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New Brannack Commendation

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The Barbradian Republic
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New Brannack Commendation

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Kaboomlandia
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Postby Kaboomlandia » Thu Jun 04, 2015 6:15 am

Your proposal is illegal under Rule 3. It doesn't have an operative clause.
In=character, Kaboomlandia is a World Assembly member and abides by its resolutions. If this nation isn't in the WA, it's for practical reasons.
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Postby We Are Not the NSA » Thu Jun 04, 2015 8:06 am

The Barbradian Republic wrote:http://www.nationstates.net/page=UN_proposal/new_proposal=1/council=2
please everyone, help New Brannack.

Can you please post a copy of the proposal in the OP? It makes it much better to tear apart critique.
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Todd McCloud
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Postby Todd McCloud » Thu Jun 04, 2015 2:16 pm

The proposal has been removed from the floor.

In general, submit C&C drafts to the floor (this forum) prior to submitting it officially. There are many here who are skilled / versed in rules for Security Council Proposals, including the one(s) your proposal violated, and many here who can polish your proposal up and make it sound better. Give it some time before submitting it.
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Postby Bears Armed » Fri Jun 05, 2015 9:56 am

Commendations proposed by a member of the region that they target rarely gather much support...
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Postby Caracasus » Thu Jun 11, 2015 1:03 pm

Well, that's weird - I clicked the link above and it came up with "Your proposal has been submitted".
As an editor I seam to spend an awful lot of thyme going threw issues and checking that they're no oblivious errars. Its a tough job but someone's got too do it!



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Todd McCloud
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Postby Todd McCloud » Thu Jun 11, 2015 2:53 pm

Indeed. He should've copied this url. The one he copied was just after he submitted his proposal, as it contains the new_proposal=1 tag.
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Postby Caracasus » Thu Jun 11, 2015 11:37 pm

Yeah, for a moment I thought someone had gotten rather cleaver with the URL links and I'd accidentally submitted a resolution. That'd have been a pain in the arse.
As an editor I seam to spend an awful lot of thyme going threw issues and checking that they're no oblivious errars. Its a tough job but someone's got too do it!



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