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The Return of Eragon: OOC/Open/Character

Postby Revlona » Fri Nov 22, 2019 10:30 am

Based on Christopher Paolini's Inheritance Cycle you, the Players, shall take the role of fledgling riders/dragons in the New Rider organization as it returns to Alagaesia following the Break up of the Empire. The Varden continues to gather strength in their bid to reform the empire. Will you join in their bid to reform the Empire? Will you stand against them? Shall you form your own nation? It is up to you.

Welcome to Alagaesia Riders, do with it what you will.

PS - I realize some of this is not within cannon, this is officially a fanfic, please don't come at me because you don't agree


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The years are counted after Eragons departure, so the Year 120 is 120 years after Eragon left.
1- Roran begins construction of his new keep in Palancar Valley
4- 3 More attempts on Nasudas life are foiled
9- King Orin in a Drunken rage throws himself from the ramparts of his castle.
10- Teirm revolts against Nasuada, Roran leads the Loyalist forces to victory
12- Roran and Katrina have a third child
18- Elva, sensing her own death, goes mad in trying to avoid it and breaks her neck when she falls down a staircase.
35- Nasauda dies in her sleep, Nasaudas son Arbeck becomes High King
36- Arya abdicates the throne to join Eragon
37- Roran falls from his saddle and dies
39- Surda refuses to continue paying tribute
42- Teirm refuses to continue paying tribute
44- Arbeck is killed in battle while trying to reclaim Teirm, Hylana becomes High Queen
52- Surda invades, a long bloody war follows, the Elves and Dwarves stay neutral.
55- A treaty between Surda and the Empire is drawn up.
88- The Empire officially collapses into many human Kingdoms
89 - Palancar is a leading Kingdom lead by Rorans Blood
90- The Varden is reformed with the goal of reforging the Empire
100- An extra deposit of Brightsteel found
149 - King Orik passes away
150- Eragon and Arya return to Alegasia


Rules

1. My word and my Coops word is law
2. I'm not accepting any to Overpowerd characters, so don't app as an OP character
3. Don't app as Eragon, I shall be controlling him
4. Just generally don't be a douche
5. Keep OOC in the OOC thread
6. Shouldn't have to be said, but no Godmodding or Metagaming



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Postby Revlona » Fri Nov 22, 2019 10:32 am

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Name: Eragon Shadeslayer
Gender: Male
Age: Nearing 165
Race: Human
Dragon/Rider Name: Saphira
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Length of Time Training: Nearing One Hundred Fifty years of being a rider
Bio: Eragon Bromsson (named Shadeslayer after killing Durza) was the son of Brom and Selena. After the Dragon Saphira hatched for him, Eragon became the first Dragon Rider to be born in a hundred years and was subsequently trained by Brom and later Oromis. After becoming an accomplished swordsman and magician in a relatively short time, the young Rider found himself championing the cause of the Varden, inheriting both the duties of the Dragon Riders' and his father's place as Galbatorix's foremost enemy.

Eragon was also the frequent traveling companion of the Elven princess Arya, the Dwarf Orik, the Lady Nasuada, as well as being the half-brother of the Dragon Rider Murtagh Morzansson and the cousin of the great warrior Roran Stronghammer. He was also named an Elf-friend and as a full member of Dûrgrimst Ingeitum, effectively binding him to more races than any other Rider in history.

He went on to Defeat the King and Leave alagaesia after the war to found a new order of Riders.
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Postby The Anarcho-Syndicalist Commune » Fri Nov 22, 2019 10:44 am

THE BIGGEST OF FUCKING TAGS. DAMN STRAIGHT REV.

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Postby Revlona » Fri Nov 22, 2019 10:47 am

The Anarcho-Syndicalist Commune wrote:THE BIGGEST OF FUCKING TAGS. DAMN STRAIGHT REV.


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Postby Revlona » Fri Nov 22, 2019 3:58 pm

good translator to help with ancient language use in the RP


https://lingojam.com/EragonAncientLanguage
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Postby The Anarcho-Syndicalist Commune » Fri Nov 22, 2019 4:10 pm

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Name: Martell Stronghammer, Son of Kalt
Gender: Male
Age: 32
Race: Human
Appearance:
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Length of Time Training: 16 years

Bio: Martell Stronghammer was born in 134 AE, the third son of the Lord of Therinsford, the secondary branch of the Stronghammer dynasty that had become the rulers of the Palacar valley following the ascension of Roran, Martell's great great grandfather. Martell was raised as to become commander of Therinsford's troops one day, as was customary for third sons in much of the human Empire. His eldest brother was to become lord of Therinsford himself one day, and his elder brother had been sent to Carvahall to become a knight under the King. Martell's life was thus somewhat lonely as a child, his only company being his tutor, his younger sister, and his father's ward, a clerk's son named Liem.

As was custom in the former Empire, when Martell had reached an appropriate age and the current touring crop of Dragon Eggs came to Palancar, he was brought before them. He had not walked in with high expectations, as an egg had not hatched for several decades in Palancar. Thus it came as a great surprise when an egg, pure silver in color, burst open in front of him. Recognizing the significance, Martell reached out and pet the hatchling with his right hand, resulting in the bond between rider and dragon being struck.

The young dragon took up the name Stál, for his metallic coloring, and together the pair traveled to Narda, Palacar's port city, along with the elvish guardians of the Dragon Eggs. There they boarded a ship that took them on the month long trip to Arngor. There, they became the newest of Eragon's order, absorbing lessons from Martell's triple great uncle and Saphira, the new mother of dragons. Stál also absorbed lessons from his technical uncle, a wild dragon who had hatched under Eragon's watch. After completing their initial training, Martell and Stál returned to Alagaesia, where they took a tour of the land and aquianted themselves with the various governments of the world. Upon visiting Ellesmera, Martell worked with the smith Rhunon to complete his riders weapon, an axe he named Garjzla, or Light. Since then he has been attending to his duties as a rider, until he heard that his kin and the other riders were travelling back to Alagaesia.

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Postby Revlona » Fri Nov 22, 2019 7:10 pm

The Anarcho-Syndicalist Commune wrote:Character App
Name: Martell Stronghammer, Son of Kalt
Gender: Male
Age: 32
Race: Human
Appearance:

Length of Time Training: 16 years

Bio: Martell Stronghammer was born in 134 AE, the third son of the Lord of Therinsford, the secondary branch of the Stronghammer dynasty that had become the rulers of the Palacar valley following the ascension of Roran, Martell's great great grandfather. Martell was raised as to become commander of Therinsford's troops one day, as was customary for third sons in much of the human Empire. His eldest brother was to become lord of Therinsford himself one day, and his elder brother had been sent to Carvahall to become a knight under the King. Martell's life was thus somewhat lonely as a child, his only company being his tutor, his younger sister, and his father's ward, a clerk's son named Liem.

As was custom in the former Empire, when Martell had reached an appropriate age and the current touring crop of Dragon Eggs came to Palancar, he was brought before them. He had not walked in with high expectations, as an egg had not hatched for several decades in Palancar. Thus it came as a great surprise when an egg, pure silver in color, burst open in front of him. Recognizing the significance, Martell reached out and pet the hatchling with his right hand, resulting in the bond between rider and dragon being struck.

The young dragon took up the name Stál, for his metallic coloring, and together the pair traveled to Narda, Palacar's port city, along with the elvish guardians of the Dragon Eggs. There they boarded a ship that took them on the month long trip to Arngor. There, they became the newest of Eragon's order, absorbing lessons from Martell's triple great uncle and Saphira, the new mother of dragons. Stál also absorbed lessons from his technical uncle, a wild dragon who had hatched under Eragon's watch. After completing their initial training, Martell and Stál returned to Alagaesia, where they took a tour of the land and aquianted themselves with the various governments of the world. Upon visiting Ellesmera, Martell worked with the smith Rhunon to complete his riders weapon, an axe he named Garjzla, or Light. Since then he has been attending to his duties as a rider, until he heard that his kin and the other riders were travelling back to Alagaesia.


Really nice app, accepted
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Postby Empire Occupied Terra » Fri Nov 22, 2019 7:12 pm

Never read the books, saw the term dragons, wanted in.

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Postby Revlona » Fri Nov 22, 2019 7:17 pm

Empire Occupied Terra wrote:Never read the books, saw the term dragons, wanted in.

Book knowledge is super important

Maybe checking out the wiki and doing some heavy reading could suffice

Edit: the actual book plot and such isn’t exactly needed, but how the world works is. The races, ancient language knowledge, dragons,magic , riders history, and some other things would be very good to know

In fact, if you joined the discord me and my coop could probably help you out a lot with it
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Postby The Anarcho-Syndicalist Commune » Fri Nov 22, 2019 7:20 pm

Revlona wrote:
Empire Occupied Terra wrote:Never read the books, saw the term dragons, wanted in.

Book knowledge is super important

Maybe checking out the wiki and doing some heavy reading could suffice


Heavy is relative. I would check out the magic and get some basic knowledges on the world, and then we can work with an app you put together from there.

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Postby Revlona » Sat Nov 23, 2019 12:02 pm

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Postby Revlona » Sat Nov 23, 2019 5:24 pm

The Anarcho-Syndicalist Commune wrote:
Revlona wrote: Book knowledge is super important

Maybe checking out the wiki and doing some heavy reading could suffice


Heavy is relative. I would check out the magic and get some basic knowledges on the world, and then we can work with an app you put together from there.


Yeah, a good knowledge of the ancient language, magic, and maybe a bit of history would be fine
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Postby Revlona » Mon Nov 25, 2019 8:06 am

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