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Australian rePublic
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Issue Idea: Hungry for Business

Postby Australian rePublic » Mon Jul 28, 2014 1:50 am

First Draft
Title: Hungry for business

Description: A large supermarket known as the Wool has expanded beyond its original role as a supermarket and has expanded into green groceries, insurance, delicatessen, butcher, pharmacy, liquor shops and is considering expanding into real estate, however, the expansion is causing much controversy, stating that the Wool is killing small business. Many small business owners are up in arms protesting the further expansion of the Wool

Validity: Above Average or higher economy only

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[option]"The Wool is eating up my businesses" states small business owner @@RANDOMNAME@@ "First I was a general store, then the Wool opened up and took our business, so then we opened a green grocer, but the Wool entered that industry, and took our business, so then we got a butcher shop, but the Wool took that away from us now. Enough is enough! The Wool needs to be stopped! Very soon, they will take all of our small business, and there will be a monopoly. Small business needs justice in @@NAME@@
[effect]Large companies are stopped before they become too large
[stats]Don't know

[option]"This is ridiculous" states The Wool CEO, @@RANDOMNAME@@, "We are not deliberately out to destroy small businesses, and the conspiracy theory about us becoming a monopoly is silly. The fact that we are expanding our business provides more employment in the nation, and should be commended, not condemned. We have put in a lot of hard work into our company, so why should we not be allowed to expand it?"
[effect]Large Companies constantly swallow up small business and the government doesn't try to stop them
[stats]Not sure

[option]"This is what happens when you allow business into our nation" protests a random citizen @@RANDOMNAME@@ holding up a sign with a hammer and sickle "Everyone ends up arguing with each other, and companies end up sucking every last @@CURRENCY@@ out of the average @@DOMINAN@@. The government should sell everything and distribute everything
[effect]The nation has banned business
[stats] Nation becomes more socialist
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Postby Korouse » Mon Jul 28, 2014 1:54 am

Looks good, now all you need are the stats.
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Postby Luna Amore » Mon Jul 28, 2014 1:54 am

This draft is too similar to an existing issue: #330: Supermarkets Gobbling Up All The Customers?

Korouse wrote:Looks good, now all you need are the stats.

I recommend issue authors not worry too much about stats.
Last edited by Luna Amore on Mon Jul 28, 2014 1:56 am, edited 2 times in total.

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Postby Australian rePublic » Mon Jul 28, 2014 5:35 am

Luna Amore wrote:This draft is too similar to an existing issue: #330: Supermarkets Gobbling Up All The Customers?

Korouse wrote:Looks good, now all you need are the stats.

I recommend issue authors not worry too much about stats.

Oh, thanks
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