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Condemn The Black Riders[Draft]

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Condemn The Black Riders[Draft]

Postby Saxe-Wittenburg » Mon Feb 09, 2015 6:59 pm

Observing that this region is a haven for tyranny which threatens all free regions of the world with it's aggressive practices.

Alarmed by the aggressiveness of this rouge region, and the current populations both within the Black Riders and their puppet States.

Noting that the majority of regions which have nations in the WA are unprepared to deal with a coordinated assault by the black Riders therefore action by the WA to impede this threat is necessary.

Appalled by the disregard the Black Riders display towards nations exhibiting their right for self determination as enshrined in multiple WA resolutions.

Disgusted by the terrorist actions towards peaceful nations, and it’s blatant disregard for the principals of democracy.

Noting that this rouge region's only actions have been to overthrow regional governments, and institute puppet governments with recent examples of [region=Checkmate],[region=Ireland],[region=South Saint Paul],[region=Earth History],[region=Realm of Umbra], and the [region=United Nations of the World].

Observing that the WA must take action or more nations and regions shall defect to the Black Riders which undermines the basic structure of the WA. This will force all regions to become fortresses to maintain their independence which creates a atmosphere which is contrary to the principals of the WA.

Declaring that we of the Security Council herby condemn the Black Riders for their actions against international peace and security.
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Postby Ynys Prydain » Mon Feb 09, 2015 7:23 pm

1. They are a black region, not a rouge region. Unless you meant rogue, in which case they are also that.

2. Democracy doesn't go to school and therefore doesn't have principals. Principles, maybe.

3. They are already condemned.

4. This really isn't written very well.
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Postby We Are Not the NSA » Mon Feb 09, 2015 7:37 pm

Saxe-Wittenburg wrote:Observing that this region is a haven for tyranny which threatens all free regions of the world with it's aggressive practices.

Not all regions, just small, founderless, unpassworded regions with executive delegate powers.

Alarmed by the aggressiveness of this rouge region, and the current populations both within the Black Riders and their puppet States.

Soooooo... You want to condemn TBR for the number of nations residing in it?

Noting that the majority of regions which have nations in the WA are unprepared to deal with a coordinated assault by the black Riders therefore action by the WA to impede this threat is necessary.

How is it our fault that other regions are unprepared? Also, the WA can't actually do anything other than say "Bad raiders!" and shake their fist at us.

Appalled by the disregard the Black Riders display towards nations exhibiting their right for self determination as enshrined in multiple WA resolutions.

Our definitions of "self determination" must be different. Also, which resolutions are you referring to.

Disgusted by the terrorist actions towards peaceful nations, and it’s blatant disregard for the principals of democracy.

First off, terrorist actions against nations? That is maybe the worst comparison ever. We are nothing like terrorists. Our actions are more like those of an invading army. At the very first the word "nation" needs to be replaced by "region".

Noting that this rouge region's only actions have been to overthrow regional governments, and institute puppet governments with recent examples of [region=Checkmate],[region=Ireland],[region=South Saint Paul],[region=Earth History],[region=Realm of Umbra], and the [region=United Nations of the World].

False. We assisted in the liberation of Nazi Europe. Next, "puppet governments" imply we stay, and you are referring to tag raids, which is also false. Also, why are these regions at all noteworthy, they were all tag raided. (OOC: Are you really trying to liberate a region that was only tag raided?) Lastly, you should probably get those links fixed.

Observing that the WA must take action or more nations and regions shall defect to the Black Riders which undermines the basic structure of the WA. This will force all regions to become fortresses to maintain their independence which creates a atmosphere which is contrary to the principals of the WA.

Again, the WA can't actually do anything. This entire paragraph should be changed. Also, the WA would barely exist if it wasn't for us.

Declaring that we of the Security Council herby condemn the Black Riders for their actions against international peace and security.

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Postby Consular » Mon Feb 09, 2015 7:40 pm

While your enthusiasm is admirable, I don't think your draft as it is has enough details to be seriously considered by most Delegates. Have a look at the last and current condemnation of TBR to see the kind of quality needed: https://www.nationstates.net/page=WA_pa ... /start=126

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Postby Redsward » Mon Feb 09, 2015 7:45 pm

Ynys Prydain wrote:1. They are a black region, not a rouge region. Unless you meant rogue, in which case they are also that.

2. Democracy doesn't go to school and therefore doesn't have principals. Principles, maybe.

3. They are already condemned.

4. This really isn't written very well.


1 and 2. Good grammar is a good way to make your resolution convincing, Saxe-Wittenburg.

3. Regions and nations can be commended or condemned multiple times, but I think multiple condemnations are unnecessary, especially in the case of TBR.

4. TOTALLY TRUE.
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Postby Normlpeople » Mon Feb 09, 2015 8:53 pm

Clover shook her head "Given your claims in the 'Liberate Checkmate' proposal, in which you claim the Riders are occupying a region with an active founder, which is futile in most cases, I don't believe you understand the raiding side. The claims here are either mistakes or lies. I would suggest abandoning this.

I'll support it though, if the Riders want another shiny badge, I'll help em in that goal."
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Postby Corvus Corax » Tue Feb 10, 2015 1:53 am

This one is so ridiculous and hilarious that I feel obliged to give full and unconditional support for this one. :lol:

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Postby Pergamon » Tue Feb 10, 2015 4:03 pm

I wonder how many of these threads will pop up over and over again. They are so pointless.
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Postby Kaboomlandia » Mon Feb 23, 2015 8:22 pm

Already condemned. Forget it.
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Postby Jean Pierre Trudeau » Mon Feb 23, 2015 10:39 pm

Kaboomlandia wrote:Already condemned. Forget it.


What the hell difference does that make? Also why did you feel the need to dredge this one up?
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Postby Greater Nevadian Empire » Mon Feb 23, 2015 10:43 pm

A resolution was recently voted against to condemn my region's allies, The New Inquisition. Thankfully, that did not pass. The Black Riders are already condemned, and they conquered the Atheist Empire, which they still are in control of as far as I know.
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Postby New Salvo » Sat Mar 21, 2015 5:25 pm

utterly rediculos


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