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Postby Klonor » Mon Jul 13, 2009 6:42 pm

As I'm pretty sure we all have noticed, NS has recently acquired some fantabulous new forums. Sure, the color scheme isn't quite perfect, and the frequently shifting brightness and highlights can give me a migraine, but that's neither here nor there (I think it's somewhere over there); what does matter is that, for the first time in a few years, we're actually on our own forums. Well, okay, they're not really "our" forums, they're Max's, and I'm sure he'd get pretty ticked if one of us showed up and began sticking something onto his servers, but you know what I mean. We're back to our roots, in a way, and I thought it was about time for me start an RP on these new forums. Nothing major, just a groundbreaking epic that would have all its readers weeping at its sheer beauty. That sort of thing. But, before we can have such an epic, we need to have players, so we are now signing up for On Tania Austrailis Station, my newest Future-Tech RP, set in the once-again expanding Associated Systems of Klonor.

Despite my original problems (Yes, that's right, two threads about my posting issues), the thread is already up and open if you would like to read the introduction. I know, there's not much point to having a sign-up thread after the thread is open, but I think the reason a lot of my RP's wind up going nowhere (Including this very RP when I originally posted it on Jolt) is that people just randomly pop in, there's no planned path from the beginning, so this time I'm hoping to work out some of the details before we get rolling. In this thread I would like to attract general interest and get the framework set up for us to have a rip-roaring good time.

For those not interested in reading thirteen pages before they've even decided to enter the RP, the summary is that my nation (The afore mentioned Associated Systems of Klonor) has placed an infant colony in the Tania Austrailis system. Because of its youth, small size, and negligible value in all measurable ways, it's something of a joke and, as such, the military assigned to guard the colony are the rejects the Corps is looking to get out of the way. Enter Captain (Junior Grade) Hatio Hou, a brilliant officer who is nevertheless shuffled off here for reasons beyond her control. She is going to, through a combination of skill, blind luck, and random coincidence, discover some sort of nefarious plot to seize this colony, or destroy it, or do something else evil and cruel (We're talking full-blown moustache twirling here), which she will be forced to thwart.

The RP needs a person, or group, to act as the aggressor and antagonist of this story, matching wits and will against Hou and Klonor in some sort of contest to control this (apparently worthless) system and colony. Tanaara has already entered as a non-hostile third party, which are always welcome if somebody would like to get involved in less confrontational manner, and I'm looking for a few more players to fill out our roster.This RP is semi-open, I don't have any roster of players, but I do ask that you TG me or post here (And wait for my response) before joining in. I've found that if you leave an RP completely open it tends to get swamped beyond control, and not just by new players; when a player as awesome as me gets involved (Come on, you all know how great I am) everybody wants to jump right in. Other than that, my only requirement for participation is proper spelling/grammar/punctuation. I'm aware that I'm something of a grammar Nazi, I recognize it's not necessarily fair for a medium where many of the participants do not speak English as a first language, or have not yet completed their education, but it's who I am. I'm sorry, but I'd like you to honestly look at your writing and think if it qualifies before asking to join. The odds are that I'll probably feel too bad to actually reject anybody on those grounds, I'm a nice guy and I'll try to suck it up unless I actually receive a telegram with "i wunt to plea wit joo," but also think about yourself, do you really want to RP with somebody who's such a douche that he'd look down on you for your spelling? I know I sure wouldn't.

Other than that, let's bring on the play!
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Postby Capsule Corporation » Mon Jul 13, 2009 11:44 pm

I think I just might get on in this :)

I should bring in a group of privately contracted marines who specialize in subduing weak colonies and prepping them for being taken over by a higher government or corporate power, highest bidder of course...

Just let me know a few specifics:

I'm assuming that a lot of this will be character v character RP... so what numbers are we looking for here? A dozen? A few hundred? A ground assault force deployed from a cruiser? I'd be fine with any scale... just let me know... what exactly is the size of your military presence on the colony at the moment?


I'm going to read the thread all the way through in the morning, but I just wanted to let you know I'm interested... don't get to play the antagonist too often :)

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Postby Klonor » Tue Jul 14, 2009 9:26 am

Welcome welcome!

This isn't going to be a direct-combat RP (At least, not in the beginning), I'd like most of the thread (If not all of it) to be the orchestration (And counter-orchestration) of this overly complicated, unnecessarily complex villainous plot to seize the system. If it was a direct assault on the planet then the Corps would just come smashing home with a few uberShip System Fleets, and we'd probably end with both of us yelling "No, my beam totally ripped through your shields! You lose!"

I'm looking for a scheme, a plot, something designed not so much to conquer the system as it is to steal it. This plot can, of course, culminate in some sort of direct attack, but I'd like that to be the end-game (Or something similar), designed to capitalize on the situation they've already created with their various machinations.

I haven't worked up my exact force levels yet (I'll post that later) but whatever it is will be completely inadequate for defending an entire stellar system, probably just a few small ships, without the heavy firepower or numerical flexibility of an actual System Fleet.

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Postby Capsule Corporation » Tue Jul 14, 2009 10:43 am

oo.. this could be fun... give me a bit to think it over, I'll get back to you :)

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Postby Tanaara » Tue Jul 14, 2009 2:14 pm

I guess I had better post a write up of Max and company here, since they are already there.

Morgan Xavier Cannon aka: Max Cannon
Age: 176 - but looks mid 30's - being a Citizen of the Phoenix Empire of Tanaara, and under gone the standard medical treatment known as 'Prolong Therapies', he as has a life span of roughly half a century or somewhat over -if he doesn't get himself killed before then.

Ht: 6'3" (194 cm)
Wt: 190 (86.3 kg) built lean but muscular, like a gymnast.

Handsome with rugged features, an old scar runs up his face, raising his right eyebrow in a permanent expression of sardonic amusement. Max’s skin hue is medium bronze- he has a rich natural 'tan' which shows off his striking opal green eyes. His hair is a very dark brown and ever so slightly curly - long, well below the shoulders but worn braided back tightly most of the time.

Max's background is mostly classified as he spent over sixty years in an elite unit before 'retiring' into his second career as an independent agent affiliated with the Empires renown Explorers Guild. He is a multi degreed and fully accredited First Contact Specialist. Among many other things.

His partners:

Men' dhek's himmone' aur Navris aka: Nervous, NevvyNervous is a Grendel, an omnimorph, capable of assuming any biological form he chooses, mostly though he contents himself with looking like ten pounds or so of furless feline – most specifically a [url=http://perigrinemoore.googlepages.com/sphinx.jpg/sphinx-full;init:.jpg]Terran Sphinx cat[url]. Though he has been known to change in mid leap into his preferred fighting form – and all Grendels love a fight – a ton and a half of snarling, razored clawed Kodiak Maxximus. He holds a Tanaaran Diplomatic passport and his background is even more classified than Max’s. He is over seventeen hundred years old and a close relative of the Grendel Primarch’s family.

TIE Wanderfar, independent explorer starcraft and CS - both of the same name as is the norm with starcraft integrated entities, though she prefers to be called Wende when not being addressed as the vessel. For she rather sees herself as the modern version of Wendy of Peter Pan fame. Her Citizenship registry lists her name as Wendemoira Wanderfar Darling C.S. <Data stream classified, her progenitor C.S. are governmental entities >
Her Avatar is seldom used, as Wende prefers to either ‘ride along’ thought Max’s personal commo system or just project holograms of her chosen appearance while aboard the Wanderfar.

However it must be stated that the Wanderfar is a armed explorer...
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Postby Klonor » Tue Jul 14, 2009 7:46 pm

Capsule Corporation wrote:oo.. this could be fun... give me a bit to think it over, I'll get back to you :)


Oh, sure "think it over," I know what that means. "I'll call you tomorrow."

*sniff*

Why do you hurt me so?

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Postby Klonor » Wed Jul 15, 2009 6:34 pm

Anybody else interested in becoming involved?

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Postby Free Eagles » Fri Jul 17, 2009 11:56 am

I might be, though I'd probably have to be another third party, since I lack the creativity to come up with and orchestrate the kind of wildly complex evil scheme you're after. And it wouldn't make much sense from an IC perspective either.

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Postby Telvira » Fri Jul 17, 2009 2:03 pm

I'm up for creating a complex and unnecessarily convoluted scheme, if Capsule Corp decides not to join.
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Postby Klonor » Fri Jul 17, 2009 7:21 pm

Ah, but the truly critical question is if you can be overly complex, in addition to being unnecessarily complicated. You can? Well, that's good enough for me.

Third parties should be easy to come by in this RP. Speaking from a purely logistical perspective, any sort of new construction (Whether it be factory, city, or entire planet) will attract contractors, vendors, observers, and whatnot out the wazoo, so there's bound to be plenty of people "just passing through" in the system, not to mention the people that are actually going to be living in this new colony.

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Postby Free Eagles » Sat Jul 18, 2009 5:51 pm

Okay, I'll find me a freighter crew or something to play with for this. I'll stick the details up in a few days probably - I'm away for the next couple.

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Postby Klonor » Sat Jul 18, 2009 6:51 pm

Nifty.

As an example of the sort of plot I'm looking for, here's what the People's Republic of Haven was originally going for (For those who still haven't read the intro post, and you know who you are, the PRH is the "heavy" of the story that is serving as the inspiration for my RP). Warning, here be spoilers (But no spoiler tag. Why not, you ask? 'Cause I don't feel like it, that's why).

The planet Medusa, recently claimed by the Star Kingdom of Manticore, was already inhabited by its own Bronze-Age level aliens (Dubbed, cleverly, Medusans). Haven, which wanted to sieze the system in order to gain control of another terminus of the Manticore Wormhole Junction, developed this plot: They were systematically funneling a hallucinogenic, rage-inducing drug (Mekoha) to nomadic members of the indigenous populace, while supplying them with primitive (But still lehtal) firearms, and manipulating an influential shaman of the native religion; ultimately, the drugged-up, fanatically homicidal natives would rise up and proceed to slaughter, rape and pillage to their raging content. Though there would be zero chance of their rebellion actually throwing out the Manticorans (Technology and combat effectiveness of the Royal Manticoran Marines and Native Protection Agency aside, it's a literal impossibility to defeat an orbiting force when all you have are flintlock muskets), the violence, horror and death as the Medusans ran wild across the unarmed merchant enclaves would be brought to the attention of the Havenite task group that just happened to be passing through the region, and their sense of duty and justice would force them to occupy the system to restore "order" and "protect" the off-worlders living on the planet. Oh, and since they have already had to shoulder this large burden of pacifying the planet, they would probably protect it from alien interference as well and garrison the whole system, and since they're here and there's also a Womhole Terminus, it only makes sense that they assume control there as well. It's what's best for all involved, right?

Of course, you don't need to try to pull off this exact scheme (Or you actually could, if that's what you wanted, since NS is all about making your own decisions and playing your own people), but something of this nature; sneaky and clever and probably way more complicated than it needs to be. It's not pistols drawn at fifty paces, it's a knife hidden in your sleve as you pat me on the back.

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Postby Free Eagles » Wed Jul 22, 2009 5:20 pm

Right then, now that I've had a little more time to think about it, here's my freighter and crew:

IF Requiem - a medium interstellar freighter in the Indoan Merchant Fleet.
The Requiem, like many Indoan Merchant vessels, occupies something of a grey area in terms of classification. It is neither a civilian vessel nor a full military transport, with both military and civilian crew on board, and it similarly blurs the line between freighter and warship, having a significant amount of concealed armament fitted, approaching that of a light corvette, allowing it to function as a sting for pirate vessels if needed. The Requiem's current assignment is to act as a free trading vessel outside Alliance space, with the secondary task of exploration of currently unknown (to the Alliance) volumes of the galaxy.

Crew of the Requiem:
Lt. Col. Adam Cochrane - Captain
Maj. Naomi "Ellie" Ellington - Chief Engineer & XO
Amaterasu - avatar-level SI
Harry McKay - Pilot & navigator
Rebecca Nakano - Comms & sensors
MSgt. George Brown - Tactical
Dr. Michelle Quinn - Engineer
Dr. Ryan Gibbs - Engineer & medic
Daniel Neumann - Loadmaster
Capt. Paige Reynolds - Kestrel fighter pilot
Flt. Lt. Layla Harrison - Kestrel fighter pilot

They could get involved simply by turning up in the system (either as their next scheduled point of exploration or as a charter) or they could possibly be involved in the plot somehow, as long as they didn't know what they were delivering. I'll hold off writing anything until I know which way I'm going on that.
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Postby Tanaara » Thu Jul 23, 2009 12:46 am

LOL I'm still waiting to a ressponse to my hail.
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Postby Klonor » Thu Jul 23, 2009 7:26 am

I'm hoping to at least get a primary antagonist involved before the RP moves along, this way we're not all slamming together different plots and stories after we've already gotten five pages typed up.

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Postby Rhinara » Fri Jul 24, 2009 10:12 am

This reminds me of several years ago when my nation tried to get Five Civilized Nations to go to war with Klonor just so my guys could steal something or another from one of your star systems. That was fun. Too bad RL made me disappear from NS around then so that all that work came to nothing -_-

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Postby Klonor » Fri Jul 24, 2009 10:28 am

Hmmm...you know, that actually sounds familiar. I don't remember all the details, but 5CN and whatnot is definitely ringing a bell.

Feel like picking it up again? We could finish what was started all those years ago

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Postby Rhinara » Fri Jul 24, 2009 11:11 am

Sorry, dude. I'm already busy enough between RL and Ravea's RP and another RP that I'm in, and I might be moving in the next couple of months. I don't wanna disappear in the middle of this one as well.

Not to hijack this thread or anything, but I do recall some of the main things I did in the RP from several years ago. To distract Klonor and get some of your defending ships away from the system I wanted to steal something from, an unaffiliated mercenary who "stole" info from Klonor was en route to and in contact with a smaller but potentially strategic 5CN star system to sell them that stolen info. The info contained some faked Klonor ship deployment plans which made it appear as if Klonor was positioning its fleet to invade 5CN, and in particular that one strategic system. But a stealth Rhinaran ship destroyed that mercenary's ship while it was at the very edge of the 5CN system's sensor range, and it just so happened that the stealth Rhinaran ship was equipped with a special device that emitted energy signatures and other readings very similar to those of Klonor ships (not identical, of course, but similar enough that it would be very easily mistaken for a Klonor ship while at the very edge of 5CN's sensor range). And the datachip that contained the faked Klonor ship deployment info just happened to be kept in a safety box that survived the destruction of the mercenary ship for 5CN to find, and the flaws in the data that might've been discovered as faked data was simply chalked off by 5CN as damage to the datachip due to it having survived an explosion. 5CN started a thread where his senators or ministers or whatever were discussing about how Klonor ships were at that moment gathering its forces against them and that they must act quickly. I think that was about as far as it went before I disappeared.

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Postby Klonor » Fri Jul 24, 2009 11:24 am

...so, you were Garak?

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Postby Rhinara » Fri Jul 24, 2009 12:00 pm

Pretty much, yeah. Garak was one of the most intriguing characters on the show.

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Postby Klonor » Fri Jul 24, 2009 12:06 pm

You won't get an argument from me, he was without a doubt one of my favorite DS9 characters, and In the Pale Moonlight is one of the best episodes in all Trek-dom. The series as a whole is my favorite of all the Treks, with the possible exception of TOS ('Cause come on, Shatner is pretty much composed of solid win), and the duality of every character (Especially Garak) is one of its defining elements.

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Postby Free Eagles » Fri Jul 24, 2009 4:27 pm

I took the time to read the inspiration material for this yesterday (yay for free ebooks), and it seems to me like it was a pretty extreme long shot at best for the PRH anyway. But I suppose that's what happens when you're a bit desperate and don't entirely understand the inner workings of your opponent's leadership.

And again, I'd offer to play as the antagonist, if only to maybe start this up, but I honestly don't think I'm up to that.

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Postby Klonor » Fri Jul 24, 2009 4:51 pm

You read On Basilisk Station? Because of this thread? Sweet! I must say, if I've gotten somebody interested in the Honorverse (And there are a fifteen more books in the series, with another due out next year) then I feel like I've accomplished something here.

I, also, am looking to get this thread started; as it is, the two people who've expressed interest haven't given a confirmed yay or nay. I'd be glad with Telvira or CC as a foe, but right now we're sorta hanging in limbo (not that there's anything wrong with limbo, it's a perfectly pleasant place as places go, but it's not exactly my intended destination). Maybe it's time for the allies and neutrals to get the ball rolling and try to attract the antagonist. I'll whip up a response to Tanaara so we can start moving.

By the way, what did you think of the book and, by extension, my adaptation of it? I was only introduced to the Honorverse last fall (Read the whole thing in a week) and am always looking to hear what other people thought of it.

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Postby Telvira » Fri Jul 24, 2009 7:41 pm

I'm up to be the antagonist.

I'd probably end up kidnapping important officials and replacing them with Cybrids (humans with computers implanted in their brains) to facilitate an invasion by rendering you defenseless. Plus I could do some commerce raiding and sabotage while I'm at it.
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Postby Free Eagles » Sat Jul 25, 2009 2:53 am

I did. :) I've known of the series for a while, but this gave me an excuse to actually go and find it.

One of the things I like about sci-fi is seeing how different series differ in their tech, and from Basilisk it looks like Honorverse has some really interesting quirks going for it. And the detail that seems to have gone into the background and regs of the RMN is pretty impressive, even if a lot of it does seeem to have come directly from the RN - it makes it seem more believable than others. As does the way that the battle ended in almost mutual destruction - in a lot of others, Fearless would have come out of that in a lot better shape, despite the fact that she should have been reduced to scrap if done purely by numbers. HH is good, not god, after all.

So yeah, I liked it. Well written, well paced and a good story. As for your adaptation, playing it pretty close, aren't you? :P I can see the similarities, and the differences, and it probably means I'm going to see where things are going before they happen, at least until we get going a bit and the differences introduced by the rest of us alter things. But it bodes well, so it's all good. And given this is supposed to be heavily inspired, there wasn't a lot different you could have done by this point, in my view. It's all still setup at the moment.

Also, oops... The Requiem is pretty close to the Sirius, although there was no way I could have known it at the time. However, I don't think she'll play quite the same role. A light-corvette-equivalent is a little different from a battlecruiser-equivalent.
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