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[DRAFT] Repeal "Debtor Voting Rights"

Postby Wallenburg » Mon Jan 14, 2019 11:50 am

Repeal "Debtor Voting Rights"
Category: Repeal || Resolution: GAR #454 || Proposed by: Wallenburg

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Debtors are bad voters. R: GA#454
Last edited by Wallenburg on Fri Jan 18, 2019 10:38 am, edited 3 times in total.
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Postby Wallenburg » Mon Jan 14, 2019 11:52 am

Repeal "Debtor Voting Rights"
Category: Repeal || Resolution: GAR #454 || Proposed by: Wallenburg

Description:

Debtors deserve no votes. R: GA#454
Repeal "Debtor Voting Rights"
Category: Repeal || Resolution: GAR #454 || Proposed by: Wallenburg

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Target is too short. R: GA#454

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Repeal "Debtor Voting Rights"
Category: Repeal || Resolution: GAR #454 || Proposed by: Wallenburg

Description:

R: GA #454.
Last edited by Wallenburg on Fri Jan 18, 2019 10:38 am, edited 3 times in total.
While she had no regrets about throwing the lever to douse her husband's mistress in molten gold, Blanche did feel a pang of conscience for the innocent bystanders whose proximity had caused them to suffer gilt by association.

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Postby Kenmoria » Mon Jan 14, 2019 12:24 pm

(OOC: Please say that’s a placeholder draft and not just a disproportionate response to the brevity of IA’s draft, because I’m quite certain repeals must actually have some reasoning behind them to avoid illegality.)
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Postby Wallenburg » Mon Jan 14, 2019 12:54 pm

Kenmoria wrote:(OOC: Please say that’s a placeholder draft and not just a disproportionate response to the brevity of IA’s draft, because I’m quite certain repeals must actually have some reasoning behind them to avoid illegality.)

No such rule exists requiring repeals to make arguments.
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Postby Wrapper » Mon Jan 14, 2019 12:56 pm

Actually:
Repeals should address the contents of the resolution it's targeting, and not just state the reverse of the arguments given in the resolution.

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Postby Wallenburg » Mon Jan 14, 2019 1:01 pm

Wrapper wrote:Actually:
Repeals should address the contents of the resolution it's targeting, and not just state the reverse of the arguments given in the resolution.

That is part of the Honest Mistake rule, which as I understand only applies to inaccurate or deceptive arguments, rather than a lack of them.
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Postby Wrapper » Mon Jan 14, 2019 2:24 pm

Doesn’t matter what rule it’s under, it makes it clear that you have to address the contents of the resolution.

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Postby Separatist Peoples » Mon Jan 14, 2019 2:31 pm

Wallenburg wrote:
Wrapper wrote:Actually:
Repeals should address the contents of the resolution it's targeting, and not just state the reverse of the arguments given in the resolution.

That is part of the Honest Mistake rule, which as I understand only applies to inaccurate or deceptive arguments, rather than a lack of them.

You can challenge it, Wally, but it doesnt look good for you. Inclusion under Honest Mistake had more to do with organization than requiring a threshold inquiry, I think.

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Postby Wallenburg » Mon Jan 14, 2019 2:54 pm

Separatist Peoples wrote:
Wallenburg wrote:That is part of the Honest Mistake rule, which as I understand only applies to inaccurate or deceptive arguments, rather than a lack of them.

You can challenge it, Wally, but it doesnt look good for you. Inclusion under Honest Mistake had more to do with organization than requiring a threshold inquiry, I think.

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Postby Reventus Koth » Mon Jan 14, 2019 3:00 pm

Believing GA #454 is too short,
R: GA #454

Can I get co-author credit?
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Postby Lord Dominator » Mon Jan 14, 2019 3:00 pm

Only need to fit your argument in less than 108 characters to be the shortest resolution ever
I'm sure you can manage that ;)

Also, lol Koth

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Postby Wallenburg » Mon Jan 14, 2019 3:20 pm

Reventus Koth wrote:Believing GA #454 is too short,
R: GA #454

Can I get co-author credit?

Fuck it, life's too short to not enjoy it. Edits made.
While she had no regrets about throwing the lever to douse her husband's mistress in molten gold, Blanche did feel a pang of conscience for the innocent bystanders whose proximity had caused them to suffer gilt by association.

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Postby Kenmoria » Mon Jan 14, 2019 3:39 pm

Wallenburg wrote:
Repeal "Debtor Voting Rights"
Category: Repeal || Resolution: GAR #454 || Proposed by: Wallenburg

Description:

Target is too short. R: GA#454

CA: Koth

“Are there any actual arguments for repealing this, bar the length? If you have any, I would like to hear them, even if they aren’t included in the draft for reasons of brevity.”
Last edited by Kenmoria on Mon Jan 14, 2019 3:39 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Postby Wrapper » Mon Jan 14, 2019 3:54 pm

Correct me if I’m wrong, but unlike the SC, the GA no longer requires a concluding active clause, right? If so, you can get rid of the “R: GA#454” part.

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Postby Wallenburg » Mon Jan 14, 2019 3:57 pm

Wrapper wrote:Correct me if I’m wrong, but unlike the SC, the GA no longer requires a concluding active clause, right? If so, you can get rid of the “R: GA#454” part.

I'm a stickler for the repeals clause. I'm satisfied with a whopping 40 characters.
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Postby Separatist Peoples » Mon Jan 14, 2019 3:59 pm

Wallenburg wrote:
Wrapper wrote:Correct me if I’m wrong, but unlike the SC, the GA no longer requires a concluding active clause, right? If so, you can get rid of the “R: GA#454” part.

I'm a stickler for the repeals clause. I'm satisfied with a whopping 40 characters.

Legality salvaged, as far as I can see.

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Postby Reventus Koth » Mon Jan 14, 2019 4:04 pm

Kenmoria wrote:
Wallenburg wrote:
Repeal "Debtor Voting Rights"
Category: Repeal || Resolution: GAR #454 || Proposed by: Wallenburg

Description:

Target is too short. R: GA#454

CA: Koth

“Are there any actual arguments for repealing this, bar the length? If you have any, I would like to hear them, even if they aren’t included in the draft for reasons of brevity.”

The proposal at vote is a testament to the arrogance of Imperium Anglorum, who clearly has become too comfortable with the knowledge that any dreck backed by the World Assembly Legislative League (WALL) will pass regardless of quality or effort put into the writing. It's reductive and undermines the already fragile autonomy of the WA, keeping the decision of which proposals enter the history books squarely in the hands of a handful of individuals. The GA should be concerned with the ease with which the WALL determines the fate of everything that passes through these halls. Thus, this proposal serves three purposes:

- To repeal low quality legislation
- To present legislation of similar quality and challenge the GA to come up with any reason this should be canned while the one at vote continues to gain approval
- To tell WALL where they can stick it.
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Postby Separatist Peoples » Mon Jan 14, 2019 4:09 pm

"Fascinating to see a delegation with little WA presence so offended by WALL's influence. Methinks the Kothian delegation is a bit jealous."

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Postby Reventus Koth » Mon Jan 14, 2019 4:16 pm

Separatist Peoples wrote:"Fascinating to see a delegation with little WA presence so offended by WALL's influence. Methinks the Kothian delegation is a bit jealous."


"Hah! I've accomplished everything I've set out to achieve in my WA experience thusfar. Granted, the ol' nation that wrote our delegation's only resolution got nuked off the fucking planet, but I'm still 1 for 1. I'm like Batman. I never read the comics or anything, but I'm pretty sure that guy's shtick is that he's the hero we need when we need him."
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Postby Lord Dominator » Mon Jan 14, 2019 4:38 pm

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Postby Kranostav » Mon Jan 14, 2019 7:57 pm

Reventus Koth wrote:
Kenmoria wrote:“Are there any actual arguments for repealing this, bar the length? If you have any, I would like to hear them, even if they aren’t included in the draft for reasons of brevity.”

The proposal at vote is a testament to the arrogance of Imperium Anglorum, who clearly has become too comfortable with the knowledge that any dreck backed by the World Assembly Legislative League (WALL) will pass regardless of quality or effort put into the writing. It's reductive and undermines the already fragile autonomy of the WA, keeping the decision of which proposals enter the history books squarely in the hands of a handful of individuals. The GA should be concerned with the ease with which the WALL determines the fate of everything that passes through these halls. Thus, this proposal serves three purposes:

- To repeal low quality legislation
- To present legislation of similar quality and challenge the GA to come up with any reason this should be canned while the one at vote continues to gain approval
- To tell WALL where they can stick it.

Oh no! Evil WALL is at it again! Cmon fellow GA "regular", to the batmobile!
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Postby Separatist Peoples » Mon Jan 14, 2019 8:11 pm

Kranostav wrote:
Reventus Koth wrote:The proposal at vote is a testament to the arrogance of Imperium Anglorum, who clearly has become too comfortable with the knowledge that any dreck backed by the World Assembly Legislative League (WALL) will pass regardless of quality or effort put into the writing. It's reductive and undermines the already fragile autonomy of the WA, keeping the decision of which proposals enter the history books squarely in the hands of a handful of individuals. The GA should be concerned with the ease with which the WALL determines the fate of everything that passes through these halls. Thus, this proposal serves three purposes:

- To repeal low quality legislation
- To present legislation of similar quality and challenge the GA to come up with any reason this should be canned while the one at vote continues to gain approval
- To tell WALL where they can stick it.

Oh no! Evil WALL is at it again! Cmon fellow GA "regular", to the batmobile!

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Postby Kranostav » Mon Jan 14, 2019 8:13 pm

Separatist Peoples wrote:
Kranostav wrote:Oh no! Evil WALL is at it again! Cmon fellow GA "regular", to the batmobile!

"Heaven forfend against talented people accomplishing anything."

Heaven further forfend against said talented people working together! How dare they combine their WA knowledge and talent!
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Postby Reventus Koth » Mon Jan 14, 2019 8:57 pm

IA is a solid author. This is demonstrable fact. He doesn't need to resort to this bottom-of-the-barrel zygote of a proposal to earn a badge.

This is about WALL showing that they own the GA, as plainly laid out for all to see by The North Pacific Minister of World Assembly Affairs' gatekeeping in this thread. I certainly never claimed to be a GA regular, that would be an obviously ridiculous assertion, but it doesn't matter since he can't refute the claim that WALL owns the place. Better attack the poster instead.
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Postby El Fiji Grande » Mon Jan 14, 2019 9:13 pm

I liked the resolution 'Debtor Voting Rights.' I thought its brevity was elegant, in that it said all it intended to say.
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