[DRAFT]Control Encryption System

[Ikheria]

Current Version:
Proposal Name: On Encryption
Category: Civil Rights
Effect: Mild

The World Assembly,

Recognising that privacy is a fundamental right, but that it should have limitations pursued in the interest of maintaining national and regional security;

Asserting that the encryption of digital data is instrumental in protecting this right; and

Hoping therefore to promote the appropriate use of encryption;

Hereby,

Establishes the International Body of Encryption Control (IBEC) , tasking it with entrusting it with the control of encryption systems and protocols, and ensuring compliance with this resolution,

Prohibits government breaching of encryption without a lawful warrant,

Disallows governments from fully prohibit the use of encryption of digitally stored or transmitted data,

Encourages governments to improve their computer security by making their encryption standard, and ensuring that the system complies with the International Body of Encryption Control standardization protocol.

Encourages governments to use encryption for protecting digitally stored or transmitted data concerning secret or sensitive information.

Coauthored by Agarntrop 2 and Tinhampton

[Tinhampton]

Could you please show me what the proposal looks like? I can't offer feedback if I can't read it

[Ikheria]

Proposal Name:Control Encryption System
Category:Civil Rights
Effect:Mild

The World Assembly,

Everyone know what privacy is fundamental right, but every goverment know what their can access for a sake of national security.
What we know, privacy of their data is civil right so, everyone sometimes can hacked by enemy of nation, region, or their allies.

Hereby,

1. ESTABLISHES International Cooperation of Encryption Control, what its task is control the encryption system and protocol, make their signatory nation compilance, and fasilicate allowance of encryption on non-signatory nation,
2. LIMITING a goverment right to espionase their citizen,
3. ALLOW goverment to use encryption for protecting their document,infomation,data, and other,
4. ALLOW everyone using system for circumventing their goverment censor, when everyone are not commiting crime

Proposal Name:Control Encryption System
Category:Civil Rights
Effect:Mild

The World Assembly,

Everyone know what privacy is fundamental right, but every goverment know what their can access for a sake of national security.
What we know, privacy of their data is civil right so, everyone sometimes can hacked by enemy of nation, region, or their allies.
So, this make their privacy are dangered by this action.

So, Hereby,

1. ESTABLISHES International Cooperation of Encryption Control, what its task is control the encryption system and protocol, make their signatory nation compilance, and fasilicate allowance of encryption on non-signatory nation,
2. LIMITING a goverment right to espionase their citizen,
3. ALLOW goverment to use encryption for protecting their document,infomation,data, and other,
4. ALLOW everyone using system for circumventing their goverment censor, when everyone are not commiting crime,
5. ENCOURAGE use of encryption system

Proposal Name: On Encryption
Category: Civil Rights
Effect: Mild

The World Assembly,

Recognising that privacy is fundamental right, but that it has limitations pursued in the interest of maintaining national security in some nations;

Hereby,

ESTABLISHES the International Body of Encryption Control, tasking it with issuing lawful warrants for government encryption breaching, entrusting it with the control of encryption systems and protocols, and ensuring compliance with this resolution,

Prohibits government breaching of encryption without a lawful warrant,

Disallows governments to prohibit the use of encryption entirely.

Proposal Name: On Encryption
Category: Civil Rights
Effect: Mild

The World Assembly,

Recognising that privacy is fundamental right, but that it has limitations pursued in the interest of maintaining national security in some nations;

Hereby,

ESTABLISHES the International Body of Encryption Control (IBEC) , tasking it with issuing lawful warrants for government encryption breaching, entrusting it with the control of encryption systems and protocols, and ensuring compliance with this resolution,

Prohibits government breaching of encryption without a lawful warrant,

Disallows governments to prohibit the use of encryption entirely.

Encourage governments to make their encryption standard, and ensuring that system compliance with International Body of Encryption Control standardization protocol.

Encourage governments to use encryption for protecting government protected data, document, and information, and secret data, and information about their people and its their data

Proposal Name: On Encryption
Category: Civil Rights
Effect: Mild

The World Assembly,

Recognising that privacy is fundamental right, but that it has limitations pursued in the interest of maintaining national security in some nations;

Hereby,

Establishes the International Body of Encryption Control (IBEC) , tasking it with issuing lawful warrants for government encryption breaching, entrusting it with the control of encryption systems and protocols, and ensuring compliance with this resolution,

Prohibits government breaching of encryption without a lawful warrant,

Disallows governments to prohibit the use of encryption entirely.

Encourages governments to make their encryption standard, and ensuring that system compliance with International Body of Encryption Control standardization protocol.

Encourages governments to use encryption for protecting government protected data, document, and information, and secret data, and information about their people and its their data.

Proposal Name: On Encryption
Category: Civil Rights
Effect: Mild

The World Assembly,

Recognising that privacy is a fundamental right, but that it should have limitations pursued in the interest of maintaining national and regional security;

Asserting that the encryption of digital data is instrumental in protecting this right; and

Hoping therefore to promote the appropriate use of encryption;

Hereby,

Establishes the International Body of Encryption Control (IBEC) , tasking it with entrusting it with the control of encryption systems and protocols, and ensuring compliance with this resolution,

Prohibits government breaching of encryption without a lawful warrant,

Disallows governments from fully prohibit the use of encryption of digitally stored or transmitted data,

Encourages governments for improve their computer security with make their encryption standard, and ensuring that system compliance with International Body of Encryption Control standardization protocol.

Encourages governments to use encryption for protecting digitally stored or transmitted data concerning secret or sensitive information.

Coauthored by Agarntrop 2 and Tinhampton

Proposal Name: On Encryption
Category: Civil Rights
Effect: Mild

The World Assembly,

Recognising that privacy is a fundamental right, but that it should have limitations pursued in the interest of maintaining national and regional security;

Asserting that the encryption of digital data is instrumental in protecting this right; and

Hoping therefore to promote the appropriate use of encryption;

Hereby,

Establishes the International Body of Encryption Control (IBEC) , tasking it with entrusting it with the control of encryption systems and protocols, and ensuring compliance with this resolution,

Prohibits government breaching of encryption without a lawful warrant,

Disallows governments from fully prohibit the use of encryption of digitally stored or transmitted data,

Encourages governments to improve their computer security by making their encryption standard, and ensuring that the system complies with the International Body of Encryption Control standardization protocol.

Encourages governments to use encryption for protecting digitally stored or transmitted data concerning secret or sensitive information.

Coauthored by Agarntrop 2 and Tinhampton

[Imperium Anglorum]

Please rewrite your proposal to be clear as to what actions member nations must take.

[Agarntrop 2]

Proposal Name:Control Encryption System
Category:Civil Rights
Effect:Mild

The World Assembly,

Everyone know what privacy is fundamental right, but every goverment know what their can access for a sake of national security.
What we know, privacy of their data is civil right so, everyone sometimes can hacked by enemy of nation, region, or their allies.

Hereby,

1. ESTABLISHES International Cooperation of Encryption Control, what its task is control the encryption system and protocol, make their signatory nation compilance, and fasilicate allowance of encryption on non-signatory nation,
2. LIMITING a goverment right to espionase their citizen,
3. ALLOW goverment to use encryption for protecting their document,infomation,data, and other,
4. ALLOW everyone using system for circumventing their goverment censor, when everyone are not commiting crime

Proposal Name:Control Encryption System
Category:Civil Rights
Effect:Mild

The World Assembly,

Everyone know what privacy is fundamental right, but every goverment know what their can access for a sake of national security.
What we know, privacy of their data is civil right so, everyone sometimes can hacked by enemy of nation, region, or their allies.
So, this make their privacy are dangered by this action.

So, Hereby,

1. ESTABLISHES International Cooperation of Encryption Control, what its task is control the encryption system and protocol, make their signatory nation compilance, and fasilicate allowance of encryption on non-signatory nation,
2. LIMITING a goverment right to espionase their citizen,
3. ALLOW goverment to use encryption for protecting their document,infomation,data, and other,
4. ALLOW everyone using system for circumventing their goverment censor, when everyone are not commiting crime,
5. ENCOURAGE use of encryption system

I could rewrite this proposal in clearer English for you if you wanted.

[Ikheria]

Proposal Name:Control Encryption System
Category:Civil Rights
Effect:Mild

The World Assembly,

Everyone know what privacy is fundamental right, but every goverment know what their can access for a sake of national security.
What we know, privacy of their data is civil right so, everyone sometimes can hacked by enemy of nation, region, or their allies.

Hereby,

1. ESTABLISHES International Cooperation of Encryption Control, what its task is control the encryption system and protocol, make their signatory nation compilance, and fasilicate allowance of encryption on non-signatory nation,
2. LIMITING a goverment right to espionase their citizen,
3. ALLOW goverment to use encryption for protecting their document,infomation,data, and other,
4. ALLOW everyone using system for circumventing their goverment censor, when everyone are not commiting crime

Proposal Name:Control Encryption System
Category:Civil Rights
Effect:Mild

The World Assembly,

Everyone know what privacy is fundamental right, but every goverment know what their can access for a sake of national security.
What we know, privacy of their data is civil right so, everyone sometimes can hacked by enemy of nation, region, or their allies.
So, this make their privacy are dangered by this action.

So, Hereby,

1. ESTABLISHES International Cooperation of Encryption Control, what its task is control the encryption system and protocol, make their signatory nation compilance, and fasilicate allowance of encryption on non-signatory nation,
2. LIMITING a goverment right to espionase their citizen,
3. ALLOW goverment to use encryption for protecting their document,infomation,data, and other,
4. ALLOW everyone using system for circumventing their goverment censor, when everyone are not commiting crime,
5. ENCOURAGE use of encryption system

I could rewrite this proposal in clearer English for you if you wanted.

Thank you, but you can add some additonal thing.

[Agarntrop 2]

Proposal Name: On Encryption
Category: Civil Rights
Effect: Mild

The World Assembly,

Recognising that privacy is fundamental right, but that it has limitations pursued in the interest of maintaining national security in some nations;

Hereby,

ESTABLISHES the International Body of Encryption Control, tasking it with issuing lawful warrants for government encryption breaching, entrusting it with the control of encryption systems and protocols, and ensuring compliance with this resolution,

Prohibits government breaching of encryption without a lawful warrant,

Disallows governments to prohibit the use of encryption entirely.

[Tinhampton]

Also, edit your OP with your current draft

[Ikheria]

Proposal Name: On Encryption
Category: Civil Rights
Effect: Mild

The World Assembly,

Recognising that privacy is fundamental right, but that it has limitations pursued in the interest of maintaining national security in some nations;

Hereby,

ESTABLISHES the International Body of Encryption Control, tasking it with issuing lawful warrants for government encryption breaching, entrusting it with the control of encryption systems and protocols, and ensuring compliance with this resolution,

Prohibits government breaching of encryption without a lawful warrant,

Disallows governments to prohibit the use of encryption entirely.

Add Encouragemen for all nation for make their encryption standart and make that compliance

[Agarntrop 2]

Proposal Name: On Encryption
Category: Civil Rights
Effect: Mild

The World Assembly,

Recognising that privacy is fundamental right, but that it has limitations pursued in the interest of maintaining national security in some nations;

Hereby,

ESTABLISHES the International Body of Encryption Control, tasking it with issuing lawful warrants for government encryption breaching, entrusting it with the control of encryption systems and protocols, and ensuring compliance with this resolution,

Prohibits government breaching of encryption without a lawful warrant,

Disallows governments to prohibit the use of encryption entirely.

Add Encouragemen for all nation for make their encryption standart and make that compliance

I honestly don't know what you mean by that. It may be better to use google translate at this rate.

[Ikheria]

Proposal Name: On Encryption
Category: Civil Rights
Effect: Mild

The World Assembly,

Recognising that privacy is fundamental right, but that it has limitations pursued in the interest of maintaining national security in some nations;

Hereby,

ESTABLISHES the International Body of Encryption Control (IBEC) , tasking it with issuing lawful warrants for government encryption breaching, entrusting it with the control of encryption systems and protocols, and ensuring compliance with this resolution,

Prohibits government breaching of encryption without a lawful warrant,

Disallows governments to prohibit the use of encryption entirely.

Encourage governments to make their encryption standard, and ensuring that system compliance with International Body of Encryption Control standardization protocol.

Encourage governments to use encryption for protecting government protected data, document, and information, and secret data, and information about their people and its their data.

[Ikheria]

Proposal Name: On Encryption
Category: Civil Rights
Effect: Mild

The World Assembly,

Recognising that privacy is fundamental right, but that it has limitations pursued in the interest of maintaining national security in some nations;

Hereby,

ESTABLISHES the International Body of Encryption Control (IBEC) , tasking it with issuing lawful warrants for government encryption breaching, entrusting it with the control of encryption systems and protocols, and ensuring compliance with this resolution,

Prohibits government breaching of encryption without a lawful warrant,

Disallows governments to prohibit the use of encryption entirely.

Encourage governments to make their encryption standard, and ensuring that system compliance with International Body of Encryption Control standardization protocol.

Encourage governments to use encryption for protecting government protected data, document, and information, and secret data, and information about their people and its their data.

Everyone, are you sure this version is ok?

[The New California Republic]

From the current draft:

LIMITING a goverment right to espionase their citizen

Huh?

[Araraukar]

Disallows governments to prohibit the use of encryption entirely.

"Why?"

OOC EDIT: Also, wasn't this already done in a resolution?

[Tinhampton]

This was submitted about fifteen minutes ago. I don't know why I'm listed as a co-author when all I've done is ask the OP to conjure up a draft, but if he thinks that it's a "notable or significant contribution" to his final proposal, then... (I would be genuinely willing to co-operate on a future redraft of On Encryption, if Ikheria chooses to revive this draft in future.)

On Encryption
A resolution to improve worldwide human sapient and civil rights.

Category: Civil Rights

Strength: Mild

Proposed by: Ikheria

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The World Assembly,

Recognising that privacy is fundamental right, but that it has limitations pursued in the interest of maintaining national security in some nations;

Hereby,

Establishes the International Body of Encryption Control (IBEC) , tasking it with issuing lawful warrants for government encryption breaching, entrusting it with the control of encryption systems and protocols, and ensuring compliance with this resolution,

Prohibits government breaching of encryption without a lawful warrant,

Disallows governments to prohibit the use of encryption entirely.

Encourages governments to make their encryption standard, and ensuring that system compliance with International Body of Encryption Control standardization protocol.

Encourages governments to use encryption for protecting government protected data, document, and information, and secret data, and information about their people and its their data.

Coauthored by Agarntrop 2 and Tinhampton

[Kenmoria]

(OOC: Ikheria, I encourage you to withdraw this proposal for further drafting. I think that establishing a committee with the ability to issue warrants might contradict GA #002.)

[Bananaistan]

OOC: GAR#378 is relevant. See the final section.

[Ikheria]

(OOC: Ikheria, I encourage you to withdraw this proposal for further drafting. I think that establishing a committee with the ability to issue warrants might contradict GA #002.)

Sorry, but we now redraft it.

[Tinhampton]

(OOC: Ikheria, I encourage you to withdraw this proposal for further drafting. I think that establishing a committee with the ability to issue warrants might contradict GA #002.)

Sorry, but we now redraft it.

In regards to your OP (your first post), I would encourage you to:

1. Move your drafts to the OP. If/when this gets to vote, we can't have people reading "I have a half-fun proposal" and automagically replying "wut?".
2. Spoiler your PREVIOUS DRAFTS. This means making your most recent draft visible instead of hiding your amendments.

[Imperium Anglorum]

(OOC: Ikheria, I encourage you to withdraw this proposal for further drafting. I think that establishing a committee with the ability to issue warrants might contradict GA #002.)

Is the issuing of a warrant a police action?

[Kenmoria]

(OOC: Ikheria, I encourage you to withdraw this proposal for further drafting. I think that establishing a committee with the ability to issue warrants might contradict GA #002.)

Is the issuing of a warrant a police action?

(OOC: The issuing of a warrant normally condones police action, which the WA is prohibited from doing.)