The united imperial sector wrote:Name: Alexander brayvus
rank:private
apperence:brown hair blue eyes white skin 225 pounds 5 foot 6
Alexander was in the 35th aslasta world regiment his platoon was thrown into a small town and ordered to hold it to the last man, but within a few hours chaos cultist attacked the town hundreds of them threw themselves at him and his platoon only the platoons two auto cannons managed to stave the assults off. But within hours the men heard an ominus clanking sound of machanical legs and soon chaos defilers appered apon the horizon and forms amgonst them proved to be chaos mariens.The first defiler salvo knocked out the two auto cannos as well as the command squad, Alexander was knocked down by the upper part of his commisars body which is most likely what saved him from the next salvo, a few moments later after he managed to push of the corpse of his commisar off of himself only to be greated by a chargeing khorne bazerker Alexander fired of a one in a million shot manageing to hit the bazerker in a weak spot in his power armor bringing him down just before the heritcs chain axe fell apon him.But the rest of his platoon had not been so lucky he saw hords of cultist and marines butchering his commrades he started runing as fast as his feet could carry him being narrowly missed by bolter, auto,and lazgun fire. Soon enough he found himself runing across a barren waste land following far behind a couple of his platoons survivors.
Occupation: Rifleman
Equipment: Standard lazgun,combat knife and basic carapce armor,and a half empty canteen.
Wounds: A slight bullet graze on his left shoulder.
Is this better?
By military standards he's a fatty. According to the US Military, if you weigh 225 you should be well over 6 feet tall.