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[Saint Monkey]

I don't want to continue on this legislation

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Is there an actual draft here or are you just having a whine? If the above vent is a draft then it is illegal, very illegal.

Suggest you have a read of the rules, then have a look how a really good Condemnation is written and then come back with something half decent.

[Smoking is fun]

You forgot about me!

[Urine Town]

Can you also condemn me please? I’ve been pretty naughty

No, but seriously drafts that only exist to vent at another player usually have zero chance at getting passed

[Lile Ulie Islands]

Can you also condemn me please? I’ve been pretty naughty

No, but seriously drafts that only exist to vent at another player usually have zero chance at getting passed

Yes. You’ve been pretty naughty for…three days on NationStates.

[Free Algerstonia]

this proposal made me cry. six nations subjected to the totalitarian whims of monkey man. support, he needs to be stopped before his victim count increases

[Saint Monkey]

I'm not quite sure about the rules, I'm quite new here

[Saint Monkey]

this proposal made me cry. six nations subjected to the totalitarian whims of monkey man. support, he needs to be stopped before his victim count increases

You'll be next lol

[Saint Monkey]

Can you also condemn me please? I’ve been pretty naughty

No, but seriously drafts that only exist to vent at another player usually have zero chance at getting passed

Ok, Sorry, I'm not quite sure about the rules, however I'm just annoyed that Monkey Man continues to ban people and Has too much power

[Saint Monkey]

Is there an actual draft here or are you just having a whine? If the above vent is a draft then it is illegal, very illegal.

Suggest you have a read of the rules, then have a look how a really good Condemnation is written and then come back with something half decent.

I'll take a look at the rules when I have time, and I will create a thorough and more professional post.

Sorry

[Saint Monkey]

Is there an actual draft here or are you just having a whine? If the above vent is a draft then it is illegal, very illegal.

Suggest you have a read of the rules, then have a look how a really good Condemnation is written and then come back with something half decent.

And, for my first Condemnation post, I obviously need more experience, however, this is my first time and I think that there is always room for improvement, If you have any advice please feel free to tell me I would be very thankful for it, and so I don't get criticised in the future and I know what I'm doing. I guess having a bit more knowledge would improve it.

[Likhinia]

Most of your requests about region controls and mods probably won’t be implemented, because unfortunately we can’t trust people on NationStates RMBs. We can most people, but after all, you’re giving people too much freedom. The mods can’t always be there for every region (of which there are 27,686 at time of writing), so maybe revise this a bit to see how you can make this slightly more likely.

I’m going to read the rules again and in a few hours will get back to you with the best I can do.

But I must say, it’s good to write out your thoughts like this before you draft. Organising your thoughts makes writing much easier, and it helps you revise as you write instead of afterwards. So it’s a good start!

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Is there an actual draft here or are you just having a whine? If the above vent is a draft then it is illegal, very illegal.

Suggest you have a read of the rules, then have a look how a really good Condemnation is written and then come back with something half decent.

And, for my first Condemnation post, I obviously need more experience, however, this is my first time and I think that there is always room for improvement, If you have any advice please feel free to tell me I would be very thankful for it, and so I don't get criticised in the future and I know what I'm doing. I guess having a bit more knowledge would improve it.

Advice? Reread the second paragraph of my post.

[Likhinia]

Coming back to this, I’ve noticed some things:

• This would do better as two proposals to the SC, considering the whole regional control thing is a bit off topic to condemning Monkey Man.
• You may want a bit more to condemn Monkey Man on, because to realise the true scale of what he’s done. It might help to sway voters.
• You’ll want to also try thinking a bit more with the phrasing. Use emotive language, maybe, to get people to feel sorry, like Free Algerstonia (but maybe not crying?)
• And finally, Monkeyhoarders is a region, Monkey Man is a nation, being in the same region, etc.

Eventually, once I’ve read some more condemnation proposals that passed (hopefully), I might get to you with a redraft. I’ll try my hardest to help you, because this is a worthy cause. Let’s see if we can avenge those nations. (Why does that sound like they’ve been banned?)

[Astrobolt]

This is not a condemnable nominee. Condemns are for those who’ve made a big impact in ‘playing the villain’, usually with numerous years of activity demonstrating this.

Someone simply banning members from a region does not at all meet the bar.

[Free Algerstonia]

This is not a condemnable nominee. Condemns are for those who’ve made a big impact in ‘playing the villain’, usually with numerous years of activity demonstrating this.

Someone simply banning members from a region does not at all meet the bar.

no no i think saint monkey's on to something here

[Saint Monkey]

Maybe It's that many Nation take this thing way to seriously, or that I'm not taking this serious enough, but I'm going to delete this condemnation post, thanks everyone for the help that you gave me, and advice, and I will use this onwards to a more Important Condemnation post, I want to say that at the moment the world seems a bit... Ruder. I'm sure your all very nice and all but some of you, not all, aren't really making me like this forum. Right Now I think we should be a lot more grateful and happier for what we got. At the moment with all the Inequality and War in this world, we have to be nicer, (and Monkeyhoarders is the nation and Monkey Man is the leader, the region is Monkey Empire) I think I made a mistake since Monkey Man never did too much wrong and I started this thing with my friend Monkey Man, and Gladiston. But now I realise At the start it was a bit of fun, and it's not enough to condemn him. I like Monkey Man and I would rather talk with my man diplomatically rather than hate, I might have just taken the fact that he banned many Nation too seriously, and I think we should be happier and more kind to our friends. So don't condemn him, but I want to make sure power isnt taken too far. So I am at peace with Monkey Man, and I will look for change in the WA forum, rather than hating on other players. We're better together

Saint Monkey X