Note: current draft was done on a mobile device. If autocorrect has done something stupid, please point it out.
Current draft:
Validity: Picked 343.1
Description:
Following the abolition of the penny, millions of this year's pennies were sent to be melted down as a result. However, an unknown employee working at the @@CAPITAL@@ Mint managed to smuggle several of the coins out of the facility, saving them from destruction and making them extremely rare. Many had worked their way into the hands of collectors before the incident became publicly known.
[Option 1] "We made the change to abolish the penny because it costs nearly twice its value to make!" proclaims mint superintendent @@RANDOMNAME@@, quite upset by the theft. "The stolen coins should be seized and returned to the mint so they can be destroyed, like they should've been in the first place." @@HE@@ shuffles through a binder and pulls out a paper with auction records, pointing to a particular sale. "And I think I know where to start looking."
[Effect]: people asking a penny for another's thoughts usually draws the eyes of the Secret Service
[Option 2] Museum donor @@RANDOMFIRSTNAME@@ Smith makes @@HIS@@ way to your desk, carrying an odd box. "I agree that they should be recovered, but destroying them makes no cents! These unique coins should be placed in museums alongside @@NAME@@'s other numismatic artifacts. @@DENONYMPLURAL@@ and tourists alike would love to see coins in the nation's museums." @@HE@@ opens the box and takes out an old silver coin from Marche Noir, encapsulated in a plastic slab, then hands it to you.
[Effect]: tourists pay money to see money on display in the nation's museums
[Option 3]: "You can't just take away the coins!" yells shoe designer and collector @@RANDOMFIRSTNAMEMALE@@ Wittman. "I bought one for a huge amount of @@CURRENCYPLURAL@@, and the government has no right to take it away! The government should subsidize numismatics by celebrating historic events with special-edition commemorative coins, purchaseable from the @@CAPITAL@@ mint, to turn collecting into a national industry!"
[Effect] @@DENONYMPLURAL@@ are constantly checking their pocket change for rare coins
Description:
Following the abolition of the penny, millions of this year's pennies were sent to be melted down as a result. However, an unknown employee working at the @@CAPITAL@@ Mint managed to smuggle several of the coins out of the facility, saving them from destruction and making them extremely rare. Many had worked their way into the hands of collectors before the incident became publicly known.
[Option 1] "We made the change to abolish the penny because it costs nearly twice its value to make!" proclaims mint superintendent @@RANDOMNAME@@, quite upset by the theft. "The stolen coins should be seized and returned to the mint so they can be destroyed, like they should've been in the first place." @@HE@@ shuffles through a binder and pulls out a paper with auction records, pointing to a particular sale. "And I think I know where to start looking."
[Effect]: people asking a penny for another's thoughts usually draws the eyes of the Secret Service
[Option 2] Museum donor @@RANDOMFIRSTNAME@@ Smith makes @@HIS@@ way to your desk, carrying an odd box. "I agree that they should be recovered, but destroying them makes no cents! These unique coins should be placed in museums alongside @@NAME@@'s other numismatic artifacts. @@DENONYMPLURAL@@ and tourists alike would love to see coins in the nation's museums." @@HE@@ opens the box and takes out an old silver coin from Marche Noir, encapsulated in a plastic slab, then hands it to you.
[Effect]: tourists pay money to see money on display in the nation's museums
[Option 3]: "You can't just take away the coins!" yells shoe designer and collector @@RANDOMFIRSTNAMEMALE@@ Wittman. "I bought one for a huge amount of @@CURRENCYPLURAL@@, and the government has no right to take it away! The government should subsidize numismatics by celebrating historic events with special-edition commemorative coins, purchaseable from the @@CAPITAL@@ mint, to turn collecting into a national industry!"
[Effect] @@DENONYMPLURAL@@ are constantly checking their pocket change for rare coins
Fourth draft:
Validity: Picked 343.1 OR 343.3
Description:
Following the abolition of the penny, the millions of pennies minted so far this year were sent to be melted down. However, an unknown mint employee managed to smuggle several of the coins out of the @@CAPITAL@@ mint, saving them from destruction and making the coins very rare. Many worked their way into the hands of collectors before the incident became publicly known.
[Option 1] “We made the change to abolish the penny because it costs nearly twice its value to mint!” proclaims mint inspector @@RANDOMNAME@@, quite upset by the theft. “The stolen coins should be seized and returned to the mint so they can be destroyed, like they should’ve been in the first place.” @@HE@@ shuffles through a binder and pulls out a paper with auction records, pointing to a particular sale. “And I think I know where to start looking.”
[Effect]: the @@DENONYMADJECTIVE@@ Secret Service is seizing rare pennies
[Option 2]: Museum donor @@RANDOMFIRSTNAME@@ Smith makes @@HIS@@ way to your desk, carrying an odd box. “I agree that they should be recovered, but destroying them makes no cents! These unique coins should be placed in museums alongside @@NAME@@’s other numismatic artifacts. @@DENONYMPLURAL@@ and tourists alike would love to see coins in museums.” @@HE@@ opens the box and takes out an old silver coin from Marche Noir, encapsulated in a plastic slab, and hands it to you.
[Effect]: @@DENONYMPLURAL@@ can pay money to see money in the nation’s museums.
[Option 3]: “You can’t just take away the coins!” yells shoe designer and collector @@RANDOMFIRSTNAMEMALE@@ Wittman. “I bought one for seven-and-a-half million @@CURRENCYPLURAL@@, and the government has no right to take it away! We should continue making pennies too, they’re a part of our cultural heritage. We could even celebrate historic events with special-edition commemorative coins, purchasable from the @@CAPITAL@@ mint, to turn numismatics into a national industry!”
[Effect]: @@DENONYMPLURAL@@ are constantly checking their pocket change for numismatic rarities
[Option 4]: “Whaddaya mean seven-and-a-half million @@CURRENCYPLURAL@@?” groans a grumpy old man sitting outside your office. “That’s noncents! A penny is worth one 100th of a @@CURRENCY@@, who cares when it was made? Mandate that coins are worth what they’re supposed to be worth. This coin is a penny, it’s worth a penny.” The old man gets up and leaves, muttering about how it was in the good ol’ days.
Description:
Following the abolition of the penny, the millions of pennies minted so far this year were sent to be melted down. However, an unknown mint employee managed to smuggle several of the coins out of the @@CAPITAL@@ mint, saving them from destruction and making the coins very rare. Many worked their way into the hands of collectors before the incident became publicly known.
[Option 1] “We made the change to abolish the penny because it costs nearly twice its value to mint!” proclaims mint inspector @@RANDOMNAME@@, quite upset by the theft. “The stolen coins should be seized and returned to the mint so they can be destroyed, like they should’ve been in the first place.” @@HE@@ shuffles through a binder and pulls out a paper with auction records, pointing to a particular sale. “And I think I know where to start looking.”
[Effect]: the @@DENONYMADJECTIVE@@ Secret Service is seizing rare pennies
[Option 2]: Museum donor @@RANDOMFIRSTNAME@@ Smith makes @@HIS@@ way to your desk, carrying an odd box. “I agree that they should be recovered, but destroying them makes no cents! These unique coins should be placed in museums alongside @@NAME@@’s other numismatic artifacts. @@DENONYMPLURAL@@ and tourists alike would love to see coins in museums.” @@HE@@ opens the box and takes out an old silver coin from Marche Noir, encapsulated in a plastic slab, and hands it to you.
[Effect]: @@DENONYMPLURAL@@ can pay money to see money in the nation’s museums.
[Option 3]: “You can’t just take away the coins!” yells shoe designer and collector @@RANDOMFIRSTNAMEMALE@@ Wittman. “I bought one for seven-and-a-half million @@CURRENCYPLURAL@@, and the government has no right to take it away! We should continue making pennies too, they’re a part of our cultural heritage. We could even celebrate historic events with special-edition commemorative coins, purchasable from the @@CAPITAL@@ mint, to turn numismatics into a national industry!”
[Effect]: @@DENONYMPLURAL@@ are constantly checking their pocket change for numismatic rarities
[Option 4]: “Whaddaya mean seven-and-a-half million @@CURRENCYPLURAL@@?” groans a grumpy old man sitting outside your office. “That’s noncents! A penny is worth one 100th of a @@CURRENCY@@, who cares when it was made? Mandate that coins are worth what they’re supposed to be worth. This coin is a penny, it’s worth a penny.” The old man gets up and leaves, muttering about how it was in the good ol’ days.
Third draft:
Validity: Picked 343.1 OR 343.3
Description:
Following the abolition of the penny, the millions of pennies minted so far this year were sent to be melted down. However, an unknown mint employee managed to smuggle several of the coins out of the @@CAPITAL@@ mint, saving them from destruction and making the coins very rare. Many worked their way into the hands of collectors before the incident became publicly known.
[Option 1] “We made the change to abolish the penny because it costs nearly twice its value to mint!” proclaims mint inspector @@RANDOMNAME@@, quite upset by the theft. “The stolen coins should be seized and returned to the mint so they can be destroyed, like they should’ve been in the first place.” @@HE@@ then presents a paper with auction records, pointing to a particular sale. “And I think I know where to start looking.”
[Effect]: the @@DENONYMADJECTIVE@@ Secret Service is seizing rare pennies
[Option 2]: Museum donor @@RANDOMFIRSTNAME@@ Smith makes @@HIS@@ way to your desk. “I agree that they should be recovered, but destroying them makes no cents! These unique coins should be placed in museums alongside @@NAME@@’s other numismatic artifacts. @@DENONYMPLURAL@@ and tourists alike would love to see coins in museums.” @@HE@@ hands you an old silver coin from Marche Noir, encapsulated in a plastic slab.
[Effect]: @@DENONYMPLURAL@@ can pay money to see money in the nation’s museums.
[Option 3]: “You can’t just take away the coins!” yells shoe designer and collector @@RANDOMFIRSTNAMEMALE@@ Wittman. “I bought one for seven-and-a-half million @@CURRENCYPLURAL@@, and the government has no right to take it away! We should continue making pennies too, they’re a part of our cultural heritage. We could even celebrate historic events with special-edition commemorative coins, purchasable from the @@CAPITAL@@ mint, to turn numismatics into a national industry!”
[Effect]: @@DENONYMPLURAL@@ are constantly checking their pocket change for numismatic rarities
[Option 4]: “Whaddaya mean seven-and-a-half million @@CURRENCYPLURAL@@?” groans a grumpy old man sitting outside your office. “That’s noncents! A penny is worth one 100th of a @@CURRENCY@@, who cares when it was made? Mandate that coins are worth what they’re supposed to be worth. This coin is a penny, it’s worth a penny.”
[Effect]: a coin is only worth face value
Description:
Following the abolition of the penny, the millions of pennies minted so far this year were sent to be melted down. However, an unknown mint employee managed to smuggle several of the coins out of the @@CAPITAL@@ mint, saving them from destruction and making the coins very rare. Many worked their way into the hands of collectors before the incident became publicly known.
[Option 1] “We made the change to abolish the penny because it costs nearly twice its value to mint!” proclaims mint inspector @@RANDOMNAME@@, quite upset by the theft. “The stolen coins should be seized and returned to the mint so they can be destroyed, like they should’ve been in the first place.” @@HE@@ then presents a paper with auction records, pointing to a particular sale. “And I think I know where to start looking.”
[Effect]: the @@DENONYMADJECTIVE@@ Secret Service is seizing rare pennies
[Option 2]: Museum donor @@RANDOMFIRSTNAME@@ Smith makes @@HIS@@ way to your desk. “I agree that they should be recovered, but destroying them makes no cents! These unique coins should be placed in museums alongside @@NAME@@’s other numismatic artifacts. @@DENONYMPLURAL@@ and tourists alike would love to see coins in museums.” @@HE@@ hands you an old silver coin from Marche Noir, encapsulated in a plastic slab.
[Effect]: @@DENONYMPLURAL@@ can pay money to see money in the nation’s museums.
[Option 3]: “You can’t just take away the coins!” yells shoe designer and collector @@RANDOMFIRSTNAMEMALE@@ Wittman. “I bought one for seven-and-a-half million @@CURRENCYPLURAL@@, and the government has no right to take it away! We should continue making pennies too, they’re a part of our cultural heritage. We could even celebrate historic events with special-edition commemorative coins, purchasable from the @@CAPITAL@@ mint, to turn numismatics into a national industry!”
[Effect]: @@DENONYMPLURAL@@ are constantly checking their pocket change for numismatic rarities
[Option 4]: “Whaddaya mean seven-and-a-half million @@CURRENCYPLURAL@@?” groans a grumpy old man sitting outside your office. “That’s noncents! A penny is worth one 100th of a @@CURRENCY@@, who cares when it was made? Mandate that coins are worth what they’re supposed to be worth. This coin is a penny, it’s worth a penny.”
[Effect]: a coin is only worth face value
Second draft:
Validity: Picked 343.1 OR 343.3
Description:
Following the abolition of the penny, the 445,000 pennies minted so far this year were sent to be melted down. However, an unknown mint employee managed to smuggle several of the now very rare coins out of the @@CAPITAL@@ mint. Many worked their way into the hands of collectors before the incident became publicly known.
[Option 1] “These are stolen objects!” proclaims mint inspector @@RANDOMNAME@@, quite upset by the theft. “The stolen coins should be seized and returned to the mint so they can be destroyed, like they should’ve been in the first place.” @@HE@@ then presents a paper with auction records, pointing to a particular sale. “And I think I know where to start looking.”
[Effect]: the @@DENONYMADJECTIVE@@ Secret Service is seizing rare pennies
[Option 2]: Museum donor @@RANDOMFIRSTNAME@@ Smith makes @@HIS@@ way to your desk. “I agree that they should be recovered, but destroying them makes no cents! These unique coins should be placed in museums alongside @@NAME@@’s other numismatic artifacts.” @@HE@@ hands you an old silver coin from Marche Noir, encapsulated in a plastic slab. “@@DENONYMPLURAL@@ and tourists alike would love to see coins in museums.”
[Effect]: @@DENONYMPLURAL@@ can pay money to see money in the nation’s museums.
[Option 3]: “You can’t just take away the coins!” yells shoe designer and collector @@RANDOMFIRSTNAMEMALE@@ Wittman. “I bought one for seven-and-a-half million @@CURRENCYPLURAL@@, and the government has no right to take it away! We should continue making pennies too, they’re a part of our cultural heritage. We could even celebrate historic events with special-edition commemorative coins, purchasable from the @@CAPITAL@@ mint, to turn numismatics into a national industry!”
[Effect]: @@DENONYMPLURAL@@ are constantly checking their pocket change for numismatic rarities
[Option 4]: “Whaddaya mean seven-and-a-half million @@CURRENCYPLURAL@@?” groans a grumpy old man sitting outside your office. “That’s noncents! A penny is worth one 100th of a @@CURRENCY@@, who cares when it was made? Mandate that coins are worth what they’re supposed to be worth. This coin is a penny, it’s worth a penny.”
[Effect]: a coin is only worth face value
Description:
Following the abolition of the penny, the 445,000 pennies minted so far this year were sent to be melted down. However, an unknown mint employee managed to smuggle several of the now very rare coins out of the @@CAPITAL@@ mint. Many worked their way into the hands of collectors before the incident became publicly known.
[Option 1] “These are stolen objects!” proclaims mint inspector @@RANDOMNAME@@, quite upset by the theft. “The stolen coins should be seized and returned to the mint so they can be destroyed, like they should’ve been in the first place.” @@HE@@ then presents a paper with auction records, pointing to a particular sale. “And I think I know where to start looking.”
[Effect]: the @@DENONYMADJECTIVE@@ Secret Service is seizing rare pennies
[Option 2]: Museum donor @@RANDOMFIRSTNAME@@ Smith makes @@HIS@@ way to your desk. “I agree that they should be recovered, but destroying them makes no cents! These unique coins should be placed in museums alongside @@NAME@@’s other numismatic artifacts.” @@HE@@ hands you an old silver coin from Marche Noir, encapsulated in a plastic slab. “@@DENONYMPLURAL@@ and tourists alike would love to see coins in museums.”
[Effect]: @@DENONYMPLURAL@@ can pay money to see money in the nation’s museums.
[Option 3]: “You can’t just take away the coins!” yells shoe designer and collector @@RANDOMFIRSTNAMEMALE@@ Wittman. “I bought one for seven-and-a-half million @@CURRENCYPLURAL@@, and the government has no right to take it away! We should continue making pennies too, they’re a part of our cultural heritage. We could even celebrate historic events with special-edition commemorative coins, purchasable from the @@CAPITAL@@ mint, to turn numismatics into a national industry!”
[Effect]: @@DENONYMPLURAL@@ are constantly checking their pocket change for numismatic rarities
[Option 4]: “Whaddaya mean seven-and-a-half million @@CURRENCYPLURAL@@?” groans a grumpy old man sitting outside your office. “That’s noncents! A penny is worth one 100th of a @@CURRENCY@@, who cares when it was made? Mandate that coins are worth what they’re supposed to be worth. This coin is a penny, it’s worth a penny.”
[Effect]: a coin is only worth face value
First draft:
Validity: Picked 343.1 OR 343.3
Description:
Following the abolition of the penny, the 445,000 pennies minted so far this year were sent to be melted down. However, an unknown mint employee managed to smuggle several of the now very rare coins out of the @@CAPITAL@@ mint. Many worked their way into the hands of collectors before the incident became publicly known.
[Option 1] “These are stolen objects!” proclaims mint inspector @@RANDOMNAME@@, quite upset by the theft. “The stolen coins should be seized and returned to the mint so they can be destroyed, like they should’ve been in the first place.”
[Effect]: the @@DENONYMADJECTIVE@@ Secret Service is seizing rare pennies
[Option 2]: Museum donor @@RANDOMFIRSTNAME@@ Smith makes @@HIS@@ way to your desk. “I agree that they should be recovered, but why destroy them? These unique coins should be placed in museums alongside @@NAME@@’s other numismatic artifacts.
[Effect]: @@DENONYMPLURAL@@ can pay money to see money in the nation’s museums.
[Option 3]: “You can’t just take away the coins!” yells shoe designer and collector @@RANDOMFIRSTNAMEMALE@@ Wietman. “I bought one for seven-and-a-half million @@CURRENCY@@s, and the government has no right to take it away! The coins should remain on the open market.”
[Effect]: @@DENONYMPLURAL@@ are constantly checking their pocket change for numismatic rarities
[Option 4] “There’s enough of the coins to make everyone happy,” says your Minister of Compromise. “One for the museums, one for the market, and destroy the rest.”
[Effect]: @@DENONYMPLURAL@@ are constantly checking their pocket change for numismatic rarities
[Option 5]: “Whaddaya mean seven-and-a-half million @@CURRENCY@@s?” groans a grumpy old man. “A penny is worth one 100th of a @@CURRENCY@@, who cares when it was made?”
[Effect]: a coin is only worth face value
Description:
Following the abolition of the penny, the 445,000 pennies minted so far this year were sent to be melted down. However, an unknown mint employee managed to smuggle several of the now very rare coins out of the @@CAPITAL@@ mint. Many worked their way into the hands of collectors before the incident became publicly known.
[Option 1] “These are stolen objects!” proclaims mint inspector @@RANDOMNAME@@, quite upset by the theft. “The stolen coins should be seized and returned to the mint so they can be destroyed, like they should’ve been in the first place.”
[Effect]: the @@DENONYMADJECTIVE@@ Secret Service is seizing rare pennies
[Option 2]: Museum donor @@RANDOMFIRSTNAME@@ Smith makes @@HIS@@ way to your desk. “I agree that they should be recovered, but why destroy them? These unique coins should be placed in museums alongside @@NAME@@’s other numismatic artifacts.
[Effect]: @@DENONYMPLURAL@@ can pay money to see money in the nation’s museums.
[Option 3]: “You can’t just take away the coins!” yells shoe designer and collector @@RANDOMFIRSTNAMEMALE@@ Wietman. “I bought one for seven-and-a-half million @@CURRENCY@@s, and the government has no right to take it away! The coins should remain on the open market.”
[Effect]: @@DENONYMPLURAL@@ are constantly checking their pocket change for numismatic rarities
[Option 4] “There’s enough of the coins to make everyone happy,” says your Minister of Compromise. “One for the museums, one for the market, and destroy the rest.”
[Effect]: @@DENONYMPLURAL@@ are constantly checking their pocket change for numismatic rarities
[Option 5]: “Whaddaya mean seven-and-a-half million @@CURRENCY@@s?” groans a grumpy old man. “A penny is worth one 100th of a @@CURRENCY@@, who cares when it was made?”
[Effect]: a coin is only worth face value
References to the 1933 double eagle:
445,000 coins was the mintage of the 1933 double eagle. The museum donor's last name being Smith references that one of the coins is in the hands of the Smithsonian Institution. Wietman is a reference to Weitzman, the last name of the person who owns the only legal 1933 double eagle.
Problems I currently see with the draft:
-Could use more humor
-Are the options at an adequate length?
-Do the options get their points across effectively?
Any and all feedback would be greatly appreciated! I want to make this draft the best it can be.