The Psuedo-Democratic States of the Doge wrote:The biography essentially defines his characteristics through the common event of "getting up" in the morning. I'm sorry if it looks a bit confusing.
Nono, it's well written, that's not the issue. In fact, it proved to me that your writing skills are good, and not uncertain, as you're relatively unproven here. When i say Biography, I just mean a short shpeel on who he is and where he comes from.