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by Drew Durrnil » Tue Jun 01, 2021 9:14 pm
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:What can I say? I do know how to improve this out of all measure though. Firstly, print out your draft on some nice paper. Secondly, take your draft out for a healthy walk in the country. Next find a field of cows and feed the draft to them. Finally just wait - the improved end product will come out of their ends so to speak.
But seriously this is just another in a long line of poorly researched, badly written, lazy attempts.
by The Free Joy State » Tue Jun 01, 2021 10:50 pm
Drew Durrnil wrote:Due to an issues contest rule, Lumio Magika's coauthorship will be removed.
by Drew Durrnil » Tue Jun 01, 2021 10:52 pm
The Free Joy State wrote:Drew Durrnil wrote:Due to an issues contest rule, Lumio Magika's coauthorship will be removed.
Please do not do that. There have been no tracked changes and it is impossible to tell how much of the draft is yours and how much is Lumio Magika's.
You must enter a draft that you have solely worked on.
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:What can I say? I do know how to improve this out of all measure though. Firstly, print out your draft on some nice paper. Secondly, take your draft out for a healthy walk in the country. Next find a field of cows and feed the draft to them. Finally just wait - the improved end product will come out of their ends so to speak.
But seriously this is just another in a long line of poorly researched, badly written, lazy attempts.
by Lumio Magika » Tue Jun 08, 2021 9:13 am
Lumio Magika wrote:Burn them with holy fire until nothing but ashes remain!
by Drew Durrnil » Tue Jun 29, 2021 10:54 am
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:What can I say? I do know how to improve this out of all measure though. Firstly, print out your draft on some nice paper. Secondly, take your draft out for a healthy walk in the country. Next find a field of cows and feed the draft to them. Finally just wait - the improved end product will come out of their ends so to speak.
But seriously this is just another in a long line of poorly researched, badly written, lazy attempts.
by Drew Durrnil » Fri Jul 02, 2021 10:10 am
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:What can I say? I do know how to improve this out of all measure though. Firstly, print out your draft on some nice paper. Secondly, take your draft out for a healthy walk in the country. Next find a field of cows and feed the draft to them. Finally just wait - the improved end product will come out of their ends so to speak.
But seriously this is just another in a long line of poorly researched, badly written, lazy attempts.
by Candensia » Sat Jul 03, 2021 7:45 am
in @@NATION@@, you enter a hospital as a patient and exit as a superhero
following new legislation in Candensia, in Candensia, you enter a hospital as a patient and exit as a superhero.
The Free Joy State wrote:Time spent working on writing skills -- even if the draft doesn't work -- is never wasted.
by Drew Durrnil » Sat Jul 03, 2021 5:29 pm
Candensia wrote:in @@NATION@@, you enter a hospital as a patient and exit as a superhero
I'd cut out "in @@NATION@@,". If you don't the effect reads as:following new legislation in Candensia, in Candensia, you enter a hospital as a patient and exit as a superhero.
For future reference, the correct macro is @@NAME@@.
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:What can I say? I do know how to improve this out of all measure though. Firstly, print out your draft on some nice paper. Secondly, take your draft out for a healthy walk in the country. Next find a field of cows and feed the draft to them. Finally just wait - the improved end product will come out of their ends so to speak.
But seriously this is just another in a long line of poorly researched, badly written, lazy attempts.
by Lumio Magika » Thu Jul 08, 2021 5:38 pm
Lumio Magika wrote:Burn them with holy fire until nothing but ashes remain!
by Drew Durrnil » Thu Jul 22, 2021 11:20 am
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:What can I say? I do know how to improve this out of all measure though. Firstly, print out your draft on some nice paper. Secondly, take your draft out for a healthy walk in the country. Next find a field of cows and feed the draft to them. Finally just wait - the improved end product will come out of their ends so to speak.
But seriously this is just another in a long line of poorly researched, badly written, lazy attempts.
by Drew Durrnil » Thu Jul 22, 2021 11:34 am
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:What can I say? I do know how to improve this out of all measure though. Firstly, print out your draft on some nice paper. Secondly, take your draft out for a healthy walk in the country. Next find a field of cows and feed the draft to them. Finally just wait - the improved end product will come out of their ends so to speak.
But seriously this is just another in a long line of poorly researched, badly written, lazy attempts.
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