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[DRAFT] Reduction of Crime Rates

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[DRAFT] Reduction of Crime Rates

Postby East Diegustasta » Sun Aug 14, 2022 4:53 pm

Hello. The WA council is here to address an reduction of crime rates. This proposal will describe crime rate reduction and efforts to stop it.

DISMAYED that the crime rates in the WA member nations are increasing, the Assembly had to find a way to end it.

APPALLED that some nations have high crime rates,

GRANTED that an effective police force in a nation is established,

The council must find a way to stop high crime rates and lower it significantly. Hereby amends to the assembly, East Diegustasta.

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Postby Wayneactia » Sun Aug 14, 2022 5:11 pm

Yet more illegal. Please do everyone (and especially yourself) a huge favor and stop posting. Try spending your time reading THE RULES instead.....
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Postby BEEstreetz » Sun Aug 14, 2022 6:09 pm

The Radio Show slowly fades in "Uhh well define crime rate my man? What is a crime? Is there such a thing as a victimless crime? Look, bottom line is: No WAPOL in OUR superstate of (n-0/1) existence! Andd I speak on behalf of all Bees." Radio Show slowly fades out with an odd track of high kicks and low drops fading in instead


OOC: Illegal. Also I don't think that "Granted" used like this, is legalese at all.
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Postby Mectop Caporainordia » Sun Aug 14, 2022 7:46 pm

Oh two can play at that game! You two are absolutely sarcastic! We did not do anything!

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Postby Free Algerstonia » Sun Aug 14, 2022 8:24 pm

well what if I like crime?
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Postby Mectop Caporainordia » Sun Aug 14, 2022 8:32 pm

Free Algerstonia wrote:well what if I like crime?

You can approve it

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Postby Free Algerstonia » Sun Aug 14, 2022 8:37 pm

Mectop Caporainordia wrote:
Free Algerstonia wrote:well what if I like crime?

You can approve it

but it's a reduction in crime rates. why would I approve a resolution that reduces a crime rate when I support crime? this resolution is concerningly one-sided towards nations that oppose crime, i think the author should consider both sides of the argument
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Postby Shazbotdom » Sun Aug 14, 2022 8:41 pm

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Postby Mectop Caporainordia » Sun Aug 14, 2022 9:03 pm

Shazbotdom wrote:Dr. Evil pops his head into the debate room, "How 'bout NO!"

Stop it.

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Postby Shazbotdom » Sun Aug 14, 2022 10:08 pm

Mectop Caporainordia wrote:
Shazbotdom wrote:Dr. Evil pops his head into the debate room, "How 'bout NO!"

Stop it.

The Imperial Ambassador pushes Dr. Evil out of the room and then takes his seat. "It seems that this Proposal doesn't sufficiently legislate properly. Also, I question how this is something that this August Body needs to worry about. Should this not be something that should be handled Domestically, by the legislatures within each individual Member State? If this ever makes it way out of the Drafting Phase, you can bet that the Empire will vote against this and pressure all our allies that are Member States to vote against this, as well."
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Postby Daarwyrth » Sun Aug 14, 2022 11:30 pm

OOC: Before continuing to write proposals or work on this proposal, please make sure to read through the threads pinned at the top of this sub-forum. And I mean read them, not just skim through them. Then, I recommend you spend some weeks observing how other people write their proposals in this forum, try to engage with them a little through RP and such, and only then try to write another proposal.

Because I am not surprised this kept being marked as illegal, as you're completely unaware of the proposal basics judging from the way you have written this draft.
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Postby East Diegustasta » Mon Aug 15, 2022 12:49 pm

It can and will be appropriate and legal.

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Postby Shazbotdom » Mon Aug 15, 2022 12:53 pm

East Diegustasta wrote:It can and will be appropriate and legal.

"As it currently stands, Ambassador," Ambassador Flaberghasted states, "it does not look legal and I believe it has no chance in hell of becoming legal."
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Postby The Orwell Society » Mon Aug 15, 2022 2:57 pm

This does nothing... there is no action whatsoever. All you're doing is saying that there is crime and someone should do something about it, but provide no action to solve the problem. It's also illegal, as per two rules that you would know if you would have read them.
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Postby Mectop Caporainordia » Mon Aug 15, 2022 8:15 pm

It is NOT!

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Postby Daarwyrth » Mon Aug 15, 2022 10:02 pm

East Diegustasta wrote:It can and will be appropriate and legal.

In its current state it isn't, period. If you submit this in its current shape GenSec will mark it as illegal. Read the stickied threads attached to this sub-forum and do so thoroughly, because it's evident you're not aware of the rules of proposal writing.
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Postby East Diegustasta » Tue Aug 16, 2022 10:42 am

No need to argue

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Postby Shazbotdom » Tue Aug 16, 2022 11:49 am

East Diegustasta wrote:No need to argue

"There is no argument, Ambassador. The facts speak for themselves. This proposal has zero chance of becoming Legal."
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Postby East Diegustasta » Tue Aug 16, 2022 1:01 pm

Shazbotdom wrote:
East Diegustasta wrote:No need to argue

"There is no argument, Ambassador. The facts speak for themselves. This proposal has zero chance of becoming Legal."

No roleplaying quotes.

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Postby Goobergunchia » Tue Aug 16, 2022 1:27 pm

East Diegustasta wrote:
Shazbotdom wrote:"There is no argument, Ambassador. The facts speak for themselves. This proposal has zero chance of becoming Legal."

No roleplaying quotes.

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Postby Daarwyrth » Tue Aug 16, 2022 3:21 pm

East Diegustasta wrote:No need to argue

Who is arguing? What everyone said is a matter of fact :P your proposal is illegal and you have done nothing to change the draft text.

East Diegustasta wrote:No roleplaying quotes.

That is not for you to decide. If someone wants to respond to you through roleplay, they can do so without hindrance.
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Postby Imperium Anglorum » Tue Aug 16, 2022 3:58 pm

The proposal in its current state is not legal. It is also barely a proposal. A good resolution consists of three things: a problem to solve, a policy taken to solve it, and an implementation of that policy. There is no policy here, though the soft whispers of an implementation ("please find out what policy to implement for me please") are present. Large portions of the proposal need working on.

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Postby Outer Sparta » Tue Aug 16, 2022 5:21 pm

East Diegustasta wrote:It can and will be appropriate and legal.

Only if you take the steps and make it so by reading the rules and looking at guides that are pinned on this forum. It doesn't become legal on its own.
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Postby Wayneactia » Tue Aug 16, 2022 5:31 pm

Outer Sparta wrote:
East Diegustasta wrote:It can and will be appropriate and legal.

Only if you take the steps and make it so by reading the rules and looking at guides that are pinned on this forum. It doesn't become legal on its own.

Are you sure? I have heard a rumour that if you yell it is legal enough times, it somehow magically becomes legal.
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