It's been up for a few days, now that people are commenting on it I probably won't submit it today.
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by Liberimarcat » Mon Jun 15, 2020 9:12 am
by Kenmoria » Mon Jun 15, 2020 9:46 am
by Attempted Socialism » Mon Jun 15, 2020 9:59 am
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by Liberimarcat » Mon Jun 15, 2020 12:52 pm
Kenmoria wrote:“I recommend you to number your active clauses, to make them easier to reference.”
by Liberimarcat » Mon Jun 15, 2020 12:52 pm
Attempted Socialism wrote:Liberimarcat wrote:
It's been up for a few days, now that people are commenting on it I probably won't submit it today.
Well, if you are so sure that no flaws can be found, all questions are answered, and nothing can be improved, I cannot help you. But normally successful drafters realise that this is a marathon rather than a sprint.
by Araraukar » Tue Jun 16, 2020 1:40 am
Liberimarcat wrote:Category: Human Rights | Strength: Mild
Knowing that the previous legislation concerning the safety of war correspondents was rightfully struck out null and void,
Understanding that correspondents do not have legal immunity and can be either swayed by personal bias, a third-party, or ignorance of the law to commit unlawful acts,
1. Defines a war correspondent as a journalist who reports details from a firsthand perspective in a war zone,
2. Mandates that all war correspondents be marked as such and requires their press affiliation to be visible,
3. Establishes that militants may not fire upon, assault, or otherwise attack a war correspondent physically,
4. Prohibits militant bodies from taking a war correspondent as a prisoner of war under any circumstances unless they violate any of the regulations that apply to their actions and behavior, and only if specified in said regulation,
5. Forbids militant officials from bribing a war correspondent or threaten them with violence to influence the correspondents actions, and further forbids a war correspondent from soliciting or accepting bribes,
6. Clarifies that while war correspondents in their work must have leeway to report and conduct interviews, military officials remain under no obligation to answer,
7. Emphasises that employing war correspondents by militant groups as defence against attacks invalidates their protected status under the definition, and establishes said correspondents as militants that aren't subject to these regulations. Furthermore, if a war correspondent actively aids a belligerent in a conflict, the enemy is no longer subject to clause 4 in that correspondent's case.
Apologies for absences, non-COVID health issues leave me with very little energy at times.Giovenith wrote:And sorry hun, if you were looking for a forum site where nobody argued, you've come to wrong one.
by Liberimarcat » Tue Jun 16, 2020 5:19 am
Araraukar wrote:If they don't want to get shot at or thrown in the brig for being spies, I'd add something about the journalists not being allowed to interfere with military actions. They should also NOT be allowed to act as spies, which I see conspiciously missing from the proposal's current form.
They don't need to be employed to be used as targeting shields. I'd say just to add the "not allowed to interfere with military activities/actions" somewhere. And rather than "subject to clause 4" just say "no longer protected by this resolution". And what "the enemy"? Whose enemy?
by The New California Republic » Tue Jun 16, 2020 5:34 am
by Liberimarcat » Tue Jun 16, 2020 5:38 am
The New California Republic wrote:I notice that you are doing edits without preserving the previous drafts. It's a good idea to put previous drafts in a spoiler in the OP.
by Araraukar » Tue Jun 16, 2020 11:11 pm
Apologies for absences, non-COVID health issues leave me with very little energy at times.Giovenith wrote:And sorry hun, if you were looking for a forum site where nobody argued, you've come to wrong one.
by Kenmoria » Wed Jun 17, 2020 4:41 am
by Liberimarcat » Wed Jun 17, 2020 6:09 pm
Kenmoria wrote:“Alter clause 3 to be something more similar to ‘Prohibits belligerents from intentionally targeting war correspondents with any form of physical attack,’ in order to ensure that accidental shootings, which are very possible in warfare, are not penalised.”
by Araraukar » Sun Jun 21, 2020 11:46 pm
Apologies for absences, non-COVID health issues leave me with very little energy at times.Giovenith wrote:And sorry hun, if you were looking for a forum site where nobody argued, you've come to wrong one.
by WayNeacTia » Mon Jun 22, 2020 1:27 am
Araraukar wrote:If you want to use WAR correspondent, then limit this to militaries. Punishing member nations with WACC for the actions of criminals and terrorists who they are fighting against, is just stupid and unfair.
RiderSyl wrote:You'd really think that defenders would communicate with each other about this. I know they're not a hivemind, but at least some level of PR skill would keep Quebecshire and Quebecshire from publically contradicting eac
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by Liberimarcat » Mon Jun 22, 2020 6:37 pm
by Liberimarcat » Mon Jun 22, 2020 6:44 pm
by Liberimarcat » Sat Jun 27, 2020 1:07 pm
by Attempted Socialism » Sat Jun 27, 2020 3:12 pm
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by Liberimarcat » Sat Jun 27, 2020 4:29 pm
Attempted Socialism wrote:"Clause 7 is still poorly phrased and unnecessary. If you included the neutrality in the definition of war correspondent -- as we suggested before this failed to reach the floor the first time -- you could discard clause 7 entirely and clean up the draft."
OOC: You're still rushing this. It's likely going to fail to reach quorum again, because of your impatience.
by Araraukar » Sat Jun 27, 2020 4:46 pm
Liberimarcat wrote:OOC: I didn't think I was rushing it, I've never done this before so I thought since no one was talking it was time.
Apologies for absences, non-COVID health issues leave me with very little energy at times.Giovenith wrote:And sorry hun, if you were looking for a forum site where nobody argued, you've come to wrong one.
by Liberimarcat » Sat Jun 27, 2020 7:33 pm
Araraukar wrote:Liberimarcat wrote:OOC: I didn't think I was rushing it, I've never done this before so I thought since no one was talking it was time.
OOC: Sweetie, we have lives outside of NS. Some people struggle to get online at all, given internet cafes and libraries and schools and such are closed in many RL nations currently. Just because no-one's posted in a few hours or even a few days, doesn't mean we weren't going to. Tomorrow (June 28th) is going to be my first "free of obligations" day since June 19th; I just haven't had much time to spend on NS.
Your definition still lacks the bit about war. War correspondents don't just randomly report about horse races from 1st person POV from a war zone, they specifically report about the details of the war.
Clause 2, "be marked as such" sounds like them getting tagged by an external force, like vehicles or buildings. Shouldn't they instead "carry a visible identifier" or something like that? And is "press affiliation" just them being journalist or them being affiliated with a specific magazine/TV channel/etc.?
Clause 3 would enable strategic military targets (otherwise known as "fair game according to rules of war") to be shielded by having a war correspondent standing on/next to it. Not gonna fly.
Clause 4, civilians can't be taken as prisoners of war to begin with, so the clause is unnecessary. Also, the "unless they violate their neutrality" sounds like it's talking about the official militaries' neutrality, not the journalists'.
Clauses 5 and 6, instead of "military officials", I'd use "combatants". It encompasses everyone from recruits to generals, and I'm fairly use you didn't mean to force anyone to stop taking cover from artillery fire to answer a civilian's questions about stuff they can't mention to civilians unless they want to end up in prison themselves.
This completely lacks any mentions of journalists leaking strategic or tactical plans to the enemy, under the guise of "the public must know". But happily has nothing about journalists being thrown in prison or mental asylum for their own protection.
by Attempted Socialism » Sun Jun 28, 2020 6:08 am
Liberimarcat wrote:Attempted Socialism wrote:"Clause 7 is still poorly phrased and unnecessary. If you included the neutrality in the definition of war correspondent -- as we suggested before this failed to reach the floor the first time -- you could discard clause 7 entirely and clean up the draft."
OOC: You're still rushing this. It's likely going to fail to reach quorum again, because of your impatience.
"Fixed, clause 7 has been discarded and the other clauses have been slightly revised to reflect it."
OOC: I didn't think I was rushing it, I've never done this before so I thought since no one was talking it was time.
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by Liberimarcat » Sat Jul 04, 2020 6:11 pm
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