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by Rightport » Fri Jan 04, 2013 12:08 pm
by Abacathea » Fri Jan 04, 2013 12:31 pm
Eireann Fae wrote:A deep blush can be seen growing on Rowan's pale cheeks as the drafting Ambassador showers her with flattery. Though she has now spent a sixth of her short life in the Assembly and made, to her mind, many a worthy contribution to the GA, so rarely has she been so thoroughly flattered. Not that she intends to complain, of course.After taking a few moments to gather her thoughts, and her breath, the girl rises, smiling broadly at Ambassador Chombers. "You are very kind, Ambassador, and may I say that I am equally pleased with your willingness to heed our concerns. Too many times have the serpents in this Festering Snakepit clung blindly to their own beliefs, unwilling to take even the sagest of advice. I thank you for your wisdom in allowing such changes to be made to your resolution, and while we are pleased with your acceptance of our ideals thus far, we must ask that you come just a little farther. You have taken care of our major concerns rather well, but there are still some issues that we feel need to be addressed. Starting with the first clause." The girl points to the relevant line on the document.(i) Nations to identify key area's within their borders which could facilitate installations with the least possible environmental disturbance.
"After careful consideration, the Emissary and I believe we have come to a different wording that all of us may find more palatable. How about Nations intending to construct R.E.I.s to identify suitable areas within their borders which could facilitate installations with the least possible environmental disturbance. We mentioned before our concern regarding forcing nations to conduct the surveys regardless of the nation's ability or intention to build R.E.I.s. As I have just worded the clause, only those nations looking to build the installations need perform the surveys, which I believe was your true intent all along."
The girl takes a moment to write a quick note, speaking as she does so. "We also still have minor quibbles with the second clause. I hope you understand, these two clauses were our main points of opposition regarding your otherwise very well-written and well-intentioned legislation. As I said before, you have come a long way towards addressing our concerns, and I believe we can work together to eliminate those concerns entirely. Here." Rowan hands over a slip of paper with a revised Clause II.Having identified suitable sites within their borders, nations requiring new energy installations must build R.E.I.s at the designated sites, provided the nation is in an economically viable position to do so, or must wait to begin construction until they do meet the requirements.
"The wording here is not perfect, but we believe it to be preferable to what you have in your revised draft. This is mostly a minor rewording and fixing some grammatical errors, but it would be enough to solidify our support for your proposal. The key point is that the nations must intend to build new energy installations to begin with - we believe the forced construction of such installations when they are not needed to be most undesirable. We do believe that this revised clause would still maintain the spirit and intent of your laudable goals, but do so in a way that is least intrusive to Member Nations."
"In the following clause, you seem to have retained a superfluous adjective." The girl points to the the word 'on' in the phrase 'facilities on to ensure'. "That may have been my fault - my black pen is running low on ink, and the strike-through may have faded on that word... Another minor grammatical error is in Clause IV, where you used the contracted form of 'it is'1 instead of possessive 'its' - simply remove the apostrophe, please. The same minor error can be found in the final paragraph of the draft."
"I do apologise for lambasting you with more changes like this, Ambassador, and I must thank you again for your open mind and happy heart in accepting our recommendations thus far. There is just one final change that we would like to see made, though it is not a deal-breaker by any means. In the sixth active clause, you mention that business ought to reach for a goal of '50-100% within their lifespan'. While the context makes your intention obvious, we feel that what they are reaching for should be explicitly laid out. Furthermore, we generally prefer to avoid the use of percentages in resolutions, and think the use of such is not even required here. Perhaps the end of the clause in question could read 'encouraging them to ultimately reach a target of total reliance on renewable energy.' Note that we have omitted 'in their lifetimes', because businesses have an indeterminate lifespan. They could last months, or they could go on for centuries."
"Thank you for your time." The redness in her cheeks never quite went away, and as Rowan takes her seat, she makes a rather obvious attempt at hiding her blushing face behind a glass of water, still smiling at the Ambassador who treated her with more kindness than most others in the Snakepit had dared to do. In her memory, only the Queleshian, Intellectual Artisan, and Mesogirian Ambassadors had been so kind to her. Well, and Sir Eduard, but that was a completely different story...
1 The more clever readers will note that Rowan never uses contractions, even when pointing one out as a grammatical flaw ;-)
by Abacathea » Fri Jan 04, 2013 12:32 pm
Rightport wrote:The Government of Rightport is most likely to support this
by Eireann Fae » Fri Jan 04, 2013 3:10 pm
by Araraukar » Fri Jan 04, 2013 4:38 pm
Abacathea wrote:Aiming to avert international power and fuel crisis by ensuring nations have access to self sustaining power applications within their borders, and to ensure any and all businesses whom make environmental impacts to utilize natural resources for power requirements.
Abacathea wrote:Encouraging Nations who have the provisions to do so, to build as many forms of R.E.I's as practical in order to ensure maximum potential for consistent environmental supply to the grid
Abacathea wrote:(i) Nations who do not already possess R.E.I's to identify keyarea'sareas within their borders which could facilitate installations with the least possible environmental disturbance.
Abacathea wrote:(ii) Having identified suitable sites within their borders, nations requiring new energy installations must build R.E.I.s at the designated sites, provided the nation is in an economically viable position to do so, or must wait to begin construction until they do meet the requirements.
Abacathea wrote:(iii) Nations to establish a taskforce or government body tasked with monitoring and maintaining these facilities to ensure both safe supply and output of these facilities.
Abacathea wrote:(vi) Subject to section (v) nations are to require businesses which make negative environmental impact either directly by nature of their business or indirectly through supply or receipt of their goods to undertake a commitment to utilizing renewable energy within their business while encouraging them to ultimately reach a target of total reliance on renewable energy.
Abacathea wrote:Further encourages nations who are capable of constructing and producing a surplus of renewable energy not only to do so, but to effect through sale, trade or the spirit of goodwill the supply of renewable energy or it's technology to nations unable to do so without assistance.
Apologies for absences, non-COVID health issues leave me with very little energy at times.Giovenith wrote:And sorry hun, if you were looking for a forum site where nobody argued, you've come to wrong one.
by Abacathea » Fri Jan 04, 2013 4:59 pm
No offence, but how is a government taskforce supposed to make sure that sun shines, wind blows, and that there are no droughts?
Abacathea wrote:
(vi) Subject to section (v) nations are to require businesses which make negative environmental impact either directly by nature of their business or indirectly through supply or receipt of their goods to undertake a commitment to utilizing renewable energy within their business while encouraging them to ultimately reach a target of total reliance on renewable energy.
I basically get what you mean with this, but is there any other way to put it? Something on the lines of nations urging/encouraging businesses to minimize their environmental impact. (If you must keep this part at all.)
This bit doesn't mention anything about prices, unlike the bit addressed to the individual users. I'm not sure if you even should have this bit here, as it seems a bit disjointed from the rest and I doubt you can put proper regulations for international trade of renewable energy within the space of this one proposal.
by Araraukar » Fri Jan 04, 2013 5:18 pm
Abacathea wrote:Encouraging Nations who have the provisions to do so, to build as many forms of R.E.I's as practical in order to ensure maximum potential for consistent environmental supply to the grid
Apologies for absences, non-COVID health issues leave me with very little energy at times.Giovenith wrote:And sorry hun, if you were looking for a forum site where nobody argued, you've come to wrong one.
by Abacathea » Fri Jan 04, 2013 5:24 pm
Araraukar wrote:Abacathea wrote:Encouraging Nations who have the provisions to do so, to build as many forms of R.E.I's as practical in order to ensure maximum potential for consistent environmental supply to the grid
We think the word "energy" has escaped into the wild after the word "environmental". (Or perhaps "consistent supply of environmental energy" would say it better?)
All suggestions we make to the draft are only suggestions, the Abacathean delegate can always ignore them without feeling the need to apologize or explain themselves to us. We're only hoping to help.
by Bears Armed » Sat Jan 05, 2013 6:02 am
Araraukar wrote:Abacathea wrote:(iii) Nations to establish a taskforce or government body tasked with monitoring and maintaining these facilities to ensure both safe supply and output of these facilities.
No offence, but how is a government taskforce supposed to make sure that sun shines, wind blows, and that there are no droughts?
by Eireann Fae » Sat Jan 05, 2013 11:57 am
by Abacathea » Sat Jan 05, 2013 1:51 pm
by Abacathea » Sat Jan 05, 2013 2:29 pm
by Araraukar » Sat Jan 05, 2013 6:59 pm
Abacathea wrote:(iii) Nations to establish a taskforce or government body tasked with monitoring and maintaining these facilities to ensure both safe supply and output of these facilities.
(iii) "Nations to establish a taskforce or government body tasked with monitoring and maintaining these facilities to ensure both their safety and steady output (of power/electricity).
Apologies for absences, non-COVID health issues leave me with very little energy at times.Giovenith wrote:And sorry hun, if you were looking for a forum site where nobody argued, you've come to wrong one.
by Abacathea » Sat Jan 05, 2013 7:07 pm
Araraukar wrote:Abacathea wrote:(iii) Nations to establish a taskforce or government body tasked with monitoring and maintaining these facilities to ensure both safe supply and output of these facilities.
This still stands unchanged. Since supply can be uncertain and beyond control of the government (we're infinitely jealous to such delegates whose people can control weather), why not drop the supply bit, and instead make certain you're talking about the facilities' safety - perhaps word it as(iii) "Nations to establish a taskforce or government body tasked with monitoring and maintaining these facilities to ensure both their safety and steady output (of power/electricity).
The double mention of "these facilities" seemed a bit clumsy, hence I dropped it from the suggestion, but if you don't want to, it could read "to ensure both the safety and steady output (of power/electricity) of these facilities".
Mention of power or electricity is in parentheses, since it's not 100% needed, but just looks better to me personally.
(iii) Nations to establish a taskforce or government body tasked with monitoring and maintaining these facilities to ensure both their safety and their steady output of energy.
by Dilange » Sat Jan 05, 2013 7:12 pm
(ii) Having identified suitable sites within their borders, nations without renewable energy installations must build R.E.I.s at the designated sites, provided the nation is in an economically viable position to do so.
(iii) Nations to establish a taskforce or government body tasked with monitoring and maintaining these facilities to ensure both their safety and their steady output of energy.
v) Nations to ensure in the case of governmental control, or to mandate in the case of privatization on of these facilities, this energy is to be provided at a minimal cost to the recipient to prevent monopolization of resources by Non-Renewable energy providers.
(vi) Subject to section (v) nations are to require businesses which make negative environmental impact either directly by nature of their business or indirectly through supply or receipt of their goods to undertake a commitment to utilizing renewable energy within their business while encouraging them to ultimately reach a target of total reliance on renewable energy.
by Eireann Fae » Sat Jan 05, 2013 7:22 pm
Dilange wrote:(ii) Having identified suitable sites within their borders, nations without renewable energy installations must build R.E.I.s at the designated sites, provided the nation is in an economically viable position to do so.
With what money? What if nations cant afford to build any of these? Do you have a fund available? Are you personally going to cut a check?
Dilange wrote:(iii) Nations to establish a taskforce or government body tasked with monitoring and maintaining these facilities to ensure both their safety and their steady output of energy.
If they dont, then what?
Dilange wrote:v) Nations to ensure in the case of governmental control, or to mandate in the case of privatization on of these facilities, this energy is to be provided at a minimal cost to the recipient to prevent monopolization of resources by Non-Renewable energy providers.
Ensure? How? Is this what the taskforce does?
Dilange wrote:(vi) Subject to section (v) nations are to require businesses which make negative environmental impact either directly by nature of their business or indirectly through supply or receipt of their goods to undertake a commitment to utilizing renewable energy within their business while encouraging them to ultimately reach a target of total reliance on renewable energy.
Is this forcing business to convert to green energy?
by Abacathea » Sat Jan 05, 2013 7:26 pm
Dilange wrote:(ii) Having identified suitable sites within their borders, nations without renewable energy installations must build R.E.I.s at the designated sites, provided the nation is in an economically viable position to do so.
With what money? What if nations cant afford to build any of these? Do you have a fund available? Are you personally going to cut a check?(iii) Nations to establish a taskforce or government body tasked with monitoring and maintaining these facilities to ensure both their safety and their steady output of energy.
If they dont, then what?v) Nations to ensure in the case of governmental control, or to mandate in the case of privatization on of these facilities, this energy is to be provided at a minimal cost to the recipient to prevent monopolization of resources by Non-Renewable energy providers.
Ensure? How? Is this what the taskforce does?(vi) Subject to section (v) nations are to require businesses which make negative environmental impact either directly by nature of their business or indirectly through supply or receipt of their goods to undertake a commitment to utilizing renewable energy within their business while encouraging them to ultimately reach a target of total reliance on renewable energy.
Is this forcing business to convert to green energy?
With what money? What if nations cant afford to build any of these? Do you have a fund available? Are you personally going to cut a check?
(iii) Nations to establish a taskforce or government body tasked with monitoring and maintaining these facilities to ensure both their safety and their steady output of energy.
If they dont, then what?
v) Nations to ensure in the case of governmental control, or to mandate in the case of privatization on of these facilities, this energy is to be provided at a minimal cost to the recipient to prevent monopolization of resources by Non-Renewable energy providers.
Ensure? How? Is this what the taskforce does?
(vi) Subject to section (v) nations are to require businesses which make negative environmental impact either directly by nature of their business or indirectly through supply or receipt of their goods to undertake a commitment to utilizing renewable energy within their business while encouraging them to ultimately reach a target of total reliance on renewable energy.
Is this forcing business to convert to green energy?
by Dilange » Sat Jan 05, 2013 7:41 pm
Abacathea wrote:Really Delegate? You're around long enough I'm sure to know that there is no "if they don't". Compliance is expected with all resolutions, there is no if they dont. Did the authors of PMC ask, "what if they don't?" no, they did not.
Dear Delegate, you really are astounding us here, you're telling us your nation is not capable of mandating to private industry cost fixing on sale and supply? Or enforcing such a thing themselves? We find this concerning, but suspect your government knows full well how to do this, and you are simply attempting to pick a hole in our case here. We do not understand your concerns otherwise.
Is there a reason they shouldn't? If they are damaging the environment is there a reason they shouldn't in some way limit their damage or at least balance it?.
by Araraukar » Sat Jan 05, 2013 7:42 pm
Abacathea wrote:(iii) Nations to establish a taskforce or government body tasked with monitoring and maintaining these facilities to ensure both their safety and their steady output of energy.
We feel it is a nice sounding combination of your thoughts and ours. Would you be inclined to agree?
Apologies for absences, non-COVID health issues leave me with very little energy at times.Giovenith wrote:And sorry hun, if you were looking for a forum site where nobody argued, you've come to wrong one.
by Araraukar » Sat Jan 05, 2013 7:44 pm
Dilange wrote:Oh great job refering me to another resolution I support. Great strawman. If you compliance isnt expected, then why try it.
Dilange wrote:If you are forcing all businesses to go green, then that is economically unsound. Why would businesses risk spending more money to afford expensive green energy? They wouldn't unless under the guise of wanting greener production. Please learn Economics 101 and how green energy affects it.
Apologies for absences, non-COVID health issues leave me with very little energy at times.Giovenith wrote:And sorry hun, if you were looking for a forum site where nobody argued, you've come to wrong one.
by Abacathea » Sat Jan 05, 2013 7:47 pm
Dilange wrote:Abacathea wrote:Really Delegate? You're around long enough I'm sure to know that there is no "if they don't". Compliance is expected with all resolutions, there is no if they dont. Did the authors of PMC ask, "what if they don't?" no, they did not.
Oh great job refering me to another resolution I support. Great strawman. If you compliance isnt expected, then why try it.Dear Delegate, you really are astounding us here, you're telling us your nation is not capable of mandating to private industry cost fixing on sale and supply? Or enforcing such a thing themselves? We find this concerning, but suspect your government knows full well how to do this, and you are simply attempting to pick a hole in our case here. We do not understand your concerns otherwise.
Dilange has a great energy ministry who can work things on our own. Im talk about other nations not so fortunate in good management. So please explain, not to me but others, instead of just saying Im attacking you for no reason.Is there a reason they shouldn't? If they are damaging the environment is there a reason they shouldn't in some way limit their damage or at least balance it?.
If you are forcing all businesses to go green, then that is economically unsound. Why would businesses risk spending more money to afford expensive green energy? They wouldn't unless under the guise of wanting greener production. Please learn Economics 101 and how green energy affects it.
by Dilange » Sat Jan 05, 2013 8:41 pm
Araraukar wrote:We suggest you re-read the whole thing - the "green energy" could not be more costly as is defined previously in the proposal.
by Eireann Fae » Sat Jan 05, 2013 9:00 pm
by Dilange » Sat Jan 05, 2013 9:04 pm
by Abacathea » Sat Jan 05, 2013 9:13 pm
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