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by Kannap » Mon Jun 30, 2014 4:35 pm
Luna Amore wrote:Please remember to attend the ritualistic burning of Kannap for heresy
by Nazi Flower Power » Mon Jun 30, 2014 8:35 pm
Kannap wrote:So, when it comes time to judge these, I will assume that can start tomorrow. I'll probably hold off and start reading on Thursday. Sorry for any inconvenience, I have a visitation to be at tomorrow and a funeral to be at on Wednesday.
by The Dogma States » Mon Jun 30, 2014 10:52 pm
by Forsher » Mon Jun 30, 2014 11:18 pm
by Nazi Flower Power » Tue Jul 01, 2014 1:25 am
by Respubliko de Libereco » Thu Jul 03, 2014 1:50 pm
by Nazi Flower Power » Fri Jul 04, 2014 1:12 am
Respubliko de Libereco wrote:Can't wait to find out whether I did slightly worse or significantly worse than last contest.
by Kannap » Fri Jul 04, 2014 10:48 am
Nazi Flower Power wrote:Respubliko de Libereco wrote:Can't wait to find out whether I did slightly worse or significantly worse than last contest.
You're always so hard on yourself.
Anyway, I think the judges just need a bit of time to deliberate. Kannap posted to say what's up with them, and I TG'ed the other two earlier.
Luna Amore wrote:Please remember to attend the ritualistic burning of Kannap for heresy
by Nazi Flower Power » Fri Jul 04, 2014 12:08 pm
Kannap wrote:Nazi Flower Power wrote:
You're always so hard on yourself.
Anyway, I think the judges just need a bit of time to deliberate. Kannap posted to say what's up with them, and I TG'ed the other two earlier.
Sorry I didn't get around to it yesterday. I'll probably start on Monday. With the funeral and all earlier this week and Fourth of July festivities today and tomorrow and church stuff on Sunday, I've been busy.
by Conserative Morality » Fri Jul 04, 2014 2:00 pm
The plantation was pathetically decadent.
Despite this, he left no trace that he had left. It was the perfect crime, utterly unsolvable. Thirty-two seconds after the door shattered, a solitary white van drove off into the sable night.
"Ow!" he cried as he bounced off the third step from the top, waves of pain surging up his leg as he somehow flipped around and landed on his head.
"Ack!" he screamed whilst his arm cracked on the seventh step, sending him into a reeling spin down the long staircase. All the way down he screamed, spinning dizzily into the arms of a third kidnapper, who knocked him unconscious
In fact, he is Death himself. I don’t know how I know this, but I do.
by Kannap » Fri Jul 04, 2014 3:44 pm
Luna Amore wrote:Please remember to attend the ritualistic burning of Kannap for heresy
by Nazi Flower Power » Fri Jul 04, 2014 4:39 pm
Conserative Morality wrote:The first person narration seemed really unnecessary, considering how late, how peripheral, and how inconsequential to the events of the story the narrator is. A lot of the dialogue was rather stilted.
by Respubliko de Libereco » Fri Jul 04, 2014 4:55 pm
Conserative Morality wrote:The plantation was pathetically decadent.
Technically correct? But using decadent to portray decline from neglect is... an unusual use of the term, at least in my experience.
by Conserative Morality » Fri Jul 04, 2014 5:21 pm
Respubliko de Libereco wrote:In NFP's defence, I was glad to see someone other than me using "decadent" in a negative sense. Every time I see a restaurant menu talking about "decadent chocolate cake" or something like that, it bothers me.
by Respubliko de Libereco » Fri Jul 04, 2014 5:36 pm
Conserative Morality wrote:Respubliko de Libereco wrote:In NFP's defence, I was glad to see someone other than me using "decadent" in a negative sense. Every time I see a restaurant menu talking about "decadent chocolate cake" or something like that, it bothers me.
I usually hear decadent in relation to moral decline and such. The decadence of the Manchu Court, the decadent nature of Western society, etc etc.
by The Dogma States » Fri Jul 04, 2014 7:05 pm
The Dogma States wrote:Last minute Entry!
This basically an intro story to a story i'm getting ready to type (Not posted online yet), hope it's ok.Void
by Nazi Flower Power » Fri Jul 04, 2014 8:45 pm
The Dogma States wrote:The Dogma States wrote:Last minute Entry!
This basically an intro story to a story i'm getting ready to type (Not posted online yet), hope it's ok.Void
I'm Gonna have to void my entry guys, this is not the story i wrote for this contest.
I think i had 2 word documents open and i accidentally copy and pasted the wrong one. The other story was about 2 friends fighting and going their separate ways and yada yada, not page 1 of some love story..
by The New World Oceania » Fri Jul 04, 2014 10:43 pm
Respubliko de Libereco wrote:Conserative Morality wrote:I usually hear decadent in relation to moral decline and such. The decadence of the Manchu Court, the decadent nature of Western society, etc etc.
That is indeed the conventional meaning, but any usage that preserves the "decline/decay" bit of the meaning is, in my opinion, preferable to the restaurant meaning, which seems to be "luxurious".
I mean, no one advertises cake as "glutinous" or "grossly self-indulgent", so it really bothers me that "decadent" is so common.
by The New World Oceania » Sat Jul 05, 2014 10:09 am
by Kannap » Sat Jul 05, 2014 10:57 am
Luna Amore wrote:Please remember to attend the ritualistic burning of Kannap for heresy
by Nazi Flower Power » Sat Jul 05, 2014 4:09 pm
The New World Oceania wrote:razor blade, $10; cell phone repair, $150; hospital bill, $8,000; flat characters romanticizing suicide: priceless
Creativity: -5/15
Brownie points for trying. Five off for lack of relatability. Six more off for an unoriginal conflict written not-so-engagingly.
Overall Score: 23/100
by Super-Llamaland » Thu Jul 10, 2014 11:13 pm
by Nazi Flower Power » Fri Jul 11, 2014 1:26 am
Super-Llamaland wrote:Is this dead?
by Conserative Morality » Fri Jul 11, 2014 2:01 am
Nazi Flower Power wrote:The judges said they were working on it last time I heard from any of them. It has been a couple of days since then, though, so I am not sure if they got distracted or what.
by Nazi Flower Power » Fri Jul 11, 2014 2:23 am
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