Uri Comradev a Brief Biogoraphy (comments welcome)

[Proloteriat]

Oftopic: Is this in the right forum? Uri Comradev is president of Proloteriat so I thought I should put it here. Is that okay?

[Freemania]

Probably, yes.

[Proloteriat]

Probably, yes.

Okay then I'll start. Sorry this is my first factbook related thing on NS as Ive goten bored of NSG and am now in an RP with Comradev so Ive decided to build up the character.

[Proloteriat]

Bear in mind it may take a while for me to post the first part of the story I'm writing it on another tab.

[Proloteriat]

It is very hard to describe a man such as Uri Comradev it is most hard to know where to begin. I think I shall begin with some political background. The Federation of Proloteriat was a corrupt nation lacking a decent democratic structure barely with a state run education system and the police were so corrupt that no one realy belived in them. The Comradev family were mafia rejects that had spent most of their money on paying a loan shark and were now living in a small shack in the countryside. Alexi Comradev and Anastasia Comradev were poor, familyless and connectionless on the whole they were doing badly not to mention the fact that Anastasia was pregnent. But when Uri was born the family was at least happy of their son who they named Uri in memory of Alexi's father.

As a boy at school Uri was never truly popular. But' he was never bullied as no one trusted him not to just beat the living daylights out of them. Another reason was his popular money making scheme which was to sneak into the school at night take files out of the reports for 'bad' childeren and burn them. If anyone reported him they would be in big trouble.

He learnt from a young age how to find a weakness in everything and logic became the way he worked. He was not the most academicaly clever person but he knew how to get past prety much anything' and if he couldn't get passed it he would destroy it. As expected of a schoolchild in his early teens he was rebelious but he couldn't ever say he was a communist at this time. On the contrary he thought he could return to Bangor City (the place where his parents had lived by the law of mob) and take out some family revenge on old enemies. He by now had massed thousands in stolen goods and from his buisness in destroying files. But at the age of sixteen it changed forever for him when his parents both died in a car crash.

He had spent all of the money he had on giving them a nice funeral and on keeping himself fed. But now he couldn't be bothered doing anything to get money. He had given up and eventualy resorted to begging on the streets any former sympathy and respect he had had gone. He occasionaly got enough to eat but with the country itself starting to starve and collapse less and less people were being charitable. He had been close to his family and now he didn't have an identity without them. During desperate times he had to resort to desperate measures.

He commited his first murder at this time. It was a drunk pimp who's name has long been forgoten. Uri remembered his mother's friend knowing him prehaps she was one of his besides he just needed food and to get food he needed money. The man was walking when Uri saw him and recognised him. Funny a man like this living out in the country he thought. The pimp entered a small cottage and Uri pulled out his knife. Just as the man was taking out his keys Uri went behind him and slit his throat. He grabbed the keys and hid the body it took less than five minutes to raid the house of money and valuables and he managed to get a fair bit. With that money he decided to move to what is now Yuzargrad but at the time was called Vernangeport or better known by the entire country as Sinport.

This is where a man like Uri Comradev got along well. He had adapted enough and if there was compassion in him it had gone now. He had become what he had wanted to be a strong mafia member. He proved himself as a capable sailor too Proloteriat being an island its best to smugle illegal goods by sea and he had done many smuging trips in his day; and he was still only 18. He had also earned the ability to see through people and concentrate absolutely on one thing at a time. He would have carried on this way had it not been for the revolution. As there had been so much civil unrest the police and the mafia worked together to keep it all in order and stop any major revolutionaries getting power such as Nikolai Shoshgin.

Shoshgin was old when he decided something must be done with the country and the corruption had to be dealt with. He had run for president many times and was very popular but it was imposible to get in power with the corruption involved with vote rigging and so forth. There was only one solution and that was "Revolution comrades if these people aren't willing to let us have our say we will make it our duty to have our say." This speech was very famous and Uri was asigned to deal with "Mr Bowling Ball" as he was comonly known because of his birthmarks.

Uri had easily made his way into his apartament ready to strike. But as Shoshgin entered he could tell that someone had broken in hence got himself into a fighting position. Uri went for broke and pulled out a revolver and took aim. But, he underestimated Shoshgin's kick that got the gun on the floor and another kick right where it hurts. Then Shoshgin took out his hidden knife.

"I may be old comrade but I know a few tricks. I can tell you have had a troubled background, by the looks of you you care only for money. So many people ruined by the system."

Uri didn't know why but he cried at that, he said "But you're a dirty commie scum who'll just stop any freedom, I have to kill you."

"You actually believe all that... You're good but come on, do you see any freedom here do you?" Shoshgin had a point. "Look at you the only freedom you have is freedom to kill and be killed. With me you will have freedom from the oppressors."

Uri was openly wailing now. He realised it 'the oppressors' that had destroyed his family and many of his friends... It was this that had turned him into a physcopathic killing machine...

"There there. We'll make it better together." Said Shoshgin comforting him.

During the initial revolution Uri was like a guard dog to Shoshgin, completely at his side at all times. After the revolution there was a power struggle among the revolutionaries. Shosgin's communists became mortal enemies of the National Socialists, led by a man called Victor. Victor had no surname, known as either Leader by the facists or as Victor by everyone else.

The civil war was cold and brutal just like Uri. He was an infiltraitor for the communists and constantly found ways in. But as the Facists were collapseing he began to lead actual outright military attacks. He was the most respected general in the Peoples Army. He charged in with the men and rarely left the front line. When they hit Workergrad Uri knew it was over and helped raise the red flag over the parliament buildings. It was now the Peoples Republic of Proloteriat.

Over the next years Nikolai Shoshgin became a well respected man in Proloterian politics and won the election after he had won the war. Shoshgin's reforms were gradual and he soon joined the USSCR to gain support for a developing country. He had built its economy back up and founded a socialist constitution. He made sure it cared for law and order, healthcare, eduacation and welfare. It worked well for the people.

He had also made sure that Proloteriat would not get corrupted hence built it around a democratic system that had an election every four years. It was during this election that Uri really lost it. The main candidate against Shoshgin was called Richard Williams of the Capitalist Reform (now Freedom First) party. He was walking home from a speech when Uri ambushed him and would have killed him hadn't it been for Saskia Zinatawehowe. She managed to pull Uri off Williams who instantly ran away. Saskia then just grabed Uri by the coller and said "You fool we need democoracy in this system if people want capitalism they'll get it."

Uri knew she had a point so he invited her over for a drink at his house. Shoshgin was waiting for him as he entered the appartment with her. "Nikolai Shoshgin, nice to meet you." he introduced himself. They then had a long conversation about politics and Saskia explained what had happened.

Shoshgin was not happy at all with this. "Uri look at you I know he was a capitalist but you can't force socialism on people." Uri bowed his head he wouldn't dare go against Shoshgin. "Especialy when I want you to take over the party." Uri was shocked at this he thought that being classed as an insane psycho by most communist party officials meant that he was unfit for politics. "You seem shocked Uri... The way you're brain works is wired in a way that means you can concentrate on any situation and if you are running a country I belive you'll do it well." Uri gulped and nodded he had nothing else to say realy.

Over the next fiew months he and Saskia met up more and more often and soon became good friends. After a year or so she was what was keeping him from going back into complete madness. By now, he hadn't killed in a long time ever since Shoshgin had won the civil war. Although he was getting into his mid thirties he thought it would be nice to settle down with her. And soon they were married. By then it had became apparent that Shoshgin was getting old. Having spent two terms in office he decided to retire. Leaving Uri in charge of the next elections for the Communist party.

The party was popular and that is how he gained his first power. He casualy strolled everywhere in his old military unifrom without bodyguards. "Why have them when the people love me and when I can defend myself?" Was his only explanation. Although not completely sane by any standards he had managed to build up the economy without doing too much environmental or social damage. He also gained power in the region of the USSCR. He is now domestic advisor of Yuzar and is in his fourth term of office (there are no term limits in Proloteriat) as President of the nation he is very popular and respected. (none of his elections are rigged)

He owes much to Shoshgin and to Saskia who keep him together, just about. He hopes to be elected as president for many years and to retire from politics at a healthy old age having served the country proudly. He is definately considered a hero in Proloteriat and a hero of Yuzar being the one that built up the nation from a fair country into a major power in Yuzarian politics and a decent economy. He is gratefull for all those who support him and hopes to keep the respect of his country.

[Proloteriat]

Thank you for reading.

[Proloteriat]

Sorry if it was badly writen but Ive edited it now. I just wanted to get a first draft down sorry for that its better now... Hopefully.

[Pesda]

Is he based on you, by any chance?

[Proloteriat]

Is he based on you, by any chance?

Ah Pesda there are parts of him based on me (although very exagerated) some on Stalin of course and little bits of a lot of people I know. You aren't inclueded it wouldn't work well as a character. (Did you actualy read the thing?)

[Yisrae1]

this is a awesome bio comrade ! I love it!

[Syleru]

Not bad.

[Proloteriat]

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Not bad.

Thanks.

[Proloteriat]

this is a awesome bio comrade ! I love it!

Thanks.

[Pesda]

Is he based on you, by any chance?

Ah Pesda there are parts of him based on me (although very exagerated) some on Stalin of course and little bits of a lot of people I know. You aren't inclueded it wouldn't work well as a character. (Did you actualy read the thing?)

I don't have a bitter commie personality. I did read the whole thing.

[Proloteriat]

Ah Pesda there are parts of him based on me (although very exagerated) some on Stalin of course and little bits of a lot of people I know. You aren't inclueded it wouldn't work well as a character. (Did you actualy read the thing?)

I don't have a bitter commie personality. I did read the whole thing.

Comradev is not always a commie by the way did you like the story? You'r comments arent realy opinions I'd like to see what you think.

[Proloteriat]

I don't have a bitter commie personality. I did read the whole thing.

Comradev is not always a commie by the way did you like the story? You'r comments arent realy opinions I'd like to see what you think.

If you don't like it please flame it or state that you don't like it I'd like an honest opinion but I'd like an opinion.

[Pesda]

Comradev is not always a commie by the way did you like the story? You'r comments arent realy opinions I'd like to see what you think.

If you don't like it please flame it or state that you don't like it I'd like an honest opinion but I'd like an opinion.

Yes, it's good. I enjoyed it.

[Proloteriat]

If you don't like it please flame it or state that you don't like it I'd like an honest opinion but I'd like an opinion.

Yes, it's good. I enjoyed it.

Thanks.

[Flavionia]

Nice, I enjoyed it.

[Sudmara]

Truly amazing, apart from the stereotype romance XD but it was really amazing I loved it also I would like to know was that Pimp a real scumbag?

[Kazinstan]

Truly amazing, apart from the stereotype romance XD but it was really amazing I loved it also I would like to know was that Pimp a real scumbag?

That is my alt account I thought I come and say well done on my Communist (I am in real life) Party account

[Athenian France]

Very creative