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[DRAFT] Condemn Upper Southeast Corner

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[DRAFT] Condemn Upper Southeast Corner

Postby Of The Revived Soviet Union » Sat Nov 02, 2024 12:14 am

The Security Council,

REALIZING that Upper Southeast Corner is a haven for corruption;

APPALLED that the government Upper Southeast Corner is extremely oppressive, with extremely poor, rights-deprived citizens which lack any freedom to do anything much at all,

SADDENED by the extremely short lifespans of its poor citizens,

DISGUSTED by the fact the government and it's leader, Dark Leader, have done absolutely nothing to change this,

HEREBY CONDEMNS Upper Southeast Corner.
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Postby Daisys » Sat Nov 02, 2024 12:17 am

REALIZING this is a horrible proposal
HEREBY against. :P
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Postby Bhang Bhang Duc » Sat Nov 02, 2024 12:28 am

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Appalled that the OP has learnt nothing since their last foray into these hallowed halls,

Disgusted by their crimes against the English language, especially their inability to distinguish between “its” and “it’s”,

Noting that while the draft looks legal it is not good and that the subject is not Condemnable.

Hereby places this draft in the dustbin.
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Postby Archasia » Sat Nov 02, 2024 1:29 am

As Duc previously said, the target hasn't done much to justify condemnation, and the resolution itself lacks any real substance.

Against :)
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Postby Outer Sparta » Sun Nov 03, 2024 3:57 am

How many crappy drafts are you going to make?
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Postby Altrusimo » Sun Nov 03, 2024 9:37 am

Just give feedback instead of bullying damn :rofl:

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Postby Aadhiris » Sun Nov 03, 2024 9:39 am

Mega against, really cruddy proposal.
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Postby Altrusimo » Sun Nov 03, 2024 9:42 am

Aadhiris wrote:Mega against, really cruddy proposal.

Give feedback rather :rofl:

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Postby Defending puppet » Sun Nov 03, 2024 9:45 am

honestly speaking the target looks condemnable. cruddy writing tho

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Postby Aadhiris » Sun Nov 03, 2024 9:47 am

Altrusimo wrote:
Aadhiris wrote:Mega against, really cruddy proposal.

Give feedback rather :rofl:

There's barely even anything to give feedback on. Pretty much anybody can look at this and notice that it looks legal, but is really really bad.
I wasn't even targeting OP themselves. I called their proposal cruddy, not them.
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Postby Earthly Cossack » Sun Nov 03, 2024 11:04 am

DISTRAUGHT that such a poorly written proposal would find its way into the halls of the Security Council

SADDENED that such occurrences are frequent and leave much to be desired

HEREBY CONDEMNS all badly written C/C's in this international body.
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Postby Unmet Player » Sun Nov 03, 2024 11:09 am

Amazed by the quality of this beautiful proposal

Agreeing that Upper Southest Corner must be punished for their crimes

Enlightened by the OP's shocking revelations

Hereby Supports the greatest proposal since sliced bread
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Postby Bhang Bhang Duc » Sun Nov 03, 2024 11:44 am

Altrusimo wrote:Just give feedback instead of bullying damn :rofl:

Feedback has been given. It’s a very poor attempt at a Condemnation, badly written with numerous grammatical errors. Zero research has been done - if the OP had made even a cursory effort at that they would have realised there are hundreds of nations that are extremely similar to the nominee.

We’ve already gone one round of badge hunting with the OP and they have learnt nothing from that experience. So snark and sarcasm about the draft have been unleashed.
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Postby Aason » Sun Nov 03, 2024 11:50 am

NOTICING that the subject is not noteworthy enough to condemn

RECOGNIZING the content is minimal and does not have much reasons for the Condemnation

HEREBY declaring going against this proposal
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Postby Of The Revived Soviet Union » Sun Nov 03, 2024 1:58 pm

Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:
Altrusimo wrote:Just give feedback instead of bullying damn :rofl:

Feedback has been given. It’s a very poor attempt at a Condemnation, badly written with numerous grammatical errors. Zero research has been done - if the OP had made even a cursory effort at that they would have realised there are hundreds of nations that are extremely similar to the nominee.

We’ve already gone one round of badge hunting with the OP and they have learnt nothing from that experience. So snark and sarcasm about the draft have been unleashed.

I literally tell you: Simone Republic (this time I can verify it with him if you ask him) told me to condemn/commend someone on their in-game stats rather than regional/WA/SC/etc stuff

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Postby Izern » Sun Nov 03, 2024 2:03 pm

Seeing this hot mess of Garbage that is an SC proposal.

Recognizing just how poorly written it is, with shockingly terrible English, and

Understanding just how bland, basic, and quite frankly a bore to read, despite how short it is.

Further understanding the person behind Izern has no clue how to write a brilliant proposal, and yet sees the horribleness of this.

Hereby against this SC proposal :)
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Postby Outer Sparta » Sun Nov 03, 2024 2:08 pm

Of The Revived Soviet Union wrote:
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:Feedback has been given. It’s a very poor attempt at a Condemnation, badly written with numerous grammatical errors. Zero research has been done - if the OP had made even a cursory effort at that they would have realised there are hundreds of nations that are extremely similar to the nominee.

We’ve already gone one round of badge hunting with the OP and they have learnt nothing from that experience. So snark and sarcasm about the draft have been unleashed.

I literally tell you: Simone Republic (this time I can verify it with him if you ask him) told me to condemn/commend someone on their in-game stats rather than regional/WA/SC/etc stuff

Their stats are nothing special at all. Players like Kindjal and Cashdeer have badges because their stats all stand out and it took years of grinding to get on top.
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Postby The Ice States » Sun Nov 03, 2024 2:29 pm

Hello! If you're looking to get a stats-based condemn in I would recommend looking at past examples of this, such as Condemn Cashdeer or the (now-repealed) Commend Northern Borland; generally a resolution should have more detail (you have up to 5000 characters, use them!).

With that said, usually commendations and condemnations to do with stats need a truly exemplary performance in that regard; for example nine #1's in Kindjal's case, six #1s for Cashdeer (with an additional three on their puppets), and who-knows-how-many for Northern Borland. Being #10 in one stat is generally not enough; while some resolutions mention this sort of thing as a supplementary argument (eg my own resolution! Commend Valentine Z; an older example would be Commend Bears Armed) it does not appear to be present in this case. If there is a lot more than just stats the it should be mentioned; if not, unfortunately I don't think there's enough of a case for condemning Upper Southeast Corner.

Finally, it is generally encouraged to reach out to candidates for both commendations and condemnations beforehand to see if they are fine with the proposal; did you do this in this case?

Good luck, if this one doesn't work hopefully you can return with a successful proposal soon :D
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Postby Bhang Bhang Duc » Sun Nov 03, 2024 2:32 pm

Of The Revived Soviet Union wrote:
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:Feedback has been given. It’s a very poor attempt at a Condemnation, badly written with numerous grammatical errors. Zero research has been done - if the OP had made even a cursory effort at that they would have realised there are hundreds of nations that are extremely similar to the nominee.

We’ve already gone one round of badge hunting with the OP and they have learnt nothing from that experience. So snark and sarcasm about the draft have been unleashed.

I literally tell you: Simone Republic (this time I can verify it with him if you ask him) told me to condemn/commend someone on their in-game stats rather than regional/WA/SC/etc stuff

And so you decided to find someone who you thought fitted the bill without doing any research on whether their stats stacked up. You then combined this with a shoddy bit of writing and you expect to be taken seriously?
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Postby Past beans » Sun Nov 03, 2024 3:57 pm

Altrusimo wrote:
Aadhiris wrote:Mega against, really cruddy proposal.

Give feedback rather :rofl:

Using the ROFL emoji and providing literally no substance and instead telling other people to do it is not feedback either.

As for the proposal, it’s poorly written and so small that it proves you either don’t care or don’t understand what a good proposal is.
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Postby Azurnailia » Sun Nov 03, 2024 4:02 pm

Of The Revived Soviet Union wrote:The Security Council,

REALIZING that Upper Southeast Corner is a haven for corruption;

APPALLED that the government Upper Southeast Corner is extremely oppressive, with extremely poor, rights-deprived citizens which lack any freedom to do anything much at all,

SADDENED by the extremely short lifespans of its poor citizens,

DISGUSTED by the fact the government and it's leader, Dark Leader, have done absolutely nothing to change this,

HEREBY CONDEMNS Upper Southeast Corner.

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Postby The Kharkivan Cossacks » Sun Nov 03, 2024 4:05 pm

Altrusimo wrote:
Aadhiris wrote:Mega against, really cruddy proposal.

Give feedback rather :rofl:

Ah, but we are. We are making it clear that this proposal is terrible. How about you give some of your own too?
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