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Postby The Rhein States » Wed Oct 05, 2022 11:09 am

I am going to try again with a construction error, again an airport, but based on a real story.
https://www.nytimes.com/2018/09/07/clim ... ansai.html
I have asked a friend of mine, a pilot, if it was possible for a plane to aquaplane/hydroplane, in some rare cases it may do it. for example when there is too much water on the runway. He should be credited, IF I can make this one succesful.


Aquaplane

Validity: Must have chosen 379.3

Dilemma:
Air Might One, your personal transport aircraft, is making its descent towards the island airport after a state visit to Brancaland. It is raining and blowing heavily during the landing. The aircraft touches down but soon loses contact with the runway. In all likelihood it will crash into the ocean at the other end. Luckily, the experienced pilot managed to steer off the runway and get the aircraft bogged on the verge.

Option 1: “Everything alright, Sir?”, asks your pilot, who starts to swear, “There was too much water on the runway which caused a build up in front of the landing gear, leaving me unable to slow down enough, otherwise known as aquaplaning. All because this airport is sinking due to a construction failure! You could have died and if nothing changes it will! The runway needs to be raised so planes can safely depart and land.”

EF Passengers are stranded on the runway as it is the only part of the airport that sticks above the water

Option 2: “That won’t work!”, responds @@RANDOMNAME@@, an engineer who has travelled with you for business deals, making @@HIS@@ way towards the nearest exit, “The island will keep sinking and at some point it is physically impossible to raise the storm barriers higher. We need to add extra sand underneath to stabilise the island. The airport will be able to keep in operation during the construction work, I promise.”

EF: passengers can only enter the hydraulically jacked up terminal using a ladder

Option 3: As you have safely exited the plane your minister of finance comes sliding down the evacuation slide as he ponders, “This was a terrible idea. All this money spent on a sinking island. Expanding the old airport was a better, and now, a much cheaper choice. It is not too late, as the airport still has to be demolished. We should reopen the old one, perhaps even save money by repurposing the buildings and equipment of this airport.”

EF: an expensive bare slab of sand is slowly eroding into the sea

Option 4:Some muffled tones coming from your suitcase”, as a guard unzips your suitcase your nephew pops out, secretly hiding himself to get a free trip to Brancaland, uttering a genius idea, “If the water is unstoppable, let’s work with it. We need to convert the fleet of Air @@NATION@@ to aquaplanes with an aqua-airport! A world first.”

EF: flying tickets include a free swim to the shores
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Postby Australian rePublic » Wed Oct 05, 2022 7:49 pm

You might have to explain what Aquaplaning is
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Postby The Rhein States » Wed Oct 05, 2022 10:23 pm

Australian rePublic wrote:You might have to explain what Aquaplaning is


Okay, some might not know what aquaplaning is. Have to try to keep the description as short as possible though.

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Postby Australian rePublic » Thu Oct 06, 2022 12:46 am

The Rhein States wrote:
Australian rePublic wrote:You might have to explain what Aquaplaning is


Okay, some might not know what aquaplaning is. Have to try to keep the description as short as possible though.

You still have to specify what it is in the issue
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Postby The Rhein States » Sat Oct 08, 2022 1:52 pm

Australian rePublic wrote:
The Rhein States wrote:
Okay, some might not know what aquaplaning is. Have to try to keep the description as short as possible though.

You still have to specify what it is in the issue


Oh, in that way. I have added the aquaplane explanation to option 1 now.

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Postby Australian rePublic » Sun Oct 09, 2022 7:21 am

I'm sorry I didn't mention this earlier, but why would a leader of a country concern himself with such matters? This would probably be for an engineering minister of something like that. The leader is neither qualified nor has the time to deal with this kind of stuff. That's why countries have departments of infrastructure. The leader can't dictate every minor decision in a country. Joe Biden, for example, might decide to increase the maintenance budget for the main road between New York and Washington DC. However, he's not gonna drive up and down looking for pot holes. Same logic applies here

Also, option 1's use of the word "sir" implies that leader is male, which is a non-no
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Postby Cataleenia » Sun Oct 09, 2022 7:59 am

I would recommend changing ‘The island airport’, to ‘A coastal airport’
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Postby Tsardom of Alaska » Sun Oct 09, 2022 8:27 pm

Cataleenia wrote:I would recommend changing ‘The island airport’, to ‘A coastal airport’

What if the nation is landlocked?
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Postby Cataleenia » Sun Oct 09, 2022 10:13 pm

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Cataleenia wrote:I would recommend changing ‘The island airport’, to ‘A coastal airport’

What if the nation is landlocked?

Yes, but ‘The island airport’ would also suggest that the nation is not landlocked
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Postby Bears Armed » Mon Oct 10, 2022 1:23 am

Cataleenia wrote:
Tsardom of Alaska wrote:What if the nation is landlocked?

Yes, but ‘The island airport’ would also suggest that the nation is not landlocked

You can get islands in lakes and even in rivers, not just out to sea.
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Postby Pennyslov » Mon Oct 10, 2022 4:45 am

Bears Armed wrote:
Cataleenia wrote:Yes, but ‘The island airport’ would also suggest that the nation is not landlocked

You can get islands in lakes and even in rivers, not just out to sea.
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Postby Australian rePublic » Mon Oct 10, 2022 5:42 am

Cataleenia wrote:
Tsardom of Alaska wrote:What if the nation is landlocked?

Yes, but ‘The island airport’ would also suggest that the nation is not landlocked

Many issues (a few, but not all, written by yours truely) have already established that nation isn't landlocked. Which is actually quite discouraging to those who want to write issues SPECIFICALLY about landlocked countries
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Postby Trotterdam » Mon Oct 10, 2022 2:03 pm

Australian rePublic wrote:Many issues (a few, but not all, written by yours truely) have already established that nation isn't landlocked. Which is actually quite discouraging to those who want to write issues SPECIFICALLY about landlocked countries
Even if a country isn't landlocked, it might have trouble accessing some oceans. For example, Finland has plenty of coastline on the Baltic Sea, but a narrow, barely-inhabited strip of land belonging to Norway keeps it from having direct access to the Arctic Ocean, forcing their ships to take the long way around Scandinavia if they want to go there. Burma almost but not quite has direct access to the Gulf of Thailand (and if they got direct access, that would split Thailand into two disconnected pieces). Saudi Arabia can't reach the Mediterranean without either passing through the articial Suez Canal or conquering Israel. Iraq has an even harder time, with only a tiny stretch of coast on the Persian Gulf, which is still theoretically enough to sail anywhere in the World Ocean.

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Postby Australian rePublic » Mon Oct 10, 2022 2:50 pm

Trotterdam wrote:
Australian rePublic wrote:Many issues (a few, but not all, written by yours truely) have already established that nation isn't landlocked. Which is actually quite discouraging to those who want to write issues SPECIFICALLY about landlocked countries
Even if a country isn't landlocked, it might have trouble accessing some oceans. For example, Finland has plenty of coastline on the Baltic Sea, but a narrow, barely-inhabited strip of land belonging to Norway keeps it from having direct access to the Arctic Ocean, forcing their ships to take the long way around Scandinavia if they want to go there. Burma almost but not quite has direct access to the Gulf of Thailand (and if they got direct access, that would split Thailand into two disconnected pieces). Saudi Arabia can't reach the Mediterranean without either passing through the articial Suez Canal or conquering Israel. Iraq has an even harder time, with only a tiny stretch of coast on the Persian Gulf, which is still theoretically enough to sail anywhere in the World Ocean.

Let's move this discussion to the writer's block
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Postby The Rhein States » Tue Oct 11, 2022 1:03 am

Cataleenia wrote:I would recommend changing ‘The island airport’, to ‘A coastal airport’


Nice for all the reactions that aren't much of a help for me.

This issue is a follow-up for issue 379.3 Stakes on a Plane. Leader has chosen to relocate the airport to an island along the coast and uses this airport also as a base for government planes, which seems acceptable. As issue 379 does not make a difference between landlocked and not landlocked nations, this one doesn't either. As it is paramount that the leader can make trips abroad this IS an issue that makes 'sense', certainly when you almost crash (hence the way this issue is written).

But you do have a point Australian Republic, the leader can be a female ;)

As for the name, it refers to all the water that has accumulated on the island and what happens to the government plane.
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Postby Cataleenia » Tue Oct 11, 2022 8:27 am

The Rhein States wrote:-snip-

If that is the case then, why not have it be @@ANIMAL@@ Island Airport as ‘The Island Airport’ may seem strange oit of context. In fact, why not have it say ‘@@ANIMAL@@ island airport, an airport that is mainly used for government travel,’

I’ve edited the dilemma part to show that change.
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Air Might One, your personal transport aircraft, is making its descent towards the island airport @@ANIMAL@@ Island airport, an airport that is mainly used for government travel, after a state visit to Brancaland. It is raining and blowing heavily during the landing. The aircraft touches down but soon loses contact with the runway. In all likelihood it will crash into the ocean at the other end. Luckily, the experienced pilot managed to steer off the runway and get the aircraft bogged on the verge.
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Postby The Rhein States » Tue Oct 18, 2022 12:25 am

Cataleenia wrote:
The Rhein States wrote:-snip-

If that is the case then, why not have it be @@ANIMAL@@ Island Airport as ‘The Island Airport’ may seem strange oit of context. In fact, why not have it say ‘@@ANIMAL@@ island airport, an airport that is mainly used for government travel,’

I’ve edited the dilemma part to show that change.
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Air Might One, your personal transport aircraft, is making its descent towards the island airport @@ANIMAL@@ Island airport, an airport that is mainly used for government travel, after a state visit to Brancaland. It is raining and blowing heavily during the landing. The aircraft touches down but soon loses contact with the runway. In all likelihood it will crash into the ocean at the other end. Luckily, the experienced pilot managed to steer off the runway and get the aircraft bogged on the verge.


This issue is intended to be a follow-up for 379.3. Looking at the issue it talks about an international airport, it must also be an airport for normal passengers. You can't take the US situation, where it is a military base but more like a german issue. The german government uses the BER airport as its hub, which is also usable for commercial planes. I will try to rewrite parts and invent some other options make the point clearer.


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