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Postby Deutschess Kaiserreich » Tue Apr 16, 2019 6:53 pm

What should be a normal age? 22?
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Postby Deutschess Kaiserreich » Wed Apr 17, 2019 2:08 am

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Deutschess Kaiserreich wrote:Can I have a character be a descendant of Rommel?

Gonna give you the really blunt question for this: For what purpose?

I think it'll be really interesting. Having to live under your fathers and great grandfathers shadow.
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Postby Monfrox » Wed Apr 17, 2019 2:21 am

Deutschess Kaiserreich wrote:
Monfrox wrote:Gonna give you the really blunt question for this: For what purpose?

I think it'll be really interesting. Having to live under your fathers and great grandfathers shadow.

Right but you don't have to have it specifically be Rommel to do that.

Also, there's a good gap in the age range from the different Valkyrie generations.
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Postby Deutschess Kaiserreich » Wed Apr 17, 2019 2:37 am

Monfrox wrote:
Deutschess Kaiserreich wrote:I think it'll be really interesting. Having to live under your fathers and great grandfathers shadow.

Right but you don't have to have it specifically be Rommel to do that.

Also, there's a good gap in the age range from the different Valkyrie generations.

Mine is 22 but was never in the first generation on account of being in Berlin at the time and fighting to retake it.
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Postby Deutschess Kaiserreich » Wed Apr 17, 2019 7:04 am

Nation-states Name: The Deutschess Kaiserreich
Character Name: Erik Johann Rommel
Character Age: 21
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    Standing at an average height at 179.87, Erik is well built from his years in the remnants of the German army. He has dirty unkept brown hair, having lost much of his self-care attempting to survive and retake Berlin. He rarely smiles but when he does it always mean that victory is on the horizon or there is just beer nearby. He wears the signature cape that trails behind him in his off duty German Valkyrie uniform. His posture is always straight and at attention. Another trait he gained during his three years in the army.

Character Nationality: German
Character Short Bio:

    Born on April 30th 2025 in what was once known as Hamburg (Instead now known as Wasteland #32) to the famous Rommel family in Hamburg he was expected to live up to his fathers legacy, a leading officer in the army, his great grandfather the desert fox himself and therefore always found himself under his fathers and great grandfather's shadow. Then the attacks came. His father was mobilized and never came back home. His house was broken into by one of those things and he saw his mother throw him out of the window telling him to run before being dragged back. Erik ran as fast as possible to stop the screams. He was eventually picked up by an army convoy who's commander recognized him due to being a close Friend of Rommel's father and he was brought to Berlin's central military base. Berlin had almost been overun of Rebels and those foul creatures by the time Rommel arrived in December 28th, 2030. He would assit around the base often doing grunt work, auxiliary, and translation (Being able to speak German, English and Russian). He first picked up his rifle when he was 14 joining what remained of the army in their attempts to restore order in Berlin in 2040. He would often fight in urban landscapes acting as a scout of his unit

    He would act in a support role for his first year. But something lurked in the back of Rommel's mind. His desire to command a unit. To outshine his father, once a leading man in the army, and his great grandfather, the desert fox himself, and make a name for himself. His desire seemed to be fulfilled as during an attempt to retake the Kaiserriech from Communist Rebels Rommel managed to rescue numerous wounded soldiers while under fire. He experienced a gunshot wound to the shoulder, shrapnel wounds in his foot, and a broken wrist in the process. He was the youngest person, only 15 at the time, to ever be recommended the iron cross but he would lose the medal itself to another soldier. But later that year he would receive the honor to be the man that ripped down the blood red hammer and sickle on the roof of the Reichstag and replace it with the rightful flag of the Deutschland.

    With this, he would be recommended for the GAMA program in 2040 during the later stages of the first generation. He would receive training for three years. He managed, although barely, to avoid most of the drawbacks of being a first generation Valkyrie (Only suffering a slight limp in his right leg that was permanent and backache for a month). It was a difficult transition from a foot soldier to a Valkyrie, often acting like a soldier and not a Valkyrie. But after three years of training, he was certified to be a Valkyrie and loaned back in the German government in order to attempt to retake Berlin once and for all. The offensive was codenamed "Seloow Heights". He would battle in the streets of Berlin slowly clearing it of their horrid creatures and terrorist scum. The Battle would be won in a fortnight, Berlin being declared clear and ready for the return of citizens and the remnants of the German government, but Rommel's unit would be damaged by a rocket to the rear exhaust vent and himself suffer minor injuries as a result. Then at the statewide festival named "Rebirthday" Rommel would be given what he had always desired, the Iron cross. In 2044 he would return to the GAMA to participate in the second generation Valkyrie program where he passed with resounding success due to his participation in the first generation.

    Operations so far have shown that Rommel is extremely aggressive in combat being always on the offensive and often entering melee. He is adept at hit and run raids and storming strongpoints if need be. He excels in Urban combat often jumping from rooftop to rooftop and decimating untrained cultists. He often probes the flanks of his foes finding a weak point before applying extreme pressure on that weak point creating a breakthrough and causing havoc behind enemy lines. It should be noted that he often request air support and uses it to great effectiveness.

    Mental tests have revealed strong patriotism from Erik often speaking and writing in his diary of his dream of a Germany reclaiming it's pre-2030 borders and once more becoming a major power in the world. He admires the past often collecting relics from a bygone ever telling others, "Without the past who are we?" It should also be noted that it seems he admires the old Prussian traditions of old and carries a saber around with him telling others, in a humorous and self-aware way, "A Valkyrie without their sword is improperly dressed."



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MACE Model Name: Gehender Panzer-2
MACE Nickname/Reporting name: "Erika" Gehender Panzer-2-122
Height (Cannot exceed 6m/20ft): 2.8m
Speed: 70km at full sprint
Weight(approx.): three tons
Equipment:

  • Lebenssucher Head-mounted lifeform scanner (Effective for up to 50m and can penetrate 1.31 meters of concrete)
  • Zielgerät "Vampir" nightvision.
  • 2X Winkel Licht Shoulder mounted flood lights
  • 2x self-repair drones: Small little orbs no bigger than a softball with all the trinkets and scanners needed to repair all the Panzers in the Wehrmacht. They levitate around the injured Panzer repairing all damage on the surface but serious, entire limbs ripped off, etc, and internal damage they cannot repair.
  • 1x Medical kit
  • Long range communication array (Effective 200km).
  • 1x Survival kit.
Weaponry:

  • X1 30mm Morningstar assault rifle GL addition (handheld): Light, next to no kickback, reliable and rapid fire for days. These are the four traits that define the rifle. At only 1.8 meters in length, the morningstar is extremely effective at close range with the option to detach the barrel making CQB much easier and overheats less rare but, of course, reducing the accuracy and range of the rifle. This edition comes with an under-barrel 50mm grenade launcher with the following ammunition available. This model has been uniquely designed with an attachment for a 50 cm bayonet capable of penetrating steel and slicing a man in half with one stab and a swing.

    • 50mm "Knock-Knock" concrete buster: Built to bust holes in urban environments the CB can penetrate two meters of concrete with a diameter of four meters. It does this with the round penetrating the calculated distance and exploding in the wall. A subdivision of this ammo type, Shock CB, penetrates the wall but the tip continues to penetrate and once it enters the other side detonates either a flashbang or a fragmentation blast with an effective radius of two meters.
    • 50mm "Starlight" White Phosphorus: Built to create smoke screen it is certainly not used as an incendiary round.
    • 50mm "Blaster" High Explosive: Effective up to 300m with kill range of 12m.
    • 50mm "Splinters" Fragmentation: Effective up to 200m with kill range of 20m and wounding of 50m.
    • 50mm "Dragon killer" Armor Piercing: Can penetrate 60m of armor at 300m. Not recommended against dedicated main battle tanks.
  • 1.2-meter long vibrosaber "Barbarossa's saber": A 1.2-meter long saber that vibrates as fast as a hummingbird and made out of near unbreakable German steel. The weapon's hilt or handle contains a compact ultrasonic vibration generator, causing the saber to vibrate at an incredible speed, making even the slightest glancing blow become a gaping wound. The saber is dangerous to use against electrical weapons, as they conduct electricity.
  • x1 20mm wrist mounted dual autocannons: Mounted on the right wrist of the mech the weapon is designed so that one can dual wield the saber without while at the same time having ranged firepower.
  • 2x 15mm Luger II class machine pistols: The sidearm of the mech it is designed with close-range firepower in mind. It has a clip of over 30 rounds and an amazing fire rate. It could be dragged through mud and blood and still function the same as when it rolled off the production line. A fine example of German technology.
  • x1 Tiger beißen class Shoulder-mounted 60mm rocket launcher.: The shoulder mounted launcher is mainly designed for long-range firepower. it is mainly designed to be used against armored targets at a long range being able to penetrate over 200m of armor with AP at 1km and 180mm with HEAT at any range.

Defensive measures:
  • Blinder model 45 EW
  • Compostie light armor 20m (Rated 500mm of steel).
  • Ejection seat
  • 6x Betrüger Hip mounted smoke launchers: Ejects electrically charged smoke to confuse electronics. However this also blocks the Panzer's own electronics.

Other features: The Gehender Panzer-2 is built for extremely close urban battles and as a scouting vehicle. It moves extremely fast with its two legs and can leap to hight's of about a meter and a half
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Postby Sudbrazil » Wed Apr 17, 2019 8:53 am

Hey, uh, Deutschess Kaiserreich, von implies that your character is a noble from the name that follows, so Erik von Rommel means Erik from Rommel, which is quite nonsensical.
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Postby Deutschess Kaiserreich » Wed Apr 17, 2019 5:16 pm

Sudbrazil wrote:Hey, uh, Deutschess Kaiserreich, von implies that your character is a noble from the name that follows, so Erik von Rommel means Erik from Rommel, which is quite nonsensical.

Whoops. Will fix
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Postby Deutschess Kaiserreich » Wed Apr 17, 2019 9:48 pm

Deutschess Kaiserreich wrote:
Sudbrazil wrote:Hey, uh, Deutschess Kaiserreich, von implies that your character is a noble from the name that follows, so Erik von Rommel means Erik from Rommel, which is quite nonsensical.

Whoops. Will fix

Actually, it just seems cool and I can't find a cooler name.
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Postby Forest State » Wed Apr 17, 2019 10:27 pm

Deutschess Kaiserreich wrote:
Deutschess Kaiserreich wrote:Whoops. Will fix

Actually, it just seems cool and I can't find a cooler name.

Does it really work as a name if it ignores what the von part actually means?
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Postby Kassaran » Wed Apr 17, 2019 10:41 pm

I mean, grasping straws here, he would be 'from' Rommel in a way. I'm just curious as to why the name has to sound cool?

EDIT: Actually, better questions:

1. He was born in 2024... He somehow took part in the defense of Berlin in 2020 (I'll be charitable here and say this might be a typo and you meant 2030 because that fits the timeline), but with the benefit of the doubt he would have been 6 or 7, not 14 for the battle.
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Postby Deutschess Kaiserreich » Wed Apr 17, 2019 10:43 pm

Kassaran wrote:I mean, grasping straws here, he would be 'from' Rommel in a way. I'm just curious as to why the name has to sound cool?

I don't know... I just can't make up my own damn mind!
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Postby Sraelyn » Wed Apr 17, 2019 10:59 pm

Deutschess Kaiserreich wrote:
Kassaran wrote:I mean, grasping straws here, he would be 'from' Rommel in a way. I'm just curious as to why the name has to sound cool?

I don't know... I just can't make up my own damn mind!

If you want to have your char related to the real life Rommel, then I'd say you rather keep the surname intact. If you want to add the 'von' to make it sound cooler, then maybe make him a descendant of a fictional von Rommel.

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Postby Forest State » Wed Apr 17, 2019 11:02 pm

Deutschess Kaiserreich wrote:
Kassaran wrote:I mean, grasping straws here, he would be 'from' Rommel in a way. I'm just curious as to why the name has to sound cool?

I don't know... I just can't make up my own damn mind!

Also I'm not the OP or the Co-OP or associated with them in any way so I can't exactly speak for what they'll allow, but the bio might need revision if you want it to get accepted.

Most of it looks like it was just thrown in because it was cool, not just the name. I get that it's a post-apocalyptic setting so there's some slack when it comes to conventions but he started fighting at an unrealistically young age and seems to be the only character that's basically already had a full and accomplished military career at the start of the RP.

Becoming an officer at 18, retaking Berlin and changing the flag at the Reichstag himself, descending from a famous general, showing immediate promise with GAMA after switching over from being what appears to be a regular army soldier, etc. Also says that he can take on entire squads by himself and I don't think the OP or Co-OP would like someone like that for balance reasons.

Just saying most of it reads more like the bio for an action movie protagonist than a balanced character that seems like a real person.

Then again, you're free to disregard all of this.
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Postby Kassaran » Wed Apr 17, 2019 11:09 pm

Okay, I'll put my questions here because you actually need to probably look at fleshing out the app a bit more, for continuity issues... Note I am not a Co-Op or the OP, but this is just the issues I'm seeing.

April 30 2024 is when he was born, but in 2020 he took part in the defense of Berlin from... what? If that's supposed to be 2030, he would have been 6 and I doubt a 6 year-old is making breakthroughs in the defense or assault of any combat objectives.

Alright, so if he picked up a rifle at age 6, not 14, that's something else to change, but having him- the descendant of a very famous German General wouldn't make him a number one candidate for Valkyrie training, especially not in 2031 when the first MACE has yet to arrive on any production line.

Okay, so let's push this timescale up by ten years, and we'd have a workable plotline...He's born in 2034, he takes part in the German offensive in 2040, so he could be 6, do some fighting I guess around then. He becomes a Valkyrie 2041-2043, gets the MACE training done, and goes back on loan to the German government to finish some business, and then came back to the states as per GAMA guidance since he became their property the moment he became a Valkyrie.

Now, here's the next issue I have, the MACE:It has self-repair drones, and they seem to be quite advanced technology. I also note that they seem to be ripped from something regarding titans?
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Postby Deutschess Kaiserreich » Thu Apr 18, 2019 12:06 am

Thanks for all your help. Wrote it half asleep :p. Will fix as soon as possible.
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Postby Monfrox » Thu Apr 18, 2019 12:39 am

I've conferred with my co-op and this app does have quite a bit about it. Much of what Forest and Kass is true and I hold that to the regard about the rest of the app. There is much too much going on here for me to really pin down just "what" is wrong here. So from everything up until now, the thing my co-op and I have discussed is that Valkyrie selection is done while you're still growing and the augmentation is done before you hit puberty. This was the way it was in the old canon so we thought we'd keep it this way because something about teenage heroes in anime just seems to be a thing.

And with that, and everything else going on, I cannot give this my approval and nor can my co-op.

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Postby Deutschess Kaiserreich » Thu Apr 18, 2019 12:50 am

Monfrox wrote:I've conferred with my co-op and this app does have quite a bit about it. Much of what Forest and Kass is true and I hold that to the regard about the rest of the app. There is much too much going on here for me to really pin down just "what" is wrong here. So from everything up until now, the thing my co-op and I have discussed is that Valkyrie selection is done while you're still growing and the augmentation is done before you hit puberty. This was the way it was in the old canon so we thought we'd keep it this way because something about teenage heroes in anime just seems to be a thing.

And with that, and everything else going on, I cannot give this my approval and nor can my co-op.

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Even if I edit it?
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Postby Monfrox » Thu Apr 18, 2019 1:38 am

Deutschess Kaiserreich wrote:
Monfrox wrote:I've conferred with my co-op and this app does have quite a bit about it. Much of what Forest and Kass is true and I hold that to the regard about the rest of the app. There is much too much going on here for me to really pin down just "what" is wrong here. So from everything up until now, the thing my co-op and I have discussed is that Valkyrie selection is done while you're still growing and the augmentation is done before you hit puberty. This was the way it was in the old canon so we thought we'd keep it this way because something about teenage heroes in anime just seems to be a thing.

And with that, and everything else going on, I cannot give this my approval and nor can my co-op.

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Even if I edit it?

At this point, you'd be better off starting over from scratch.
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Postby Forest State » Thu Apr 18, 2019 1:46 am

I should also mention that I finished my app and added the MACE section, might have gotten missed at the end of the last page.
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Postby Vanquaria » Thu Apr 18, 2019 1:48 am

Now that is how u deny an app with style
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Postby Monfrox » Thu Apr 18, 2019 1:50 am

Forest State wrote:I should also mention that I finished my app and added the MACE section, might have gotten missed at the end of the last page.

It did. I've been worrying a little more about my job status and everything as of late, but I'm still around.

With that, I'll give it a few more days for you all to get your butts to the briefing before we head off.
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Democratic Socialists

Postby Deutschess Kaiserreich » Thu Apr 18, 2019 3:53 am

I made a very major edit. He does not resemble v1. Much younger now.
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Democratic Socialists

Postby Deutschess Kaiserreich » Thu Apr 18, 2019 4:05 am

Deutschess Kaiserreich wrote:I made a very major edit. He does not resemble v1. Much younger now.

But I want to make some more edits but I'm too tired right now. It was hell at work. Almost got laid off.
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The Kaiserriech is an alternative history timeline where Germany won the First Weltkreig. Currently, the Kaiserriech is a Federal Monarchy. Our current leader is Victoria Louise Adelheid Mathilde Charlotte the Second. For more information.
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