by Ala-Guorkar » Fri Oct 21, 2016 4:53 pm
by Bhang Bhang Duc » Sat Oct 22, 2016 12:51 am
Pierconium wrote:I see Funk as an opportunistic manipulator that utilises the means available to him to reach his goals. In other words, a nation after my own heart.
RiderSyl wrote:If an enchantress made it so one raid could bring about world peace, Unibot would ask raiders to just sign a petition instead.
Sedgistan wrote:The SC has just has a spate of really shitty ones recently from Northumbria, his Watermelon fanboy…..
by Hayeri » Sat Oct 22, 2016 1:34 pm
by We Are Not the NSA » Sat Oct 22, 2016 3:09 pm
Ala-Guorkar wrote:The Security Council,
Recognizing the bitter feud between the left-wing community and the Nazi community;
Noting that the region Nazi Europa, the main Nazi force currently protecting The NSIA, is not centered in Nazi beliefs and propaganda;
Recognizing the dozens of Nazi regions that the left-wing community has refounded as hollow trophy regions because of the previously mentioned feud;
Believing that The NSIA should be properly preserved by Nazi forces because of its historical significance;
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by Hayeri » Sat Oct 22, 2016 5:40 pm
We Are Not the NSA wrote:Ala-Guorkar wrote:The Security Council,
Recognizing the bitter feud between the left-wing community and the Nazi community;
Noting that the region Nazi Europa, the main Nazi force currently protecting The NSIA, is not centered in Nazi beliefs and propaganda;
Starting off with some snark: "currently protecting" isn't exactly accurate.
On to an actual criticism: A major problem with this draft is that it isn't entirely consistent. You make it very clear that you do not believe Nazi Europa is a primarily nazi region, yet you refer to them as Nazis throughout the proposal. The word "Nazi" has an extremely negative connotation for most people, which is why the groups you refer to as "Nazi Forces" throughout the proposal don't usually call themselves that. No one is going to approve of a proposal that explicitly states it is trying to help Nazis.Recognizing the dozens of Nazi regions that the left-wing community has refounded as hollow trophy regions because of the previously mentioned feud;
Believing that The NSIA should be properly preserved by Nazi forces because of its historical significance;
This is the sort of claim that requires an explanation to back it up. Why is it historically significant? I'm not saying it isn't, I'm just saying that an explation is necessary.
They're actually using SC207 to invade the region, not refound it.
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