[abandoned] 13 year old's drug becomes a hit

[Necroviribus]

Title:
13 year old’s drug becomes a hit

Description:
You notice lots of people in @@NAME@@ are smoking an uncommon cigarette. According to the Vape shop, a 13 year old named @@RANDOMNAME@@ is making a drug now known as Marihash.

Validity:
Not valid for nations were drugs are illegal.

Options:
[option]”We should just keep it legal! Just buy and get high!” say’s unemployed person, @@RANDOMNAME@@ with a pack of marihash in his shirt pocket. He reaches to get another cigarette but none are inside.
[effect]lots of people start smoking

[option]"This ‘Marihash’ is horrible! I already had to deal with insane druggies breaking open my window, and now that a 13 year old is making drugs, I can’t imagine the destruction that will cause! Ban it now!” said professor @@RANDOMFEMALENAME@@ in an aggressive tone, she grabs a paper off your desk that says "Make all drugs illegal?" and threatens to rip it.
[effect]marihash is banned

[option]"No! My document!" says @@RANDOMMALENAME@@, your friend after suffering from a concussion. "Why don’t we ban all drugs? Everyone will be happier, and we won’t have to deal with lung cancer! Maybe that concussion gave me some intelligence!" He says while looking at an IQ test paper, with a 86 on it.
[effect]all drugs are illegal

[Marxist Germany]

Just proofread it:

Title:
13 year old’s drug becomes a hit

Description:
You notice as lots of people in @@NAME@@ are smoking an uncommon cigarette...

[Necroviribus]

Just proofread it:

Title:
13 year old’s drug becomes a hit

Description:
You notice as lots of people in @@NAME@@ are smoking an uncommon cigarette...

Thanks!

[USS Monitor]

Welcome to Got Issues.

You don't need to worry about stat effects as editors will take care of these.

Effect lines are not sentences and should not be capitalized or end in punctuation.

The writing here is not unreadable or anything, but it's not that exciting. See if you can find a way to spice it up with some clever humor or a trickier ethical dilemma.

[Necroviribus]

Welcome to Got Issues.

You don't need to worry about stat effects as editors will take care of these.

Effect lines are not sentences and should not be capitalized or end in punctuation.

The writing here is not unreadable or anything, but it's not that exciting. See if you can find a way to spice it up with some clever humor or a trickier ethical dilemma.

Thanks for the feed back!

[Socio Polor]

No need to re-post the issue, just edit the op draft. Also, Welcome to GI

[Necroviribus]

No need to re-post the issue, just edit the op draft. Also, Welcome to GI

Thanks! I'll edit the first one, and delete the new one.

[Australian rePublic]

I'm pretty sure we already have an issue about the legalisation of marijuana. If not, I'm pretty you can call it by its name

[Necroviribus]

I'm pretty sure we already have an issue about the legalisation of marijuana. If not, I'm pretty you can call it by its name

The whole theme is that it's a completely new drug, made by a 13 year old behind a school when she's supposed to be in math class.

[Candlewhisper Archive]

Perhaps don't call it "marihash" if you don't intend it to be associated with marijuana.

Anyway, the story is thin here. The dilemma doesn't feel like it has any bearing on reality. Sure, new drugs hit the streets all the time, but they aren't knocked up by schoolkids. Recreational drugs are big business. To put in in context, legal pharma is worth around $1200 billion as an industry. Illegal drug production is worth around $400 billion as an industry. Sure, the legal companies are a bigger world presence overall, but we're not talking small scale operations here.

If a 13 year old was producing a drug, just how much could he make anyway? Enough for himself and his friends? Enough for a small town? Certainly not drug production on the scale that the real illegal pharma cartels turn out.

This issue just doesn't have any grasp of the reality of the situation, and doesn't work.

[Necroviribus]

Perhaps don't call it "marihash" if you don't intend it to be associated with marijuana.

Anyway, the story is thin here. The dilemma doesn't feel like it has any bearing on reality. Sure, new drugs hit the streets all the time, but they aren't knocked up by schoolkids. Recreational drugs are big business. To put in in context, legal pharma is worth around $1200 billion as an industry. Illegal drug production is worth around $400 billion as an industry. Sure, the legal companies are a bigger world presence overall, but we're not talking small scale operations here.

If a 13 year old was producing a drug, just how much could he make anyway? Enough for himself and his friends? Enough for a small town? Certainly not drug production on the scale that the real illegal pharma cartels turn out.

This issue just doesn't have any grasp of the reality of the situation, and doesn't work.

Okay, i'll get rid of this issue.