollah as a terrorist organization,"

So, does that make it a terrorist group? no.

Let's not forget

>Everything in red is an error or a word that should be there but isn't

And if you had actually read the OP, you would know what region is relevant. I would actually suggest at this point that you just forget making a new app and work on your English skills before joining.

I just wanted to start working on a new one, but seeing that you're a grammar nazi, i'm not even going to. And no, the OP doesn't clarify that.

"You, the characters, start out in Paris, France, one of the most touristy cities in Europe"

[Neo Arcad]

It's a paramilitary Muslim extremist group. Also: "The United States,[38] France,[39] the Gulf Cooperation Council,[40] United Kingdom,[41] Australia,[42] Canada,[43] the Netherlands,[44][45][46][47] the European Union[48] and Israel classify Hezbollah as a terrorist organization,"

So, does that make it a terrorist group? no.

Let's not forget

>Everything in red is an error or a word that should be there but isn't

And if you had actually read the OP, you would know what region is relevant. I would actually suggest at this point that you just forget making a new app and work on your English skills before joining.

I just wanted to start working on a new one, but seeing that you're a grammar nazi, i'm not even going to. And no, the OP doesn't clarify that.

Expecting you to write at the level obtainable through free public schooling is not "being a grammar Nazi". And for the record, Hezbollah *is* a terrorist group, because they engage in terrorism.

[Constaniana]

So, does that make it a terrorist group? no.



I just wanted to start working on a new one, but seeing that you're a grammar nazi, i'm not even going to. And no, the OP doesn't clarify that.

Expecting you to write at the level obtainable through free public schooling is not "being a grammar Nazi". And for the record, Hezbollah *is* a terrorist group, because they engage in terrorism.

When you have a machine gun in your flag and a guy who was okay with the Holocaust calls you the Group of Satan you know you're probably the baddies.

[Neo Arcad]

Expecting you to write at the level obtainable through free public schooling is not "being a grammar Nazi". And for the record, Hezbollah *is* a terrorist group, because they engage in terrorism.

When you have a machine gun in your flag and a guy who was okay with the Holocaust calls you the Group of Satan you know you're probably the baddies.

Yeah, Hezbollah is pretty much in the same "so horrifying that it's like something out of a bad movie" group as North Korea and the Nazis.

[The BranRiech]

I might wait for others to post before I do.

[Rupudska]

I might wait for others to post before I do.

It's fine. I'll get a post up soonish.

[Malshan]

Well, these last few pages have been rather entertaining. Who knew that the definition of terrorism was open to debate? Also, plagiarism? Really? That sort of shit would get you kicked out of university over here. It's generally NOT OKAY, regardless of where you're presenting it.

[The Drone Empire]

Erg, anybody going to pooost?