Super Hero High (old OOC, search for new one)

[Zernin]

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[Mighty Asgard]

Name: Isaac Fain
Alias:Khaoes
Morality: Evil
Race: Celestio-Human*Classified*
Gender:Male
Age:16*Classified*
Sexuality: Bisexual
Nationality: American*Classified*
Height: 5 feet 10 inches
Weight: 140 pounds
Build: Lean with thin muscles
Hair: Silver
Eyes: Violet(if you want your character to be unique make them have one of the rarest eye-colors in the world)
Costume:He wears a white trench coat, a tight white shirt that presses against his muscles, a white utility belt, and white cargo pants tucked neatly into black combat boots, he also has a white mask(like Robin's).

Denied, overpowered.

Name: Mercy Fain
Alias:Lore
Morality: Evil
Race:Celestio-Human*Classified*
Gender:Female
Age:16*Classified*
Sexuality: *classified*((Hehe, couldn't resist)-Heterosexual
Nationality: American*Classified*
Height: 5 feet 10 inches
Weight: 140 pounds
Build: Lean with thin muscles
Hair: Silver
Eyes: Violet
Costume:She wears a white cloak, a tight white shirt that presses against hermuscles, a white utility belt, and white cargo pants tucked neatly into black combat boots, she also has a white mask(like Robin's).

Denied, overpowered.

[Zernin]

Editting.

[Zernin]

Name: Isaac Fain
Alias:Khaoes
Morality: Evil
Race: Celestio-Human*Classified*
Gender:Male
Age:16*Classified*
Sexuality: Bisexual
Nationality: American*Classified*
Height: 5 feet 10 inches
Weight: 140 pounds
Build: Lean with thin muscles
Hair: Silver
Eyes: Violet(if you want your character to be unique make them have one of the rarest eye-colors in the world)
Costume:He wears a white trench coat, a tight white shirt that presses against his muscles, a white utility belt, and white cargo pants tucked neatly into black combat boots, he also has a white mask(like Robin's).

Denied, overpowered.

Name: Mercy Fain
Alias:Lore
Morality: Evil
Race:Celestio-Human*Classified*
Gender:Female
Age:16*Classified*
Sexuality: *classified*((Hehe, couldn't resist)-Heterosexual
Nationality: American*Classified*
Height: 5 feet 10 inches
Weight: 140 pounds
Build: Lean with thin muscles
Hair: Silver
Eyes: Violet
Costume:She wears a white cloak, a tight white shirt that presses against hermuscles, a white utility belt, and white cargo pants tucked neatly into black combat boots, she also has a white mask(like Robin's).

Denied, overpowered.

How the heck is Isaac OPed?!All he has is normal telekinesis abilities and a enhanced ability acquisition ability that doesn't work. I thought that we were supposed to go in depth with our powers.-Honestly curious.

[Mighty Asgard]

How the heck is Isaac OPed?!All he has is normal telekinesis abilities and a enhanced ability acquisition ability that doesn't work. I thought that we were supposed to go in depth with our powers.

Enhanced power replication alone would be overpowered, basically "anything you can do I can do better."

Also, please limit the powers in the application to what the characters can actually do, not just copy-pasting everything from Superpower Wiki.

[Zernin]

How the heck is Isaac OPed?!All he has is normal telekinesis abilities and a enhanced ability acquisition ability that doesn't work. I thought that we were supposed to go in depth with our powers.

Enhanced power replication alone would be overpowered, basically "anything you can do I can do better."

Also, please limit the powers in the application to what the characters can actually do, not just copy-pasting everything from Superpower Wiki.

Okay, made Enhanced Power Replication just Power Replication.

I only copied/pasted/typed what they are capable of, it is better in list form, going to correct the grammar.

Latent abilities are for abilities that they will get later in the storyline, so I don't forget, it will be in 6 months and if I used a sticky it would just die.

[Zernin]

Edited.

I like having the cause of something being visible, so I made their ability lean more toward "visible telekinesis", or telekinetic energy manipulation.

[Mighty Asgard]

Okay, made Enhanced Power Replication just Power Replication.

I only copied/pasted/typed what they are capable of, it is better in list form, going to correct the grammar.

Latent abilities are for abilities that they will get later in the storyline, so I don't forget, it will be in 6 months and if I used a sticky it would just die.

Their powers are still overpowered. Other than extremely powerful telekinesis, they can also do literally anything anyone else can do.

Then there are the issues of there not being anything called a "celestio-human" and the rather strange notion that a sixteen year old middle-class girl would somehow manage to assemble a powerful superhuman terrorist organization.

[Altruistic Paladins]

Wars may be fought with psychology, but they are won by smartasses.

[Zernin]

Okay, made Enhanced Power Replication just Power Replication.

I only copied/pasted/typed what they are capable of, it is better in list form, going to correct the grammar.

Latent abilities are for abilities that they will get later in the storyline, so I don't forget, it will be in 6 months and if I used a sticky it would just die.

Their powers are still overpowered. Other than extremely powerful telekinesis, they can also do literally anything anyone else can do.

Then there are the issues of there not being anything called a "celestio-human" and the rather strange notion that a sixteen year old middle-class girl would somehow manage to assemble a powerful superhuman terrorist organization.

Taking out the Celestio-humans part.

Tell me which part of the telekinesis is OPed, literally most people have the basic/advanced powers, and some even have master level.

It is a 16 year old middle class girl with super human friends...uhm...clique?JK, her grandfather created it, need to say that!

[Zernin]

■ Binding: to keep object/being from moving.
■ Levitation: to lift an object, e.g. raising a pitcher several inches into the air.
■ Telekinetic Choking: to strangle others, e.g. Like Darth Vader.
■ Telekinetic Maneuver: to alter an object's directional course, e.g. changing what number a dice lands on.
■ Telekinetic Grip: to grasp an object firmly in place, e.g. keeping the tides from washing a friend away.
■ Telekinetic Pull/Push: to pull objects towards the user, e.g. yanking a book off a shelf. Or to push objects away from the user, e.g. sliding a cup across a table.


Advanced level

■ Object Manipulation: to alter an object's inner workings, e.g. unlocking a door.
■ Spatial Sense: to "see" one's surroundings using telekinesis, e.g. sensing a target from a distance.
■ Telekinetic Blast: emit telekinetic energy to make blast that destroys anything in the user's path.
■ Telekinetic Compression: to crush an object, e.g. squeezing a chair into a ball.
■ Telekinetic Destruction: to make an object explode, e.g. blowing up a table.
■ Telekinetically Enhanced Condition: To use telekinesis to enhance the user's condition.
■ Telekinetic Flight: to use telekinesis to fly.

Look at those and tell me what is not possible with telekinesis?"Users can manipulate/move objects with their mind." That is what telekinesis is.

Now, would you just like me to say telekinetic energy manipulation?

[Zernin]

Wars may be fought with psychology, but they are won by smartasses.

I am afraid to click on that because it might be a pic of me failing to be a smartass...or video, video sounds less perverted.

[Mighty Asgard]

Tell me which part of the telekinesis is OPed, literally most people have the basic/advanced powers, and some even have master level.

It is a 16 year old middle class girl with super human friends...uhm...clique?JK, her grandfather created it, need to say that!

Pretty much all the stuff in the "Master" level seems overpowered, with the possible exception of the forcefields.

I think it would be best if you just dropped the Council of Chaos.

[Zernin]

Tell me which part of the telekinesis is OPed, literally most people have the basic/advanced powers, and some even have master level.

It is a 16 year old middle class girl with super human friends...uhm...clique?JK, her grandfather created it, need to say that!

Pretty much all the stuff in the "Master" level seems overpowered, with the possible exception of the forcefields.

I think it would be best if you just dropped the Council of Chaos.

Okay, dropping council of chaos

[Zernin]

Seismic shockwave is essentially releasing a burst of telekinetic force, something every telekinetic is capable of if they are a telekinetic, I mean -every- telekinetic it doesn't matter if they can only lift an ant with their power, they can kill a lot of ants with the hilariously weak burst of telekinetic force.

Enhanced Regeneration: I will take that off of Isaac Fain, along with combustion and seismic shock wave and leave it on Mercy, she -is- supposed to be the more powerful one.

Removed enhanced regeneration off of both, too much trouble.

[Mighty Asgard]

Enhanced Regeneration: I will take that off of Isaac Fain, along with combustion and seismic shock wave and leave it on Mercy, she -is- supposed to be the more powerful one. Enhanced regeneration as in, a lethal wound in a matter of minutes, though by that time they may already be dead.

Stasis field and combustion both seem to require the ability to manipulate individual molecules, which is way overpowered.

[Zernin]

Enhanced Regeneration: I will take that off of Isaac Fain, along with combustion and seismic shock wave and leave it on Mercy, she -is- supposed to be the more powerful one. Enhanced regeneration as in, a lethal wound in a matter of minutes, though by that time they may already be dead.

Stasis field and combustion both seem to require the ability to manipulate individual molecules, which is way overpowered.

Stasis field is essentially either time manipulation, reality manipulation or anything else really. So yes, taking that out.

Combustion is that, but it is basic and not Atomic manipulation, it is -just- essentially making things catch on fire, but yes, I will take that out since with telekinetic energy you can't make things catch on fire...O.O...well you could, but you would have to make startlingly small needles to poke at molecules.

[Zernin]

Enhanced Regeneration: I will take that off of Isaac Fain, along with combustion and seismic shock wave and leave it on Mercy, she -is- supposed to be the more powerful one. Enhanced regeneration as in, a lethal wound in a matter of minutes, though by that time they may already be dead.

Stasis field and combustion both seem to require the ability to manipulate individual molecules, which is way overpowered.

Edited!

[Zernin]

@Might Asgard, you are too serious you need...GLOMPS!*Glomps & Cuddles Asgard.*You will love me, or I will make the city of new york miserable...okay, I am going to do that anyways, just love me, I am speshial.

[Camicon]

@Might Asgard, you are too serious you need...GLOMPS!*Glomps & Cuddles Asgard.*You will love me, or I will make the city of new york miserable...okay, I am going to do that anyways, just love me, I am speshial.

Such a special snowflake.

[Mighty Asgard]

Edited!

Alright. The telekinesis seems fine, but having both it and power replication is still a problem.

[Zernin]

Edited!

Alright. The telekinesis seems fine, but having both it and power replication is still a problem.

I just I should have said Intuitive Aptitude, the ability to gain a superpower my figuring out how it works...I am taking the latent one off Isaac, though since Mercy has Super intelligence I am leaving it on there.

[Mighty Asgard]

I just I should have said Intuitive Aptitude, the ability to gain a superpower my figuring out how it works...I am taking the latent one off Isaac, though since Mercy has Super intelligence I am leaving it on there.

The ability to gain a superpower simply by figuring out how it works is way overpowered on its own.

[Zernin]

@Might Asgard, you are too serious you need...GLOMPS!*Glomps & Cuddles Asgard.*You will love me, or I will make the city of new york miserable...okay, I am going to do that anyways, just love me, I am speshial.

Such a special snowflake.

I know right?Oh and I am not kidding about the New York thing...O.O...in Heroes:The RPG, I declared war on the world with another terrorist organization, and mine, the Council of Chaos, currently is blowing new york to pieces...so...guess what?We have military grade R.P.G.s and vehicles and weapons and gadgets...yay!

[Camicon]

Such a special snowflake.

I know right?Oh and I am not kidding about the New York thing...O.O...in Heroes:The RPG, I declared war on the world with another terrorist organization, and mine, the Council of Chaos, currently is blowing new york to pieces...so...guess what?We have military grade R.P.G.s and vehicles and weapons and gadgets...yay!

So, so special. More special than every other snowflake. A super special snowflake.