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Перекус во время эфира

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Jagar Covenant
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Перекус во время эфира

Postby Jagar Covenant » Tue May 11, 2021 4:19 pm

К вам в кабинет врывается пресса с расспросами о недавно нашумевшем скандале, с известным телеведущим Джагар Ковенанта Гарри Полтоне по прозвищу "Толстяк Гарри", связанный с переедание некачественных продуктов.

1.Из за толпы прессы и репортëров к вам обращается Никсан Фолкстон президент самой крупной кампании фаст-фуда @@ TYPE @@. «Я не понимаю из за чего возникла проблема, ведь если люди не хотят покупать продукты моей компании то почему же они продолжают закупать мою продукцию в свои магазины и дома. Я предлагаю закрыть глаза на инцидент с Гарри и присмотреться к более насущной проблеме , а именно о выходе нашей продукции на мировой рынок» с таким незатейлевым предложением Ноксан удаляетс из вашего кабинета.

2.«Нет! Нет! Нет! И нет!» Кричит протистующая Элизабет Грэб. «Я не позволю пичкать моих детей родных и близких этой дрянью. Запретите всю фаст-фуд продукцию на территории нашей страны, а так же проводите вегетарианские вечера здоровой еды для зависящих от фаст-фуда людей

3.Сквозь прессу в ваш кабинет врывается странного вида человек. «Лидер!!! У данной проблемы есть в корне революционное решение!»Вбежавшем в ваш кабинет человеке вы признание Признанного "безумного" учëного в сфере генной инженерии и хирургии Болотина Захара, который славиться в @@ TYPE @@ своим непревзойденным гением и множественным расстройством личностей. «Лидер есть решение данной проблемы которое в корне решит все вопросы питания нашей страны. Я предлагаю с помощью созданной лично мной методике модифицировать тела людей добавляя внешний элемент питания для потребление минеральных жидкостей на основе витаминных растворов. С помощью данной методики мы в ближайшие несколько лет можем перевести всë население @@ TYPE @@ на исскуственное питание тем самым позволя себе неограниченный экспорт продуктов питания не только на региональный рынок но и на мировой, так мы сможем не только приумножить @@ CURRENCY @@ поступающие в бюджет страны но и решим проблему здорового питания, ведь с помощью исскуственного получения питательных веществ в наш организм мы сможем исключить все возможные вредоностные вещества из нашего рациона тем самым снизив вероятность получения кишечных инфекций к нулю. Правдо есть вероятность того что операции в области хирургии станут в разы более опасны и рискованны но это не беда так мы сможем поднять всеобщее медицинское образование на новый уровень! »

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Postby Phydios » Tue May 11, 2021 5:06 pm

Привет! Это англоязычный форум, и вам нужно будет написать на английском, чтобы получить помощь с черновиком проблемы. Я желаю вам всего наилучшего! Переведено с помощью Google Translate.

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Postby SherpDaWerp » Tue May 11, 2021 5:12 pm

Welcome to GI!

As Phydios mentioned, NS is a primarily English-language game. The language barrier can be a painful one, but you'll have to attempt to write in English for your issue to be published. Don't stress about any grammatical errors that might pop up - natural English-speaking members of this forum can point them out for you.

Unfortunately, also, the topic of fast food has been pretty well-covered in issues - #72, #288, and #350 all cover general "complaints about fast food", which - as far as I can tell - kinda covers your draft.
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Postby Laka Strolistandiler » Wed May 12, 2021 3:58 am

Товарищ, тут на английском писать надо. Это англоязычный форум
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Postby Daarwyrth » Wed May 12, 2021 4:05 am

Aside from the fact that this should be written in English, I do think that option 3 is waaay too long, haha. Unless there is a spoof or joke pertaining the length (like in the issue of filibustering), the options in issues should be relatively brief.

Also, there is already an issue on the quality of food, namely issue #705 "The Germ of An Idea". From what I read through Google Translate, that is what your issue draft is about, no?
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Postby Laka Strolistandiler » Wed May 12, 2021 4:13 am

Daarwyrth wrote:Aside from the fact that this should be written in English, I do think that option 3 is waaay too long, haha. Unless there is a spoof or joke pertaining the length (like in the issue of filibustering), the options in issues should be relatively brief.

Also, there is already an issue on the quality of food, namely issue #705 "The Germ of An Idea". From what I read through Google Translate, that is what your issue draft is about, no?

I speak Russian and can basically assure you that it is about the quality of fast food. Furthermore, clause 3 is so long because he specifies all of the scientific ways to improve the quality of the food.

From some broken Russian I also suspect that he, likely accidentally, firstly translated this from Russian to English and than translated it into Russian again.
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Postby Daarwyrth » Wed May 12, 2021 4:17 am

Laka Strolistandiler wrote:
Daarwyrth wrote:Aside from the fact that this should be written in English, I do think that option 3 is waaay too long, haha. Unless there is a spoof or joke pertaining the length (like in the issue of filibustering), the options in issues should be relatively brief.

Also, there is already an issue on the quality of food, namely issue #705 "The Germ of An Idea". From what I read through Google Translate, that is what your issue draft is about, no?

I speak Russian and can basically assure you that it is about the quality of fast food. Furthermore, clause 3 is so long because he specifies all of the scientific ways to improve the quality of the food.

From some broken Russian I also suspect that he, likely accidentally, firstly translated this from Russian to English and than translated it into Russian again.

The quality of fast food would be a little more distinct than the quality of food in general, but if I am not mistaken we do have issues that deal with the quality of fast-food, so there is still overlap with existing issues, unfortunately.
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