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[ABANDONED] Commend Her Majesty Queen Victoria

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Saint Arsenio
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[ABANDONED] Commend Her Majesty Queen Victoria

Postby Saint Arsenio » Wed Jul 28, 2021 10:20 am

Recognizing Her Majesty Queen Victoria as the epitome of hard-work and determination,

Noting that Empire of Great Britain's existence and years-worth of success is a result of Her Majesty Queen Victoria's foundation-laying work,

Appreciating Her Majesty Queen Victoria's joint-leadership with Lunayria during the liberation of Celtic Britain, one of Empire of Great Britain's former protectorate regions, after the attempted take-over of two raider regions,

Also appreciating the multiple regional factbooks authored by Her Majesty Queen Victoria, which have helped and informed hundreds of Empire of Great Britain's past and current residents,

Hereby Commends Her Majesty Queen Victoria.


Constructive criticism welcome!
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Postby Bhang Bhang Duc » Wed Jul 28, 2021 12:45 pm

Sorry, nothing commendable here. Have a read through passed C&Cs to get an idea of the standard required.

But thank you for drafting here first.
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Postby Saint Arsenio » Wed Jul 28, 2021 12:59 pm

Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:Sorry, nothing commendable here. Have a read through passed C&Cs to get an idea of the standard required.

But thank you for drafting here first.

Thanks, but is it the way I wrote the proposal, or the things I mentioned in it? If it's the things I mentioned in the proposal, I don't see how they aren't commendable. Other nations have been commended for similar acts, just involving older, larger regions.

EDIT: If it's the way I wrote it, I can always edit it to make it better.
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Postby Wayneactia » Wed Jul 28, 2021 11:38 pm

Saint Arsenio wrote:
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:Sorry, nothing commendable here. Have a read through passed C&Cs to get an idea of the standard required.

But thank you for drafting here first.

Thanks, but is it the way I wrote the proposal, or the things I mentioned in it? If it's the things I mentioned in the proposal, I don't see how they aren't commendable. Other nations have been commended for similar acts, just involving older, larger regions.

EDIT: If it's the way I wrote it, I can always edit it to make it better.

Unfortunately there is nothing to make better. There simply isn't enough material to commend the target on. It is a good try, and posting the draft here first was excellent.

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Postby Bhang Bhang Duc » Thu Jul 29, 2021 12:30 am

Saint Arsenio wrote:
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:Sorry, nothing commendable here. Have a read through passed C&Cs to get an idea of the standard required.

But thank you for drafting here first.

Thanks, but is it the way I wrote the proposal, or the things I mentioned in it? If it's the things I mentioned in the proposal, I don't see how they aren't commendable. Other nations have been commended for similar acts, just involving older, larger regions.

EDIT: If it's the way I wrote it, I can always edit it to make it better.

There’s nothing wrong with your writing, it’s just the content. To be Commendable a nation should have a long list of achievements over a period of time that makes them stand out from the crowd.

Solely managing a region and authoring factbooks doesn’t reach the necessary standard.
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Postby Team Lennox » Thu Jul 29, 2021 4:38 am

Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:
Saint Arsenio wrote:Thanks, but is it the way I wrote the proposal, or the things I mentioned in it? If it's the things I mentioned in the proposal, I don't see how they aren't commendable. Other nations have been commended for similar acts, just involving older, larger regions.

EDIT: If it's the way I wrote it, I can always edit it to make it better.

There’s nothing wrong with your writing, it’s just the content. To be Commendable a nation should have a long list of achievements over a period of time that makes them stand out from the crowd.

Solely managing a region and authoring factbooks doesn’t reach the necessary standard.

Dat's riht mate. But like author, you should see previous SC Commens and see how well written the are.
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Postby Saint Arsenio » Thu Jul 29, 2021 10:43 am

Thank you all.
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