Kassaran wrote:You done goofed up Comstaniana... READ the following closely. I'll help. This has not been editted at all except to help you see what you missed:Erosen had initially been surprised to see the demonic beings, but now they were on the ice, and Erosen, very familiar with moving across the ice after having to deal with the freezing winters in his home-forest, dug in the tips of his toes and forced his nails to grow longer. Getting lower to the ground and cementing his position by planting his callused hands upon the white, he dug in his fingers with their now elongated nails and took a crouched and ready to pounce position. This was an unusual stance for him, but one he'd grown accustomed to using over the years. Moving forward with great speed, he moved to engage the first demon that was skating towards Tristan and the rest of the group. That group included the strange woman whom he assumed had teleported them both to these bewitched caverns.
Aiming for the demon's crutch, he reached out to grab hold of it while in flight, moving fast like an arrow across the chamber.
See it yet?
Aiming for the demon's crutch, he reached out to grab hold of it while in flight, moving fast like an arrow across the chamber.
Let me further help you.Aiming for the demon's crutch, he reached out to grab hold of it while in flight, moving fast like an arrow across the chamber.
Just to make it a little more obvious.Aiming for the demon's crutch
Now, usually I'd not be so annoyed, but I'm truly not trying to be perverse in my way of thinking. On top of that, the "crutch" of which I was referring to was the Demon's Glaive which it was using to help itself glide across the ice...
Alright, alright, sheesh, calm down laddie. You being snarky isn't really helping. I'll edit out my witty bit of exposition on demonic biology. And for future reference, if you're going to correct me on something I'd appreciate if you didn't talk down to me like I'm some illiterate moron.
