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Protecting Children against Violence, Exploitation and Abuse

Postby Kingsithan » Tue Mar 02, 2021 11:00 pm

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Civil Rights Issue : Very Strong
Proposed by: Constitutional Monarchy of Kingsithan


Keeping in mind the contemporary global challenges arising due to myths, gender inequalities and gulf between poor and rich as underlying principle,

Alarmed by the fact that nearly three out of four children experience violence each year, according to a global study that warns practices such as corporal punishment that are widely spread in most countries,

Acknowledging the need of the hour to prevent any sought of violence, abuse or trafficking of children of any class, caste, gender or nationality,

Having reviewed the misleading reports and fake news reporting agencies, there should be an organized regulatory body to control and administer their actions with the legal preview,

Hereby Resolves:

1) Promoting collaboration with international agencies and organizations to eliminate violence against children globally:
a. Proposes a universal watch body to recognize global grievances and to cumulative data so as to produce solutions that can be applied universally,
b. Recognizing programs such as Together for Girls and the Substance Abuse Prevention Alliance, a Global Coalition to End Violence against Children;

2) Encourages implementation of social norms which support a positive culture of parenting and child protection:
a. Public engagement and education campaigns at grass root levels which takes shape on different platforms,
b. Strengthening household financial security for helping families recognize healthy approaches which catalyze the eradication of social evils against children,
c. Supports legislative approaches to reduce corporal punishment;

3) Strongly condemns the violation of humanitarian rights to safeguard the interests of children and imposing stronger punishments on the ones who commit such crimes by identifying potential perpetrators of child exploitation and incarcerating them;

4) Recommends enhancement of quality care and education for children early in life through preschool enrichment with family engagement.

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Postby Scalizagasti » Wed Mar 03, 2021 2:12 pm

I believe this draft would be illegal in its current state, as the only thing it does (i.e. more than encouraging or recommending) is the creation of a committee.
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Postby Ardiveds » Wed Mar 03, 2021 3:18 pm

Alarmed by the fact that nearly three out of four children experience violence each year, according to a global study that warns practices such as corporal punishment that are widely spread in most countries,

"Ambassador, did you pull these statistics out of your ass?"
OOC: Don't use real world number in NS. You can make a general statement though.
implementation of social norms which support a positive culture of parenting and child protection:

"How does one go about "implementing" social norms? Aren't they supposed to be unwritten rules? Policies and legislation are implemented."
Recognizing programs such as Together for Girls and the Substance Abuse Prevention Alliance, a Global Coalition to End Violence against Children;

OOC: I'm not sure if this could a case of rl reference violation.
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Postby Outer Sparta » Wed Mar 03, 2021 3:53 pm

Ardiveds wrote:
Recognizing programs such as Together for Girls and the Substance Abuse Prevention Alliance, a Global Coalition to End Violence against Children;

OOC: I'm not sure if this could a case of rl reference violation.

https://www.togetherforgirls.org/where-we-work/

OOC: Definitely is a rl reference violation with Together for Girls.
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Postby The New California Republic » Wed Mar 03, 2021 3:57 pm

This doesn't appear to actually *do* anything. There are a lot of words like "promoting", "proposes", "encouraging", "recommends", but in terms of actually doing something...it doesn't seem to quite get there.
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Postby The New California Republic » Thu Mar 04, 2021 7:32 am


Why didn't you draft it here some more? A day is nowhere near enough drafting time. And the submitted draft still contains the errors that people have pointed out to you.
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Postby Jedinsto » Thu Mar 04, 2021 7:41 am

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Postby Bananaistan » Fri Mar 05, 2021 12:01 am

Scalizagasti wrote:I believe this draft would be illegal in its current state, as the only thing it does (i.e. more than encouraging or recommending) is the creation of a committee.


OOC: Encourages and recommends are valid operative clauses. The problem here is that they are not strong. Also, the civil rights category is supposed to increase civil freedoms from government interference. This also does not do that. I have marked it illegal in the queue on these grounds.
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Postby Scalizagasti » Fri Mar 05, 2021 8:05 am

Bananaistan wrote:OOC: Encourages and recommends are valid operative clauses. The problem here is that they are not strong. Also, the civil rights category is supposed to increase civil freedoms from government interference. This also does not do that. I have marked it illegal in the queue on these grounds.

Ah I see, my apologies for the mistake.
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