Noahs Second Country wrote:Your longest option is probably around half the length of most options in successful issues. Currently, this reads as if you've filled in a template for an issue using the minimum word count.
You need to do a better job of making each character unique through their actions, dialogue, and reactions. There are definitely more arguments to be made for these stances than a single sentence.
So I lengthened each option more, is this better?
(Also because of all the feedback I decided to delay submission possibly until the last week of the issues contest)