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Postby Exalted Inquellian State » Mon Jun 01, 2020 10:46 am

Sorry for reposting. I put it in the wrong place twice.

So I decided to make a thread where people who make maps put them out for other mappers to see. They then review it based on plausibility of backstory, plausibility of borders, and how it generally looks, among other things. We put a map, give a backstory, and then see others review it and respond.
Here's my for a world war one stalemate world. it's based of the "Treaty of Geneva-World War One Ends in a Draw" map on reddit from two years ago.
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Basically, the scenario is different. Germany wins the battle of Amiens, cutting of French supply. America reinforces them, and next February they start a new offensive. But due to Germany taking an important location, the Entente doesn't have enough materials and while it gains some land, it doesn't make a big breakthrough. The Austro-Hungarians, however, are defeated by Italy and fall into civil war, signing a ceasefire on July 28th, 1919. The Ottomans collapse shorty after, and Greece takes some land. It gets defeated afterwards by Bulgaria, who occupies Thrace and Byzantium Istanbul Constantinople Tsarigrad. In fall 1919, an uprising happens in south Germany which takes a week to crush. The french troops start mutinying, and on October 10th, 1919, a ceasefire is signed. Both sides meet in Oslo, and Germany gives Togo and Alsace Lorraine to Britain and France, and is forced to keep it's fleet at half the British one. They annex Luxembourg and parts of Poland. Bulgaria takes Greek land. Serbia and Albania become Austrian puppets, and Montenegro is eaten. Italy takes OTL stuff(for now) and Galicia is a League of Nations mandate between Germany, Poland, and Ukraine. Austria, Britain, and Russia are in civil war, with Britain fighting Ireland. Thoughts?
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Postby Dollystana » Mon Jun 01, 2020 10:49 am

Good.
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Postby Exalted Inquellian State » Mon Jun 01, 2020 11:08 am

Dollystana wrote:Good.

Thank you. Did you make a map of your own?
My Kaiserreich Cold War RP-https://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=31&t=507613&sid=a338bded6a6009aba44e8b2d0d1d04c4
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Postby Dollystana » Mon Jun 01, 2020 6:02 pm

Exalted Inquellian State wrote:
Dollystana wrote:Good.

Thank you. Did you make a map of your own?

No. How did you make this map?
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Postby Exalted Inquellian State » Mon Jun 01, 2020 6:07 pm

Dollystana wrote:
Exalted Inquellian State wrote:Thank you. Did you make a map of your own?

No. How did you make this map?

I looked up Victoria 2 world map with states. There's a few blank ones to use. I then pasted it into Paint the Windows app and filled it.
My Kaiserreich Cold War RP-https://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=31&t=507613&sid=a338bded6a6009aba44e8b2d0d1d04c4
My Kaiserreich/The Burning Sun German Empire Political Roleplay-https://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=31&t=514195&sid=fd8a29ac7c4e1a97e9bc4266e116a56f

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Postby Shanghai industrial complex » Thu Jun 04, 2020 2:27 am

Emmmm...No poland
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And a very Big poland
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Postby Exalted Inquellian State » Thu Jun 04, 2020 6:16 am

Shanghai industrial complex wrote:Emmmm...No poland

And a very Big poland

That second Poland looks like it's reaching for Berlin and Moscow.
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My Kaiserreich/The Burning Sun German Empire Political Roleplay-https://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=31&t=514195&sid=fd8a29ac7c4e1a97e9bc4266e116a56f


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