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[Purrium]

Removed

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Zero research, not particularly well written and you’ve obviously not read previous Commendations to get an idea of the standard required. Also not drafted on the forums.

Overall very poor attempt.

[Ostrovskiy]

did simone consent to this

[Fachumonn]

Ok, so this will get nowhere, the nominee isn't even c/cable.

Next time, read past resolutions, get an idea of the quality needed, get permission from your nominee, do your research, create a well-written draft, and post it here well before submitting.

[Scar1]

No thanks.

[Purrium]

I am assuming there is no way to delete a thread?

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

I am assuming there is no way to delete a thread?

Nope and it’s also considered bad form to delete your draft from the thread.

Luckily I can rectify that.

The Security Council,
Noting, that Simone Republic has always tried their best to make the WA better with countless resolutions, and

Amazed, that Simone Republic is the sole author for most of these resolutions, and

Grateful, that they always keep submitting more resolutions, whether they succeed or not, and

Flabbergasted , that almost 90% of resolutions in the past 3 weeks have been submitted by Simone Republic

Hereby Commends Simone Republic for their great contributions to the WA and the Nation States community.

[Purrium]

I am assuming there is no way to delete a thread?

Nope and it’s also considered bad form to delete your draft from the thread.

Luckily I can rectify that.

The Security Council,
Noting, that Simone Republic has always tried their best to make the WA better with countless resolutions, and

Amazed, that Simone Republic is the sole author for most of these resolutions, and

Grateful, that they always keep submitting more resolutions, whether they succeed or not, and

Flabbergasted , that almost 90% of resolutions in the past 3 weeks have been submitted by Simone Republic

Hereby Commends Simone Republic for their great contributions to the WA and the Nation States community.

Yay………… now my terrible first attempt is there for everyone to see forever

[Purrium]

Zero research, not particularly well written and you’ve obviously not read previous Commendations to get an idea of the standard required. Also not drafted on the forums.

Overall very poor attempt.

I read a few, and like I said, it is my first attempt ever and I didn’t really expect it to go anywhere

[Comfed]

Just FYI, it's also bad form to shake with your left hand, whistle indoors, point with chopsticks, touch someone's head, compliment a baby, sit on pillows, leave a tip, not leave a tip, write in red ink, wear shoes with velcro, chew gum, or give someone an even number of flowers.

[Purrium]

did simone consent to this

It doesn’t say that they have to anywhere, so how was I supposed to know

Regardless, I deleted the proposal because of all the encouraging feedback that makes me feel so excited to try again never.

[Purrium]

Just FYI, it's also bad form to shake with your left hand, whistle indoors, point with chopsticks, touch someone's head, compliment a baby, sit on pillows, leave a tip, not leave a tip, write in red ink, wear shoes with velcro, chew gum, or give someone an even number of flowers.

What does that even have to do with this thread

[Fachumonn]

Zero research, not particularly well written and you’ve obviously not read previous Commendations to get an idea of the standard required. Also not drafted on the forums.

Overall very poor attempt.

I read a few, and like I said, it is my first attempt ever and I didn’t really expect it to go anywhere

It's bad form to purge a proposal. I would recommend leaving it for posterity. Thankfully BBD saved it.

[Purrium]

“It's bad form to purge a proposal. I would recommend leaving it for posterity.”

I literally couldn’t care less about good form right now

[Comfed]

Just FYI, it's also bad form to shake with your left hand, whistle indoors, point with chopsticks, touch someone's head, compliment a baby, sit on pillows, leave a tip, not leave a tip, write in red ink, wear shoes with velcro, chew gum, or give someone an even number of flowers.

What does that even have to do with this thread

Just making fun of the whining from some people in this thread about "bad form."

[Purrium]

What does that even have to do with this thread

Just making fun of the whining from some people in this thread about "bad form."

So basically you are pitying me

*that is a good thing*

[Comfed]

Just making fun of the whining from some people in this thread about "bad form."

So basically you are pitying me

*that is a good thing*

That's an awfully negative way of putting it

[Fachumonn]

“It's bad form to purge a proposal. I would recommend leaving it for posterity.”

I literally couldn’t care less about good form right now

Ok, that's your choice.

Be aware that this choice won't get you very far.

[Purrium]

So basically you are pitying me

*that is a good thing*

That's an awfully negative way of putting it

Well everyone is being awfully negative about this

Even though I specifically said this is my first proposal and I would like feedback

[Fachumonn]

That's an awfully negative way of putting it

Well everyone is being awfully negative about this

Even though I specifically said this is my first proposal and I would like feedback

I gave you feedback in my first post. I don't know what else you want.

[Purrium]

I literally couldn’t care less about good form right now

Ok, that's your choice.

Be aware that this choice won't get you very far.

Regardless, I deleted the proposal because of all the encouraging feedback that makes me feel so excited to try again never.

Good form won’t get me far if I never want to try again

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

That's an awfully negative way of putting it

Well everyone is being awfully negative about this

Even though I specifically said this is my first proposal and I would like feedback

You had feedback. Did you just expect praise, that your draft was the most wonderful thing since sliced bread?

I specifically outlined the ways in which your attempt was poor.

Also there are plenty of resources available in this forum that are specifically designed to help players write a good proposal.

[Purrium]

Well everyone is being awfully negative about this

Even though I specifically said this is my first proposal and I would like feedback

You had feedback. Did you just expect praise, that your draft was the most wonderful thing since sliced bread?

I specifically outlined the ways in which your attempt was poor.

I didn’t expect praise but I didn’t expect completely negative almost putdowns

[Cyptopir]

WA dudes will mock new writers who don't know what they're doing and then wonder why no one new wants to write proposals huh

[Purrium]

WA dudes will mock new writers who don't know what they're doing and then wonder why no one new wants to write proposals huh

Thank you, finally someone gets it