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Draft [Commend Refugia]

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Vile Island
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Draft [Commend Refugia]

Postby Vile Island » Fri Nov 08, 2024 4:32 pm

The Security Council
Recognizing that the region of Refugia has created a safe and open environment for its denizens and visitors alike

Celebrating the values of Refugia which is about democracy, freedom, and stunning environmentalism.

Echoing the need to applaud Refugia for creating a refuge for like-minded individuals who care for the mother earth.

Applauding the goals of the region which is about increasing the Environmental Beauty of each nation and increasing their Eco-Friendliness.

Noting that the endotarting competition that happens once in a while as one of the most successful events that increase the endorsements of each nation in the region.

Acknowledging the regional government which is very efficient and has done great contributions to governing the region.


Also is it legal for me to mention N-Day. The Refugia faction The Starlight Brigade has some success during N-Day 10. I would like to mention it but I do not know if it violates meta-gaming.

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Tinhampton
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Postby Tinhampton » Fri Nov 08, 2024 5:00 pm

Oh, hey; it's the guy who wrote the St Patrick's Day-themed Easter Egg issue. Hiya!

Vile Island wrote:Also is it legal for me to mention N-Day. The Refugia faction The Starlight Brigade has some success during N-Day 10. I would like to mention it but I do not know if it violates meta-gaming.

It is legal to discuss N-Day factions. How else could the potato declaration have passed? :P

However, your proposal is currently illegal for failing to actually Hereby Commend Refugia - it's just a statement of facts as it stands. You have a good foundation, but you need to do some more research and ask the key government officials for help (and maybe consent).
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Postby A Million Dreams » Fri Nov 08, 2024 7:25 pm

This is where I note that there has not, in fact, been an attempt to obtain consent. (that I am aware of)
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Bhang Bhang Duc
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Postby Bhang Bhang Duc » Sat Nov 09, 2024 1:33 am

The first three and last clauses are filler and could apply to many other regions. The remaining ones, which seem more specific to Refugia, are lacking in any real detail.

My advice is read the SC Rules as your draft is currently illegal (as has been pointed out) and to read passed Commendations of other regions to see the amount of research that was done on them.
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Postby National Coraland of Fishery » Sat Nov 09, 2024 2:50 am

Vile Island wrote:-snip-
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Description is needed, explain why Refugia is a stunning environmentalist and democratic and make it unique on the case of Refugia. Why should it stand out before most regions. The endotarting could be a excerpt of the community that Refugia represents. Explain each regional government member and go into depth of their selective commended roles.
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Postby Quebecshire » Sat Nov 09, 2024 8:36 am

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Postby Outer Sparta » Sun Nov 10, 2024 11:38 am

Your draft is quite lacking and doesn't convince people enough why Refugia is commendable. I recommend doing more research on the region and looking at past resolutions to see what a quality resolution looks like.
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