Rate AN's chosen factbook/dispatch II

by **Meadowfields** » Thu May 05, 2022 8:51 am

I remember seeing this game a while ago but it got autopruned. So, the rules are simple. AN chooses one of their factbooks, and BN rates it, preferably with a review. Correct me if the number is wrong. There's no AN above me to start, so BN please rate my Religion factbook (WIP)

by **Remulia** » Thu May 05, 2022 5:41 pm

Considering how informative it was, the fact that i'm jealous that you managed to built an interesting religion, and although is a WIP..i will give it a 10/10
My turn...
https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=1491241

by **Zaranistan** » Fri May 06, 2022 4:56 pm

In terms of aesthetics, the character profile style with the pictures of each family member is unique. I will say the information about each family member is not the most descriptive or in depth as compared to other similar in world characters family factbooks. Overall, I would give it a 6.5/10, mainly because I personally would've liked to see a different formatting style and more information provided. Although I did like the unique choice for character presentation.

Please rate the below factbook:
https://www.nationstates.net/nation=zar ... id=1686713

by **Lumnoscherya** » Fri May 06, 2022 4:58 pm

In terms of writing and detail, I'll give it a 9/10. However, the formatting could be done better; the first box could use a little [floatright], for example. Overall, it's a 7/10.

How about this?

by **Zaranistan** » Fri May 06, 2022 5:08 pm

Lumnoscherya wrote:In terms of writing and detail, I'll give it a 9/10. However, the formatting could be done better; the first box could use a little [floatright], for example. Overall, it's a 7/10.

I actually do have floatright for the first box in the bbcoding for it, however it doesn't seem to actually want to floatright, possibly due to its size.

/skipme

by **Lumnoscherya** » Fri May 06, 2022 5:10 pm

Zaranistan wrote:
Lumnoscherya wrote:In terms of writing and detail, I'll give it a 9/10. However, the formatting could be done better; the first box could use a little [floatright], for example. Overall, it's a 7/10.

I actually do have floatright for the first box in the bbcoding for it, however it doesn't seem to actually want to floatright, possibly due to its size.

/skipme

As for that problem, I believe you could prob make new lines out of the thiccer areas...
/still me

by **Meadowfields** » Fri May 06, 2022 6:03 pm

Lumnoscherya wrote:In terms of writing and detail, I'll give it a 9/10. However, the formatting could be done better; the first box could use a little [floatright], for example. Overall, it's a 7/10.

How about this?

I personally love the font and the dark tone of the background, it literally gives me chills. The ending is hopeful and confident, while still being dark. The way you describe the massacres and invasion is saddening. Also, I love your writing, it's intriguing and melodramatic, in a good way. The only thing I could recommend is a shorter space in the middle of your factbook as it might draw readers' attention out, but still...9.8/10.
Edit: Forgot to add dispatch, Here you go

by **Ashotu** » Fri May 06, 2022 6:06 pm

I don't have anything above so,
Prism holy book

by **Meadowfields** » Fri May 06, 2022 7:29 pm

5.8/10. Pretty funny, however needs more lore.
https://www.nationstates.net/nation=mea ... id=1560127

by **Mirum II** » Tue May 10, 2022 8:31 pm

Quite detailed and informative, simply-formatted, and (mostly) easy to read. 7/10. May need more spacing between sections toward the bottom so it doesn't look like one big text block, but otherwise looks quite decent.

BN, please rate this one.

by **Bendicion** » Tue May 10, 2022 8:35 pm

Mirum II wrote:Quite detailed and informative, simply-formatted, and (mostly) easy to read. 7/10. May need more spacing between sections toward the bottom so it doesn't look like one big text block, but otherwise looks quite decent.

BN, please rate this one.

6/10

The Content is amazing. But the format of your dispatch makes it look like it will be hard to read over and grip one to continue reading. Make sure to try and come of unique ways to make your content look much more appealing. Kudos!

ACHEUS Military Service Provider

by **Meadowfields** » Mon May 16, 2022 7:53 am

8/10.
The tables fit pretty well within the boxes and the factbook, and the information is written exactly how it seems Wikipedia would write it.
BN, rate this one: https://www.nationstates.net/nation=mea ... id=1560127

by **Farallon** » Tue May 17, 2022 1:13 pm

4/10
You need to pick a factbook next time. I chose DA SUPER WEPON. The Attack Moons remind me of that one moon with a face that is in Smash Bros. Overall, the factbook could've been more descriptive and I found it hard to really be able to picture the "subspace" realm and the gravitic nexuses.

BN: I only have one factbook.

by **Meadowfields** » Wed May 18, 2022 10:23 am

DA ORK, you need to choose one of your own factbooks too. I chose this one: https://www.nationstates.net/nation=da_ ... id=1706332

I like the vast variety of information you give about the orcs, and their intelligence, habits, however I think some of the paragraphs need more expansion. 7.1/10

BN, please rate my Overview factbook (WIP)

by **Elbian Federation** » Wed May 18, 2022 10:54 am

7/10
A standard overview but I see the potential. For example, the custom map in your overview is very unique.

Nationale Freiheit Newspapers: https://www.nationstates.net/nation=elb ... id=1658532

by **Fenypt** » Wed May 18, 2022 11:52 am

Wow, I'm blown away by the effort you've put into this, 10/10 from me, and to add something every month? Awesome.

Now for my pathetic factbook chapter on history :,D
https://www.nationstates.net/nation=fen ... id=1705540

by **Meadowfields** » Wed May 18, 2022 11:55 am

7.8/10. Great information and your writing is succinct, however I recommend using some formatting and expanding more on some points.

BN, rate this: https://www.nationstates.net/nation=mea ... id=1697239

by **Farallon** » Thu May 19, 2022 10:53 pm

9/10 Have fun with all 271. Extremely comprehensive, would like to see some interesting historical or just general facts about them.

BN I only have one factbook

by **Reich of the New World Order** » Fri May 20, 2022 6:36 pm

As an overview its a pretty good one.Good format, covers everything important about the nation and its not too long 10/10

https://www.nationstates.net/nation=rei ... id=1708173

by **Kahekordne Union of Spib** » Fri May 20, 2022 6:40 pm

Roboman is quite menacing, and the two dudes on the bottom simultaneously feel like a threat and a marvel 8/10

https://www.nationstates.net/nation=kah ... id=1706076

by **Great United States** » Fri May 20, 2022 6:43 pm

7.5 uhh,i...i...dont know...

https://www.nationstates.net/nation=great_united_states/detail=factbook/id=1694413

by **Lilguay** » Sun May 22, 2022 9:44 pm

7/10

Gives all the basics I suppose, nothing outstanding but well made.

https://www.nationstates.net/nation=lil ... id=1701745

by **The Kingdom of The Three Isles** » Sun May 22, 2022 9:47 pm

Although I partly have no idea what you are talking about, it looks pretty detailed 7/10

BN: https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=1605881

by **Meadowfields** » Mon May 23, 2022 7:23 am

7.3/10, like all the small economic details there and there but the news stories could be a bit longer.

BN: https://www.nationstates.net/nation=mea ... id=1691454

by **Lilguay** » Mon May 23, 2022 9:42 am

8.5/10

Very detailed data graph that helps to give an understanding of your nation's political landscape.

https://www.nationstates.net/nation=lil ... id=1704313

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