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Commend A Mean Old Man

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Railroad Crossing
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Commend A Mean Old Man

Postby Railroad Crossing » Wed Oct 21, 2020 2:07 pm

This is my first attempt a world assembly proposal.

"The World Assembly,

Recognizing that A mean old man (or AMOM in this proposal) has been in the universe doing good for over 12 years, being founded on the 27th of June, 2008,

Noticing the many WA resolutions that AMOM has written, such as Security Council Resolution #30, "Commend 10000 Islands" a region known for its firsts in regional development and own defender army,

Observing that AMOM was the former delegate of the East Pacific, and is currently a Vizier, or Regional Officer, of said region,

Shocked that there have been many attempts for AMOM to be Commended for his great deeds, but none have prevailed,

Hereby Commends A mean old man."

Anything I should improve on?
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Postby Outer Sparta » Wed Oct 21, 2020 2:08 pm

You need a bit more for this to be a viable commendation.
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Postby Wayneactia » Wed Oct 21, 2020 2:11 pm

Perhaps you should review history first. AMOM will never be commended again.

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Postby Refuge Isle » Wed Oct 21, 2020 2:17 pm

I can probably think of a more difficult player to commend, but it would certainly take some time. :blush:

Best advice would be to find an easier target rather than pursuing this.

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The Unified Missourtama States
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Postby The Unified Missourtama States » Wed Oct 21, 2020 2:19 pm

It's very sparse, but if you were expand it I see some problems
Railroad Crossing wrote:Noticing the many WA resolutions that AMOM has written, such as Security Council Resolution #30, "Commend 10000 Islands" a region known for its firsts in regional development and own defender army,

I don't see a description of the region AMOM is responsible for commending as necessary, there is already the name and number of the resolution, it can be looked up by the individual if needed.
Observing that AMOM was the former delegate of the East Pacific, and is currently a Vizier, or Regional Officer, of said region,

This is actually one of the main reasons to explicitly avoid a commendation of your nominee. As Vizier they were essentially solely responsible for the break in relations between The East Pacific and The West Pacific, an utterance of callous words from AMOM shattered relations between the two regions and caused withdrawal of The West Pacific's oldest embassy. Wrecklessly stupid diplomatic actions do not deserve commendations.

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Postby Comfed » Wed Oct 21, 2020 2:22 pm

AMOM definetly deserves to be C/Ced. But... maybe wrong type of resolution :p

Also, the lack of research is astounding - AMOM is a very famous NSer who has been involved in many many things not mantioned in this resolution. I suggest you read up on NS history before continuing.
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Postby Railroad Crossing » Wed Oct 21, 2020 2:37 pm

The Unified Missourtama States wrote:It's very sparse, but if you were expand it I see some problems
Railroad Crossing wrote:Noticing the many WA resolutions that AMOM has written, such as Security Council Resolution #30, "Commend 10000 Islands" a region known for its firsts in regional development and own defender army,

I don't see a description of the region AMOM is responsible for commending as necessary, there is already the name and number of the resolution, it can be looked up by the individual if needed.
Observing that AMOM was the former delegate of the East Pacific, and is currently a Vizier, or Regional Officer, of said region,

This is actually one of the main reasons to explicitly avoid a commendation of your nominee. As Vizier they were essentially solely responsible for the break in relations between The East Pacific and The West Pacific, an utterance of callous words from AMOM shattered relations between the two regions and caused withdrawal of The West Pacific's oldest embassy. Wrecklessly stupid diplomatic actions do not deserve commendations.
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Postby Wayneactia » Wed Oct 21, 2020 4:37 pm

The NLO scandal, being an NPO Senator..... The list goes on and on as to why AMOM’s original commendation was repealed.

I suggest you abandon this and run as far away from it as humanly possible.

/thread

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Postby Bhang Bhang Duc » Wed Oct 21, 2020 11:27 pm

Your draft is very poorly researched, not particularly well written and currently illegal. I’ll leave it up to you OP to find your mistake.
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Postby Nevertopia » Wed Oct 21, 2020 11:30 pm

im all for commending a mean old man but this needs more work.
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Postby Gorundu » Wed Oct 21, 2020 11:43 pm

Wayneactia wrote:The NLO scandal, being an NPO Senator..... The list goes on and on as to why AMOM’s original commendation was repealed.

I suggest you abandon this and run as far away from it as humanly possible.

/thread

Not that you have a particularly good track record of predicting what the SC wants.
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Postby The Unified Missourtama States » Thu Oct 22, 2020 5:56 am

Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:Your draft is very poorly researched, not particularly well written and currently illegal. I’ll leave it up to you OP to find your mistake.

Oop! I didn't see that it was illegal, but I do now. It's always the pronouns...

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Postby Wayneactia » Thu Oct 22, 2020 4:03 pm

Gorundu wrote:
Wayneactia wrote:The NLO scandal, being an NPO Senator..... The list goes on and on as to why AMOM’s original commendation was repealed.

I suggest you abandon this and run as far away from it as humanly possible.

/thread

Not that you have a particularly good track record of predicting what the SC wants.

Then you take a shot at trying to commend AMOM. Pretty sure it doesn't take a scientist to figure out how well it will go.

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Postby Comfed » Thu Oct 22, 2020 4:05 pm

Can we commend Pierconium next?
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Ever-Wandering Souls wrote:In the liberal justice system, raiding-based offenses are considered especially heinous. In The South Pacific, the dedicated defenders who investigate these vicious felonies are members of an elite squad known as the Council on Regional Security. These are their proscriptions. DUN DUN.

Numero Capitan wrote:I haven't bothered reading back but I can unequivocally say that I agree with everything HEM has said and Unibot is wrong

Put this in your sig if you passed biology and know that gender and sex are not the same thing.

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Postby Railroad Crossing » Thu Oct 22, 2020 4:16 pm

Comfed wrote:Can we commend Pierconium next?

Already condemned
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Postby Outer Sparta » Thu Oct 22, 2020 6:14 pm

Railroad Crossing wrote:
Comfed wrote:Can we commend Pierconium next?

Already condemned

Would you want to write that commendation?
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Postby Goobergunchia » Sun Oct 25, 2020 12:37 pm

Outer Sparta wrote:
Railroad Crossing wrote:Already condemned

Would you want to write that commendation?

Might be fun trying to write one that specifically focuses on his pre-turncoat time in the ADN. :p
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