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[Draft] Doctor Exchange Act

Postby Libertas Omnium Maximus » Mon Jan 21, 2019 2:33 pm

I came up with this idea a couple of days ago. It is based very loosely off of a resolution that I passed at a model UN conference. I am fairly sure it is legal with that said, I wanted to post it here for comments, questions, concerns before sending it off to the WA floor. Thank you for your input!

Doctor Exchange Act

Category: Health (International Aid)

Acknowledging that many nations of the WA, especially those with emerging or weak economies, have sub-par health care systems, whence their citizens lead less healthy and shorter lives than many of the more developed nations of the WA

Noting that this issue is, in part, caused by a lack of well trained heath-care professionals

Appalled by the scarcity of doctors and other healthcare professionals in many of these nations, especially in rural and/or isolated areas

Noting that many nations of the WA have such a sufficient number of doctors that they would be able to continue thriving both economically and socially even in the event that many of said healthcare professionals were to discontinue operating in said nation.

1. Highly Encourages developed nations with flourishing economies and a good doctor-to-patient ratio to provide their medically-trained citizens with monetary incentives such as tax exemptions or cash endowments to seek practice in nations with a shortage of doctors.

2. Further Encourages all nations to run an education campaign utilizing media sources such as newspaper, radio, and television to educate their citizens of the deplorable health care conditions in many nations as well as the humanitarian and monetary benefits of becoming a mission doctor.
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Postby Old Hope » Mon Jan 21, 2019 3:41 pm

"There are two(OOC:plus two OOC problems) unrelated problems with your proposal.
The first problem is that you use language such as "encourages" - we can tell you that these encouragements will be not effective at all. Yet any stronger language would be not advised either, in our opinion.
The second problem is the name of this proposal, which will be very effective ... as a repellant."
OOC: Your proposal needs a category. That's in this case more than a trivial problem.
It also needs a strength - probably mild, currently.
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Postby Libertas Omnium Maximus » Mon Jan 21, 2019 5:41 pm

I plan to add the strength/category last

The name is totally subject to change. Any ideas?

As to your first concern, there isn't much more I can do. The WA can't force nations to supply doctors.
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Postby Naboompu » Mon Jan 21, 2019 8:16 pm

Nice effort! Just thought I'd give a few comments regarding the readability of the text. I still think that the main issue regarding a lack of any firm mandates (encourages...) that still needs to be addressed.

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0. The title needs work. Maybe "World Assembly Doctor Exchange Programme" or something similar...?
1. "Acknowledging that many nations of the WA, especially those with emerging or weak economies, have sub par sub-par health care systems, which results inwhence their citizens leading less healthy lives...
2. "Noting that a this issue is...
3. Should it not be small doctor-to-citizens ratio? "Appalled by the excessively large doctor-to citizen ratio the paucity of doctors in many of these nations...
4. "Noting that many nations of the WA have a doctor-to-citizen ratio small enough an abundance of doctors, nurses and other healthcare professionals such that they would be able to continue thriving both economically and socially even if many of said professionals their doctors, nurses, and healthcare professionals were to discontinue operating in same said nation.
5. "...and a good doctor-to-citizen ratio to provide provision monetary incentives, including but not limited to tax exemptions and cash endowments, to their medically-trained citizens with monetary incentives to seek medical practice... ...doctors. These may include
6. "...health care conditions in many nations and as well as the humanitarian and...

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Postby Libertas Omnium Maximus » Mon Jan 21, 2019 8:28 pm

Thank you for this invaluable feedback. Yes, the WA Doctor Exchange Act (or something of that ilk sounds far better than Doctor Exportation). Thank you for the editing (which the proposal was clearly in need of) I will alter accordingly.
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Postby Old Hope » Tue Jan 22, 2019 1:28 am

OOC: It seems you treat the Category as something not important.
It is important.
Your current proposal falls under Health - AOE International Aid.
Which means that you can't use mild language only. Categories with an Area of Effect cannot be Mild. You have to force member nations to do something, at minimum, to make your proposal legal.
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Postby Libertas Omnium Maximus » Tue Jan 22, 2019 6:36 am

Would you encourage the use of words such as "requires" instead of "encourages," regarding the monetary incentives? Obviously, The WA can't actually force doctors to go anywhere against their will. That would be a human rights violation in and of itself. I also can't make the education campaign mandatory, that would violate international sovereignty and possibly some "other things" since many nations don't have any state run media. That would be forcing the free press to publish something. I can't do that.

I am also planning to categorize it under "HEALTH" as "International Aid."
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Postby Sierra Lyricalia » Tue Jan 22, 2019 6:50 am

"Ambassador, is there a particular reason you use the phrase 'doctor-to-citizen ratio' rather than the more statistically useful (and less classist) term 'doctor-to-patient ratio'? Some of the places medical professionals are sorely needed have large immigrant or other non-citizen populations."
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Postby Araraukar » Tue Jan 22, 2019 7:41 am

Old Hope wrote:OOC: Categories with an Area of Effect cannot be Mild.

OOC: Have you checked GenSec rulings to make sure that still applies?
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Postby Old Hope » Tue Jan 22, 2019 8:49 am

Araraukar wrote:
Old Hope wrote:OOC: Categories with an Area of Effect cannot be Mild.

OOC: Have you checked GenSec rulings to make sure that still applies?

OOC:I checked the rulings that involved the Strength clause - none of them seem to apply or I missed something.
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Postby Separatist Peoples » Tue Jan 22, 2019 8:58 am

Araraukar wrote:
Old Hope wrote:OOC: Categories with an Area of Effect cannot be Mild.

OOC: Have you checked GenSec rulings to make sure that still applies?

OOC: Old Hope is, astonishingly, right, but only narrowly. Mild is not a valid AoE for Health. It should be Health | Healthcare. As I recall, AoEs have a statistical effect equivalent to Mild, though nothing requires the text of the resolution be mild in tone or effect when using an AoE. My personal theory is that AoEs are already narrowed such that even a severe resolution would affect only a narrow band of policy.

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Separatist Peoples wrote:OOC: As I recall, AoEs have a statistical effect equivalent to Mild, though nothing requires the text of the resolution be mild in tone or effect when using an AoE.

OOC: I thought that they were at least comparable to 'Significant'. At any rate, for 'Environmental' a single-Industry choice has the same total effect on a nation's stats as 'All Businesses (Strong)' rather than 'All Businesses (Mild)'...
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Postby Libertas Omnium Maximus » Tue Jan 22, 2019 10:41 am

I have attempted to address the trivial issues in the resolution. The edits have been made directly to the proposal and are visible above. I would love any suggestions you all may have as to the strength issue. Thanks for your time!
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Postby Separatist Peoples » Tue Jan 22, 2019 11:19 am

Libertas Omnium Maximus wrote:I have attempted to address the trivial issues in the resolution. The edits have been made directly to the proposal and are visible above. I would love any suggestions you all may have as to the strength issue. Thanks for your time!

OOC: You don't list a strength when writing in a category that has areas of effect. The area of effect is the strength. You don't have to worry about that part.

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Separatist Peoples wrote:OOC: As I recall, AoEs have a statistical effect equivalent to Mild, though nothing requires the text of the resolution be mild in tone or effect when using an AoE.

OOC: I thought that they were at least comparable to 'Significant'. At any rate, for 'Environmental' a single-Industry choice has the same total effect on a nation's stats as 'All Businesses (Strong)' rather than 'All Businesses (Mild)'...

OOC: I could be mis-remembering, certainly. The statistics are not my strong suit.

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Postby Libertas Omnium Maximus » Tue Jan 22, 2019 11:44 am

Category is fixed. Thanks
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This abbreviates to DEA. Coincidence, right?
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Postby Libertas Omnium Maximus » Tue Jan 22, 2019 11:51 am

I honestly know not of what you speak, DEA?
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Postby Kenmoria » Tue Jan 22, 2019 12:09 pm

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Libertas Omnium Maximus wrote:I honestly know not of what you speak, DEA?
A DEA is a registration number given to healthcare providers, such as doctors, by the US drug agency in order to facilitate prescriptions being given.)
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Postby Libertas Omnium Maximus » Tue Jan 22, 2019 12:30 pm

A hysterical coincidence. Not at all my intention. Hysterical non the less.
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“I have a question regarding this legislation; what exactly are you hoping to solve? What is the issue this draft is trying to fix, and why are you addressing it in this way? I ask this because I can’t see any actual effect that your active clauses will have if they are passed.”
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Postby Libertas Omnium Maximus » Tue Jan 22, 2019 12:57 pm

The operative clauses are supposed to highly encourage nations with developed economies to incentivize doctors to become mission doctors. If that is unclear I would. love a suggested way to improve the clauses.
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Postby Libertas Omnium Maximus » Tue Jan 22, 2019 6:51 pm

Sierra Lyricalia wrote:"Ambassador, is there a particular reason you use the phrase 'doctor-to-citizen ratio' rather than the more statistically useful (and less classist) term 'doctor-to-patient ratio'? Some of the places medical professionals are sorely needed have large immigrant or other non-citizen populations."


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Postby Bears Armed » Wed Jan 23, 2019 4:57 am

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'Health (Healthcare)' improves healthcare in member nations. This proposal encourages member nations to send their "surplus" doctors abroad, not necessarily to other member nations. i'm not sure that it fits.
'Health (International Aid)' might be better. I'll think further about this.
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Postby Libertas Omnium Maximus » Thu Jan 24, 2019 8:04 am

Bears Armed wrote:OOC
'Health (Healthcare)' improves healthcare in member nations. This proposal encourages member nations to send their "surplus" doctors abroad, not necessarily to other member nations. i'm not sure that it fits.
'Health (International Aid)' might be better. I'll think further about this.


I am obviously not a GenSec member, but I like to think that I know a thing or two about resolutions in general. It would make more sense for this proposal to be classified as Health: International Aid over Health: Healthcare, in my opinion. Something about health would be a pharmaceutical restriction or something of that ilk, whereas International Aid would be more associated with sending monetary or practical assets to nations in need.
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Postby Araraukar » Thu Jan 24, 2019 2:01 pm

Libertas Omnium Maximus wrote:It would make more sense for this proposal to be classified as Health: International Aid over Health: Healthcare, in my opinion.

OOC: ...which is exactly what Bears said?
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