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by Outer Sparta » Fri Oct 09, 2020 9:16 pm
by Apabeossie » Fri Oct 09, 2020 10:34 pm
Outer Sparta wrote:You'll definitely see this issue be added. It's very solid and you put in a lot of great work.
Yahlia wrote:Surely everyone likes penguins? Who doesn't like penguins? I refuse to believe there are people out there who have an opinion of them worse than 'indifferent'
Einswenn wrote:For me it always was and is obscure why would people be so blind and shortsighted to allow themselves unsolicited hate. I’ve already posted this before: take care of your own life, live your own life, and don’t tell the others how they should live theirs
Dizgovzy wrote:Please go read a book or play outside instead of spending your youth behind a computer screen. Don’t waste your time on this site.
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by Outer Sparta » Sat Oct 10, 2020 3:36 pm
by Aurhany » Mon Oct 12, 2020 5:56 am
by Authoritaria-Imperia » Mon Oct 12, 2020 3:25 pm
This feels a bit redundant, since they're the same words the speaker just used. What about "unguarded like that" or something similar?Option 2: "Wait, the parents left children ALONE at home?" cries @@RANDOMNAME@@, with @@HIS@@ tired and uninterested children behind @@HIM@@ on a leash. "If these kids weren’t left at home alone, this situation would never have happened! You should mandate that children have at least one adult protector with them 24/7 who can get them out in an emergency. It's the only way to keep them safe."
Just a missing capital letter. Also, I'll a little confused by the "(fire)fighter" thing; if it's a joke, it doesn't quite land for me — I feel like just "firefighter" would work better.Option 3: "Hallo @@LEADER@@, I've heard zat you're having izzues with fire..." says scientist @@RANDOMNAME@@, holding a large drone labelled (fire)fighter. "All zis could be easier with firefighting drones zat can carry powder to put off fire, and ja, even find children using cameras. ve von't need to risk losing lives vith drones. Throw some funding to drone development. This new technology vill save lives."
by Apabeossie » Mon Oct 12, 2020 9:31 pm
Authoritaria-Imperia wrote:I'll just add some small things:This feels a bit redundant, since they're the same words the speaker just used. What about "unguarded like that" or something similar?Option 2: "Wait, the parents left children ALONE at home?" cries @@RANDOMNAME@@, with @@HIS@@ tired and uninterested children behind @@HIM@@ on a leash. "If these kids weren’t left at home alone, this situation would never have happened! You should mandate that children have at least one adult protector with them 24/7 who can get them out in an emergency. It's the only way to keep them safe."
Authoritaria-Imperia wrote:The "children on a leash" thing still feels like too much to me, though that's a concern I've already raised — for me, it almost brings to mind an abusive situation.
Authoritaria-Imperia wrote:Just a missing capital letter. Also, I'll a little confused by the "(fire)fighter" thing; if it's a joke, it doesn't quite land for me — I feel like just "firefighter" would work better.Option 3: "Hallo @@LEADER@@, I've heard zat you're having izzues with fire..." says scientist @@RANDOMNAME@@, holding a large drone labelled (fire)fighter. "All zis could be easier with firefighting drones zat can carry powder to put off fire, and ja, even find children using cameras. ve von't need to risk losing lives vith drones. Throw some funding to drone development. This new technology vill save lives."
Kudos for sticking with this draft, by the way; I hope it gets added.
Yahlia wrote:Surely everyone likes penguins? Who doesn't like penguins? I refuse to believe there are people out there who have an opinion of them worse than 'indifferent'
Einswenn wrote:For me it always was and is obscure why would people be so blind and shortsighted to allow themselves unsolicited hate. I’ve already posted this before: take care of your own life, live your own life, and don’t tell the others how they should live theirs
Dizgovzy wrote:Please go read a book or play outside instead of spending your youth behind a computer screen. Don’t waste your time on this site.
New Skandenivia wrote:AFAB ❌
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by Nooooooooooooooo » Mon Oct 12, 2020 10:13 pm
Apabeossie wrote:Just mandate that all, yes, all objects be fire-resistant.
by Apabeossie » Mon Oct 12, 2020 11:01 pm
Yahlia wrote:Surely everyone likes penguins? Who doesn't like penguins? I refuse to believe there are people out there who have an opinion of them worse than 'indifferent'
Einswenn wrote:For me it always was and is obscure why would people be so blind and shortsighted to allow themselves unsolicited hate. I’ve already posted this before: take care of your own life, live your own life, and don’t tell the others how they should live theirs
Dizgovzy wrote:Please go read a book or play outside instead of spending your youth behind a computer screen. Don’t waste your time on this site.
New Skandenivia wrote:AFAB ❌
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by Nooooooooooooooo » Mon Oct 12, 2020 11:49 pm
by Cretox State » Tue Oct 13, 2020 5:16 pm
by Outer Sparta » Tue Oct 13, 2020 7:32 pm
Cretox State wrote:I can't think of any outstanding changes that need to be made, and this is overall a really solid issue!
by Nooooooooooooooo » Tue Oct 13, 2020 7:38 pm
by Apabeossie » Thu Oct 15, 2020 9:39 pm
says scientist @@RANDOMNAME@@, holding a large drone labelled (fire)fighter.
Yahlia wrote:Surely everyone likes penguins? Who doesn't like penguins? I refuse to believe there are people out there who have an opinion of them worse than 'indifferent'
Einswenn wrote:For me it always was and is obscure why would people be so blind and shortsighted to allow themselves unsolicited hate. I’ve already posted this before: take care of your own life, live your own life, and don’t tell the others how they should live theirs
Dizgovzy wrote:Please go read a book or play outside instead of spending your youth behind a computer screen. Don’t waste your time on this site.
New Skandenivia wrote:AFAB ❌
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by Nooooooooooooooo » Thu Oct 15, 2020 10:48 pm
Apabeossie wrote:This is nearing submission! I just want to say thank you for everyone who helped me in this draft. This wouldn't have been possible without your feedback.
I already asked in the GI discord, but in case this needs to be fixed:says scientist @@RANDOMNAME@@, holding a large drone labelled (fire)fighter.
Some people were confused by this part. Here (fire)fighter indicates a 'fighter drone' relabelled, which may or may not make immediate sense. Is there a better way to express that?
by Apabeossie » Fri Oct 16, 2020 12:40 am
Nooooooooooooooo wrote:Apabeossie wrote:This is nearing submission! I just want to say thank you for everyone who helped me in this draft. This wouldn't have been possible without your feedback.
I already asked in the GI discord, but in case this needs to be fixed:
Some people were confused by this part. Here (fire)fighter indicates a 'fighter drone' relabelled, which may or may not make immediate sense. Is there a better way to express that?
Maybe italicize "fire", or use some other formatting?
Yahlia wrote:Surely everyone likes penguins? Who doesn't like penguins? I refuse to believe there are people out there who have an opinion of them worse than 'indifferent'
Einswenn wrote:For me it always was and is obscure why would people be so blind and shortsighted to allow themselves unsolicited hate. I’ve already posted this before: take care of your own life, live your own life, and don’t tell the others how they should live theirs
Dizgovzy wrote:Please go read a book or play outside instead of spending your youth behind a computer screen. Don’t waste your time on this site.
New Skandenivia wrote:AFAB ❌
AMAB ❌
Apab ✅
by Nooooooooooooooo » Fri Oct 16, 2020 5:57 pm
by Apabeossie » Sat Oct 17, 2020 7:25 pm
Yahlia wrote:Surely everyone likes penguins? Who doesn't like penguins? I refuse to believe there are people out there who have an opinion of them worse than 'indifferent'
Einswenn wrote:For me it always was and is obscure why would people be so blind and shortsighted to allow themselves unsolicited hate. I’ve already posted this before: take care of your own life, live your own life, and don’t tell the others how they should live theirs
Dizgovzy wrote:Please go read a book or play outside instead of spending your youth behind a computer screen. Don’t waste your time on this site.
New Skandenivia wrote:AFAB ❌
AMAB ❌
Apab ✅
by Apabeossie » Wed Oct 21, 2020 12:30 am
Yahlia wrote:Surely everyone likes penguins? Who doesn't like penguins? I refuse to believe there are people out there who have an opinion of them worse than 'indifferent'
Einswenn wrote:For me it always was and is obscure why would people be so blind and shortsighted to allow themselves unsolicited hate. I’ve already posted this before: take care of your own life, live your own life, and don’t tell the others how they should live theirs
Dizgovzy wrote:Please go read a book or play outside instead of spending your youth behind a computer screen. Don’t waste your time on this site.
New Skandenivia wrote:AFAB ❌
AMAB ❌
Apab ✅
by Nooooooooooooooo » Wed Oct 21, 2020 10:37 pm
by Apabeossie » Fri Oct 23, 2020 5:19 pm
Yahlia wrote:Surely everyone likes penguins? Who doesn't like penguins? I refuse to believe there are people out there who have an opinion of them worse than 'indifferent'
Einswenn wrote:For me it always was and is obscure why would people be so blind and shortsighted to allow themselves unsolicited hate. I’ve already posted this before: take care of your own life, live your own life, and don’t tell the others how they should live theirs
Dizgovzy wrote:Please go read a book or play outside instead of spending your youth behind a computer screen. Don’t waste your time on this site.
New Skandenivia wrote:AFAB ❌
AMAB ❌
Apab ✅
by Outer Sparta » Fri Oct 23, 2020 5:32 pm
Apabeossie wrote:or I should just choose one myself as the suggested jokes are quite good, and I'm tired of myself being like this.
by Apabeossie » Tue Oct 27, 2020 4:26 pm
Yahlia wrote:Surely everyone likes penguins? Who doesn't like penguins? I refuse to believe there are people out there who have an opinion of them worse than 'indifferent'
Einswenn wrote:For me it always was and is obscure why would people be so blind and shortsighted to allow themselves unsolicited hate. I’ve already posted this before: take care of your own life, live your own life, and don’t tell the others how they should live theirs
Dizgovzy wrote:Please go read a book or play outside instead of spending your youth behind a computer screen. Don’t waste your time on this site.
New Skandenivia wrote:AFAB ❌
AMAB ❌
Apab ✅
by Apabeossie » Mon Nov 02, 2020 3:52 am
Yahlia wrote:Surely everyone likes penguins? Who doesn't like penguins? I refuse to believe there are people out there who have an opinion of them worse than 'indifferent'
Einswenn wrote:For me it always was and is obscure why would people be so blind and shortsighted to allow themselves unsolicited hate. I’ve already posted this before: take care of your own life, live your own life, and don’t tell the others how they should live theirs
Dizgovzy wrote:Please go read a book or play outside instead of spending your youth behind a computer screen. Don’t waste your time on this site.
New Skandenivia wrote:AFAB ❌
AMAB ❌
Apab ✅
by Apabeossie » Fri Nov 06, 2020 6:46 am
Yahlia wrote:Surely everyone likes penguins? Who doesn't like penguins? I refuse to believe there are people out there who have an opinion of them worse than 'indifferent'
Einswenn wrote:For me it always was and is obscure why would people be so blind and shortsighted to allow themselves unsolicited hate. I’ve already posted this before: take care of your own life, live your own life, and don’t tell the others how they should live theirs
Dizgovzy wrote:Please go read a book or play outside instead of spending your youth behind a computer screen. Don’t waste your time on this site.
New Skandenivia wrote:AFAB ❌
AMAB ❌
Apab ✅
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