[Abandoned] Condemn United Fascist Workers Association

[Inferior]

any ideas about this resolution? The resolution was written by my WA nation, (Supurior)

https://www.nationstates.net/page=UN_view_proposal/id=supurior_1715205980

[Skiva]

It's good form to draft on the forums. It's also good form to include your draft in the thread you create. For posterity, here it is.

The Security Council

Noting that United Fascist Workers Association (From here on out known as UFWA) Is a confirmed fascist region

Recognizing that Fascism is an inherently racist and sexist and works for the good of one and not the people

Understanding that UFWA is a region of many nations that ideologies dont align with the region as a whole.

Reasoning that the regional government of UFWA has very low political freedom levels

Hereby Condemns United Fascist Workers Association

Typically, condemnations are awarded to regions or nations that have played the character of the villain and not for actual condemnations. Condemning a Fascist region serves no purpose other than benefit to the region. As for the contents of the proposal, it's sloppy and surface level.

Welcome to the Security Council, I recommend that you read Westinor's guide.

[Daphomir]

It's good form to draft on the forums. It's also good form to include your draft in the thread you create. For posterity, here it is.

The Security Council

Noting that United Fascist Workers Association (From here on out known as UFWA) Is a confirmed fascist region

Recognizing that Fascism is an inherently racist and sexist and works for the good of one and not the people

Understanding that UFWA is a region of many nations that ideologies dont align with the region as a whole.

Reasoning that the regional government of UFWA has very low political freedom levels

Hereby Condemns United Fascist Workers Association

Typically, condemnations are awarded to regions or nations that have played the character of the villain and not for actual condemnations. Condemning a Fascist region serves no purpose other than benefit to the region. As for the contents of the proposal, it's sloppy and surface level.

Welcome to the Security Council, I recommend that you read Westinor's guide.

This draft absolutely requires more detail, as well as proper reasoning for a condemnation of this region. If, say, the region has an extensive history of raiding, then say something about that in your draft. Otherwise, this draft will not make it to the voting stage.

[Inferior]

It's good form to draft on the forums. It's also good form to include your draft in the thread you create. For posterity, here it is.

The Security Council

Noting that United Fascist Workers Association (From here on out known as UFWA) Is a confirmed fascist region

Recognizing that Fascism is an inherently racist and sexist and works for the good of one and not the people

Understanding that UFWA is a region of many nations that ideologies dont align with the region as a whole.

Reasoning that the regional government of UFWA has very low political freedom levels

Hereby Condemns United Fascist Workers Association

Typically, condemnations are awarded to regions or nations that have played the character of the villain and not for actual condemnations. Condemning a Fascist region serves no purpose other than benefit to the region. As for the contents of the proposal, it's sloppy and surface level.

Welcome to the Security Council, I recommend that you read Westinor's guide.

It's good form to draft on the forums. It's also good form to include your draft in the thread you create. For posterity, here it is.

The Security Council

Noting that United Fascist Workers Association (From here on out known as UFWA) Is a confirmed fascist region

Recognizing that Fascism is an inherently racist and sexist and works for the good of one and not the people

Understanding that UFWA is a region of many nations that ideologies dont align with the region as a whole.

Reasoning that the regional government of UFWA has very low political freedom levels

Hereby Condemns United Fascist Workers Association

Typically, condemnations are awarded to regions or nations that have played the character of the villain and not for actual condemnations. Condemning a Fascist region serves no purpose other than benefit to the region. As for the contents of the proposal, it's sloppy and surface level.

Welcome to the Security Council, I recommend that you read Westinor's guide.

This draft absolutely requires more detail, as well as proper reasoning for a condemnation of this region. If, say, the region has an extensive history of raiding, then say something about that in your draft. Otherwise, this draft will not make it to the voting stage.

Thank you! I am new to making drafts, this is my 1st one but i wanted advice from more experienced SC draft writers.

[Supurior]

I think i will try for a different topic other than commendation/condemnation

[The Hurricane]

Fascist regions/nations don't deserve a condemnation. They'll just wear it as a badge of honor.

[The Kharkivan Cossacks]

I'm all for fighting Fascists, but this is just giving them a badge they will no doubt consider a trophy.
So, this does not have my approval.

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

The draft is not very detailed, not particularly well written and doomed to failure. The vast majority of SC regulars will tell you that we do not give badges to fascist regions - we’d much rather starve them of the oxygen of publicity.

My advice - drop it and find something else.

[Inferior]

To all of these posts, i did drop it a day ago.

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

To all of these posts, i did drop it a day ago.

Then please change the title of your OP from [Pending] to [Abandoned].

[Inferior]

To all of these posts, i did drop it a day ago.

Then please change the title of your OP from [Pending] to [Abandoned].

I did