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[SUBMITTED]New Demolishing

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Pennyslov
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[SUBMITTED]New Demolishing

Postby Pennyslov » Thu Sep 22, 2022 8:24 pm

[title]New Demolishing

[validity]Invalid for non-republic nations


[desc]After a recent launch of a bomb in central @@NAME@@, there has been a recent trending NewTube video talking about the bomb. But that’s destroyed over 2,000 buildings that it led to some people to run out of food and starve.

[option] “Oh no! Something is wrong with the buildings!” Says president @@LEADER@@. “That is also a big trap! We need foreigners to donate to charity for ourselves!” @@LEADER@@ Added.

[effect] Charities are donating to @@NAME@@

[option] “But what about the bomb? It also caused deaths!” Says nervous businessman @@RANDOMNAME@@. “I think we should clear up this mess.” He added.

[effect] A messy pattern from a bomb is being cleaned up.

[option] “I see feet! Is this a thief?” Says policeman @@RANDOMNAME@@. Briefly, @@RANDOMNAME@@ tries to explain him “These are not feet! They are just patterns from a bomb!” And the patterns looked like feet.

[effect] After police inspected bomb patterns, now the patterns start to shrink.
Last edited by Pennyslov on Fri Sep 23, 2022 8:33 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Outer Sparta
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Postby Outer Sparta » Thu Sep 22, 2022 8:30 pm

Your premise of a terrorist attack in a city-center is already taken in Issue #740 and #222. Besides, it makes no sense to base your central talking about going in detail about which bomb the terrorists used.

I would advise you to actually read the guide for once and listen to critical feedback, but given your track record, you will never seem to heed important advice and instead just annoy other users trying to help you out, so what's the point of ever giving you feedback at this rate?
I don't stand with Ukraine. I don't stand with Russia. I don't stand with the US, NATO, or EU. I stand with the innocent civilians being caught in the crossfire while the politicians, the media, and weapons manufacturers continue to stoke division and conflict in their geopolitical chess games and treat the people of Ukraine as mere pawns. Zelensky is a corrupt, opportunist oligarchic politician who is not fit to lead Ukraine through anything and wants to inflate his own ego and offshore accounts.

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REPORTED

Postby Pennyslov » Thu Sep 22, 2022 8:31 pm

As Of Now, The Draft Is Submitted
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Pennyslov
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Postby Pennyslov » Thu Sep 22, 2022 8:43 pm

Outer Sparta wrote:Your premise of a terrorist attack in a city-center is already taken in Issue #740 and #222. Besides, it makes no sense to base your central talking about going in detail about which bomb the terrorists used.

I would advise you to actually read the guide for once and listen to critical feedback, but given your track record, you will never seem to heed important advice and instead just annoy other users trying to help you out, so what's the point of ever giving you feedback at this rate?
The 3 Issues (Issue #740,This One,And Issue #222) Don’t Have Much In Common.
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Outer Sparta
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Postby Outer Sparta » Thu Sep 22, 2022 8:47 pm

Pennyslov wrote:
Outer Sparta wrote:Your premise of a terrorist attack in a city-center is already taken in Issue #740 and #222. Besides, it makes no sense to base your central talking about going in detail about which bomb the terrorists used.

I would advise you to actually read the guide for once and listen to critical feedback, but given your track record, you will never seem to heed important advice and instead just annoy other users trying to help you out, so what's the point of ever giving you feedback at this rate?
The 3 Issues (Issue #740,This One,And Issue #222) Don’t Have Much In Common.

They both cover your general premise, with the only difference is that your draft (that you inexplicably chose to submit) is of dumpster-fire quality.
I don't stand with Ukraine. I don't stand with Russia. I don't stand with the US, NATO, or EU. I stand with the innocent civilians being caught in the crossfire while the politicians, the media, and weapons manufacturers continue to stoke division and conflict in their geopolitical chess games and treat the people of Ukraine as mere pawns. Zelensky is a corrupt, opportunist oligarchic politician who is not fit to lead Ukraine through anything and wants to inflate his own ego and offshore accounts.

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Postby Trotterdam » Thu Sep 22, 2022 9:11 pm

It's bad, but I'd say it's hilariously bad rather than eye-hurtingly bad. That's an improvement.

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Postby Cataleenia » Thu Sep 22, 2022 9:58 pm

It doesn’t make sense to have an option from @@LEADER@@ since you play as @@LEADER@@.

You answer issues from the point of view of @@LEADER@@.

You ARE @@LEADER@@.
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Postby Australian rePublic » Fri Sep 23, 2022 12:17 am

Geez, you only left it there for 5 hours
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Postby RedBrickLand » Fri Sep 23, 2022 1:37 am

Australian rePublic wrote:Geez, you only left it there for 5 hours
I have seen some pretty early submissions but this one takes the cake. Pennyslov back at it with greatness. The dude's got my respect.
(If you haven't already realized, I am being sarcastic)
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Postby Australian rePublic » Fri Sep 23, 2022 5:17 am

RedBrickLand wrote:
Australian rePublic wrote:Geez, you only left it there for 5 hours
I have seen some pretty early submissions but this one takes the cake. Pennyslov back at it with greatness. The dude's got my respect.
(If you haven't already realized, I am being sarcastic)

I'm pretty sure it's just Crazyblox rebranded
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Postby Outer Sparta » Fri Sep 23, 2022 5:38 am

RedBrickLand wrote:
Australian rePublic wrote:Geez, you only left it there for 5 hours
I have seen some pretty early submissions but this one takes the cake. Pennyslov back at it with greatness. The dude's got my respect.
(If you haven't already realized, I am being sarcastic)

And they submitted right after I posted some feedback. What a way to go!
I don't stand with Ukraine. I don't stand with Russia. I don't stand with the US, NATO, or EU. I stand with the innocent civilians being caught in the crossfire while the politicians, the media, and weapons manufacturers continue to stoke division and conflict in their geopolitical chess games and treat the people of Ukraine as mere pawns. Zelensky is a corrupt, opportunist oligarchic politician who is not fit to lead Ukraine through anything and wants to inflate his own ego and offshore accounts.

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Postby Australian rePublic » Fri Sep 23, 2022 5:39 am

Outer Sparta wrote:
RedBrickLand wrote:I have seen some pretty early submissions but this one takes the cake. Pennyslov back at it with greatness. The dude's got my respect.
(If you haven't already realized, I am being sarcastic)

And they submitted right after I posted some feedback. What a way to go!

At least you got the opportunity to do so when you weren't asleep. Though, it doesn't appear to have made any difference
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Postby Outer Sparta » Fri Sep 23, 2022 5:42 am

Australian rePublic wrote:
Outer Sparta wrote:And they submitted right after I posted some feedback. What a way to go!

At least you got the opportunity to do so when you weren't asleep. Though, it doesn't appear to have made any difference

Pennyslov always seems to out-do themselves. Unlike the WA, where submissions are public, GI is private and their submissions will get quietly tossed into the trash.
I don't stand with Ukraine. I don't stand with Russia. I don't stand with the US, NATO, or EU. I stand with the innocent civilians being caught in the crossfire while the politicians, the media, and weapons manufacturers continue to stoke division and conflict in their geopolitical chess games and treat the people of Ukraine as mere pawns. Zelensky is a corrupt, opportunist oligarchic politician who is not fit to lead Ukraine through anything and wants to inflate his own ego and offshore accounts.

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Postby Australian rePublic » Fri Sep 23, 2022 5:44 am

Outer Sparta wrote:
Australian rePublic wrote:At least you got the opportunity to do so when you weren't asleep. Though, it doesn't appear to have made any difference

Pennyslov always seems to out-do themselves. Unlike the WA, where submissions are public, GI is private and their submissions will get quietly tossed into the trash.

Pretty much
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Postby Pennyslov » Fri Sep 23, 2022 9:45 pm

Outer Sparta wrote:
Pennyslov wrote:The 3 Issues (Issue #740,This One,And Issue #222) Don’t Have Much In Common.

They both cover your general premise, with the only difference is that your draft (that you inexplicably chose to submit) is of dumpster-fire quality.
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Postby Nepleslia » Fri Sep 23, 2022 9:47 pm

Pennyslov wrote:
Outer Sparta wrote:They both cover your general premise, with the only difference is that your draft (that you inexplicably chose to submit) is of dumpster-fire quality.
I Can Stop You From Entering

I’m pretty sure you can’t.

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I Can

Postby Pennyslov » Fri Sep 23, 2022 9:54 pm

Nepleslia wrote:
Pennyslov wrote:I Can Stop You From Entering

I’m pretty sure you can’t.
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Postby Australian rePublic » Fri Sep 23, 2022 10:23 pm

Pennyslov wrote:
Nepleslia wrote:I’m pretty sure you can’t.
By Reporting This Nation. Outer Sparta

No body is going to take your report seriously
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Postby United Calanworie » Fri Sep 23, 2022 10:43 pm

Pennyslov wrote:
Nepleslia wrote:I’m pretty sure you can’t.
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Hmm…

Postby Pennyslov » Fri Sep 23, 2022 11:23 pm

United Calanworie wrote:
Pennyslov wrote:By Reporting This Nation. Outer Sparta

*** Warned for mods as weapons. *** Read the rules before you run afoul of any of the other ones.
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Postby Reploid Productions » Fri Sep 23, 2022 11:38 pm

Pennyslov wrote:
United Calanworie wrote:*** Warned for mods as weapons. *** Read the rules before you run afoul of any of the other ones.
Nothing Happened

Let me give it to you point blank:
1) DO NOT make fraudulent reports to moderation. DO NOT threaten to make fraudulent reports when someone criticizes your drafts. So long as players are staying within the site rules they are allowed to criticize your issue drafts. They don't do it to be mean, they do it to help you improve your drafts.
2) Read the issue drafting instructions. Your submissions as they are at present will not be accepted by the editors.

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I Already Read It

Postby Pennyslov » Fri Sep 23, 2022 11:39 pm

Reploid Productions wrote:
Pennyslov wrote: Nothing Happened

Let me give it to you point blank:
1) DO NOT make fraudulent reports to moderation. DO NOT threaten to make fraudulent reports when someone criticizes your drafts. So long as players are staying within the site rules they are allowed to criticize your issue drafts. They don't do it to be mean, they do it to help you improve your drafts.
2) Read the issue drafting instructions. Your submissions as they are at present will not be accepted by the editors.

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I Already Read It, This Is A Lie
Issues Made So Far: 0/3

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Postby Reploid Productions » Fri Sep 23, 2022 11:47 pm

Pennyslov wrote:
Reploid Productions wrote:Let me give it to you point blank:
1) DO NOT make fraudulent reports to moderation. DO NOT threaten to make fraudulent reports when someone criticizes your drafts. So long as players are staying within the site rules they are allowed to criticize your issue drafts. They don't do it to be mean, they do it to help you improve your drafts.
2) Read the issue drafting instructions. Your submissions as they are at present will not be accepted by the editors.

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I Already Read It, This Is A Lie

You can say it's a lie all you like, but that will not change the consequences of your behavior.

If you try to falsely report players to moderation, YOU will be the one getting in trouble for it. Only report actual rulebreaking. People giving you criticism is not against the rules.

You need to review the issue writing instructions. You need to apply that knowledge and listen to feedback on your drafts. Your drafts as they currently are WILL NOT make it into the game. There is no maybe about it. They are not remotely close to the necessary level of quality to be considered.
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Postby The Orwell Society » Sat Sep 24, 2022 5:09 am

This needs a lot of improving… and yet you submitted it prematurely. Read the rules, please…
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This Is Funny

Postby Pennyslov » Sat Sep 24, 2022 5:11 am

The Orwell Society wrote:This needs a lot of improving… and yet you submitted it prematurely. Read the rules, please…
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