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[WITHDRAWN] Commend Josephtan

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[WITHDRAWN] Commend Josephtan

Postby New Jakobly » Thu Feb 20, 2020 3:27 pm

The Security Council,

Noticing the esteemed honor taken into a World Assembly commendation by the nation receiving it,

Establishing the fact that the day to day work by one such nation, Josephtan

Seeing that since late April of 2019, Josephtan has been working to continue the legacy of the New Western Atlantic by founding New Western Empire through the following actions:

-After The United Dark Republic abdicating the NWA, Josephtan brought forth the NWE, a politically moderate region that has been successful over the past several months due to unique policies and government

-Taking the position as Emperor to head the new region

-Working with the citizens and residents of the NWE to form a more perfect region by establishing a democracy within the region and creating many opportunities within the region, such as the many governmental positions

-Working with the NWE Senate to establish strong allies to their region, such as assisting in an effort to establish a Treaty of Friendship with the region Enadia

-Always ensuring a hopeful future for New Western Empire, and constantly informing citizens and residents about ongoing government affairs

-Protecting the regional sovereignty of the NWE by ensuring peaceful relations with the rest of the world

-Using their power as Emperor in a more moderate stance, and not ever abusing it, which has been a reason why the NWE has stayed healthy and successful

Also Noticing that there are things Josephtan has done before their time serving as Emperor in the NWE, such as:

-Serving as Deputy Chancellor and Senator in the late New Western Atlantic Senate, and always being active in that department

-Establishing political decency within the NWA by leading one of the largest political parties

Realizing that all of these things have brought Josephtan to the status they have established

Hereby commends Josephtan

This is the first draft. Expect edits in a few hours.
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Postby WayNeacTia » Thu Feb 20, 2020 3:31 pm

I see nothing here that is even remotely close to warranting a full security council commendation, and I can pretty much assure you, anyone with any sway is going to say the same thing.
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Postby New Jakobly » Thu Feb 20, 2020 3:31 pm

I will also be away on vacation from tomorrow to the 28th so the proposal might not be submitted until March
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Postby New Jakobly » Thu Feb 20, 2020 3:32 pm

Wayneactia wrote:I see nothing here that is even remotely close to warranting a full security council commendation, and I can pretty much assure you, anyone with any sway is going to say the same thing.

What do you mean?
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Postby WayNeacTia » Thu Feb 20, 2020 3:34 pm

New Jakobly wrote:
Wayneactia wrote:I see nothing here that is even remotely close to warranting a full security council commendation, and I can pretty much assure you, anyone with any sway is going to say the same thing.

What do you mean?

If you can't read the words I just typed, I am not going to try and explain it to you.
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Postby New Jakobly » Thu Feb 20, 2020 3:35 pm

Wayneactia wrote:
New Jakobly wrote:What do you mean?

If you can't read the words I just typed, I am not going to try and explain it to you.

No, I mean like can you provide examples of what I should change or redo?
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Postby WayNeacTia » Thu Feb 20, 2020 3:36 pm

New Jakobly wrote:
Wayneactia wrote:If you can't read the words I just typed, I am not going to try and explain it to you.

No, I mean like can you provide examples of what I should change or redo?

The target is not worthy of a commendation by the security council. Plain enough English for ya?
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Postby Bhang Bhang Duc » Thu Feb 20, 2020 3:42 pm

Legal as far as I can see, but legal doesn’t equal good. The nominee has done nothing worthy of a Commendation, no support.
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Postby New Jakobly » Thu Feb 20, 2020 4:10 pm

Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:Legal as far as I can see, but legal doesn’t equal good. The nominee has done nothing worthy of a Commendation, no support.

How so?
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Postby New Jakobly » Thu Feb 20, 2020 4:13 pm

So I see a lot of negativity on this proposal. Please list why the certain points are not commendable, and I'll see what I can do.
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Postby Frisbeeteria » Thu Feb 20, 2020 4:17 pm

New Jakobly wrote:Please list why the certain points are not commendable

The things you listed are the same things that probably 80% of the other players in the game do routinely. There are one or more people in probably every region with a similar resume. There's nothing special about anything you listed.

New Jakobly wrote:How so?

You haven't listed anything unusual or special. It's your job to point out why the nation is commendable, not why the points you raised are NOT commendable.

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Postby Dreadton » Thu Feb 20, 2020 4:26 pm

The things you list in this proposal are done by hundreds of nations accross the game. What did this particular nation do that 1) Stands out above the rest or 2) Impoved the game?
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Postby New Jakobly » Thu Feb 20, 2020 4:32 pm

Thanks for the feedback. I will review it and determine if I need to prove why Joseph stands above the rest or if I need to consider redoing the bill entirely, or just scrapping it.
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Postby New Jakobly » Thu Feb 20, 2020 4:36 pm

I now believe that you all are right, that this doesn't have credible evidence to commend. I will be holding off this because I now understand that Joseph has done good things, but they have not raised to the point where they can be commended for it.
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Postby Yokiria » Fri Feb 21, 2020 7:50 am

I'd like to praise the author, New Jakobly, for listening to feedback and withdrawing their proposal. It's rare to see that in the WA. Normally, authors are stubborn.
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The NWE and all associates deserve nothing, and should get nothing. Glad to see it's withdrawn and all, but I can't see myself ever supporting such a thing.
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