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[Scrapped] We're Some Strangers to Love

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[Scrapped] We're Some Strangers to Love

Postby Krogon » Sun Oct 07, 2018 4:25 pm

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As you began to answer your issues for today, your Intelligence Minister ran into your office and interrupted you. After evidence of a stalker including a video of someone following you around, love letters, and a figure standing at the doors of your office, you've been called to an emergency meeting.

[Option 1]
"This is bad, this is very bad," says your ever paranoid Intelligence Minister. "This could be a plot to kill you by Blackacre, or it could be hypnotism or a terrorist attack! The possibilities are endless. And, you don't even know who this girl or boy or whatever they are is! I'll launch an investigation into who this is and have them promptly arrested."
[Fallout]
teenagers who crush over @@LEADER@@ are sent to prison

[Option 2]
"Hey, this was dropped off for you," says a mail-carrier, dropping another letter on the table."Dearest @@LEADER@@, I can't help but look at you in the office and just imagine us together! I need to be with you right now. I've arranged for a candlelight dinner tonight at your favorite restaurant, (you know which one I'm talking about), and I can't wait to see you there! Sincerely, Your Secret Admirer."
[Fallout]
tabloids cover @@LEADER@@'s newest speech about not having relations with that woman

[Option 3]
Your Minister of Media pipes up. "What's so bad about people loving you? In fact, I think more people should be loving you! We'll plant actors to stalk you and when the world sees how much our citizens love you, they'll be raving with happiness!"
[Fallout]
crowds of stalkers follow @@LEADER@@ around
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Postby Australian rePublic » Mon Oct 08, 2018 12:19 am

Option 1- Wouldn't your mother know your marital status? And why would she encourage you to have an affair?
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Postby Candlewhisper Archive » Mon Oct 08, 2018 4:22 am

Made some comments on Jutsa's thread about the draft I wrote that was similar.

Actually, like your one better than his, because it avoids overruling player autonomy. However, I think it doesn't feel sufficiently "public eye" to be an issue, rather representing something that happens between issues, in "downtime".

Feel free to proceed of course, and please bear in mind I'm inclined to be biased in my interpretation because I strongly prefer my own issue.
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Postby Jutsa » Mon Oct 08, 2018 5:08 am

Made some comments on Jutsa's thread about the draft I wrote that was similar.
I think you meant Chan's. ;)

Eah there's a lot of love going around GI lately, I think.
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Postby Candlewhisper Archive » Mon Oct 08, 2018 6:19 am

Ah right, yeah, Chans.
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Postby Chan Island » Mon Oct 08, 2018 8:07 am

This is quite the insane coincidence. I had been plotting that idea for months and then boom, the same idea is posted here in GI on the same day.

We could make an issue out of that XD
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Postby Valentine Z » Mon Oct 08, 2018 8:19 am

You could say that it's indeed Strange Love. ;)
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Postby Krogon » Mon Oct 08, 2018 8:33 am

Chan Island wrote:This is quite the insane coincidence. I had been plotting that idea for months and then boom, the same idea is posted here in GI on the same day.

We could make an issue out of that XD


I only got this idea like a week ago, so yeah.

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Postby Krogon » Mon Oct 08, 2018 8:43 am

Candlewhisper Archive wrote:Made some comments on Jutsa's thread about the draft I wrote that was similar.

Actually, like your one better than his, because it avoids overruling player autonomy. However, I think it doesn't feel sufficiently "public eye" to be an issue, rather representing something that happens between issues, in "downtime".


This one was mainly based on the Monica Lewinsky scandal, which was pretty big. Enough to get Bill Clinton impeached. So I think It is kind of something that would be a huge issue. I was thinking if you were to choose one of the options there could be a potential followup, or maybe some chain issue about a stalker, etc.

Candlewhisper Archive wrote:Feel free to proceed of course, and please bear in mind I'm inclined to be biased in my interpretation because I strongly prefer my own issue.


I think I will, but if I hear about maybe scrapping it from a few more people, I probably will scrap it.

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Postby USS Monitor » Mon Oct 08, 2018 11:21 am

Krogon wrote:
Candlewhisper Archive wrote:Made some comments on Jutsa's thread about the draft I wrote that was similar.

Actually, like your one better than his, because it avoids overruling player autonomy. However, I think it doesn't feel sufficiently "public eye" to be an issue, rather representing something that happens between issues, in "downtime".


This one was mainly based on the Monica Lewinsky scandal, which was pretty big. Enough to get Bill Clinton impeached. So I think It is kind of something that would be a huge issue. I was thinking if you were to choose one of the options there could be a potential followup, or maybe some chain issue about a stalker, etc.


It doesn't read like it's riffing on the Monica Lewinsky scandal. This makes it sound like @@LEADER@@ doesn't necessarily reciprocate the secretary's feelings for @@HIM@@.
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Postby Krogon » Mon Oct 08, 2018 11:43 am

USS Monitor wrote:
Krogon wrote:
This one was mainly based on the Monica Lewinsky scandal, which was pretty big. Enough to get Bill Clinton impeached. So I think It is kind of something that would be a huge issue. I was thinking if you were to choose one of the options there could be a potential followup, or maybe some chain issue about a stalker, etc.


It doesn't read like it's riffing on the Monica Lewinsky scandal. This makes it sound like @@LEADER@@ doesn't necessarily reciprocate the secretary's feelings for @@HIM@@.


Fair enough, should I add/replace an option where @@LEADER@@ reciprocates?

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Postby USS Monitor » Mon Oct 08, 2018 12:14 pm

Krogon wrote:
USS Monitor wrote:
It doesn't read like it's riffing on the Monica Lewinsky scandal. This makes it sound like @@LEADER@@ doesn't necessarily reciprocate the secretary's feelings for @@HIM@@.


Fair enough, should I add/replace an option where @@LEADER@@ reciprocates?


It doesn't really explain why it would be a public issue for players that don't choose that option.
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Postby Krogon » Mon Oct 08, 2018 1:40 pm

USS Monitor wrote:
Krogon wrote:
Fair enough, should I add/replace an option where @@LEADER@@ reciprocates?


It doesn't really explain why it would be a public issue for players that don't choose that option.


I've done some changes that makes it more like the Monica Lewinsky scandal. I think this helps a lot with having it something that would be a big deal. (I am worried though that the description is a bit too jumbled, but I don't know how to unjumble it.)
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Postby Candlewhisper Archive » Tue Oct 09, 2018 3:07 am

I'd note that the Lewinsky thing has already been done more directly, with Issue 39, but player autonomy issues had that one watered down to be about an advisor instead, to the point that it's no longer recognisably about Lewinsky.
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Postby Krogon » Tue Oct 09, 2018 4:56 am

Candlewhisper Archive wrote:I'd note that the Lewinsky thing has already been done more directly, with Issue 39, but player autonomy issues had that one watered down to be about an advisor instead, to the point that it's no longer recognisably about Lewinsky.


That's fair. I could do a follow up to that issue...

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Postby Trotterdam » Tue Oct 09, 2018 7:39 am

Candlewhisper Archive wrote:I'd note that the Lewinsky thing has already been done more directly, with Issue 39, but player autonomy issues had that one watered down to be about an advisor instead, to the point that it's no longer recognisably about Lewinsky.
No, #39 has always been like that. The issue that was watered down is #417, which is still about @@LEADER@@ rather than an advisor, but had its language tweaked to support the interpretation that the character is just lying and it never happened (and yet, denying it still gives you Corruption).

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Postby Candlewhisper Archive » Tue Oct 09, 2018 9:00 am

Trotterdam wrote:
Candlewhisper Archive wrote:I'd note that the Lewinsky thing has already been done more directly, with Issue 39, but player autonomy issues had that one watered down to be about an advisor instead, to the point that it's no longer recognisably about Lewinsky.
No, #39 has always been like that. The issue that was watered down is #417, which is still about @@LEADER@@ rather than an advisor, but had its language tweaked to support the interpretation that the character is just lying and it never happened (and yet, denying it still gives you Corruption).


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Postby Krogon » Tue Oct 09, 2018 2:46 pm

I've changed it. Instead of Monica Lewinsky, it's now about a stalker.

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Postby Krogon » Fri Oct 12, 2018 4:58 am

Bump

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Postby Krogon » Sun Oct 14, 2018 1:04 pm

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Postby Krogon » Thu Oct 18, 2018 4:54 am

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Postby Krogon » Fri Oct 19, 2018 2:00 pm

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Postby Sacara » Fri Oct 19, 2018 2:34 pm

Let's have a look at the outline of the entire issue:
[desc]Someone is stalking @@LEADER@@

[option]figure out who is stalking him & have them arrested
[option]agree to go out with the stalker and have a good time
[option]figure out who is stalking him & have them arrested
[option]agree to go out with the stalker and tell them off

Do you see the problem here? I personally do not think the premise is workable, and the way you have the options laid out isn't either. I suggest reframing.
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Postby Krogon » Fri Oct 19, 2018 3:01 pm

Sacara wrote:Let's have a look at the outline of the entire issue:
[desc]Someone is stalking @@LEADER@@

[option]figure out who is stalking him & have them arrested
[option]agree to go out with the stalker and have a good time
[option]figure out who is stalking him & have them arrested
[option]agree to go out with the stalker and tell them off

Do you see the problem here? I personally do not think the premise is workable, and the way you have the options laid out isn't either. I suggest reframing.


I edited as such.

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Postby Minoa » Sat Oct 20, 2018 4:21 am

I think “We're some strangers to love” would rhyme well with a certain internet meme song thing. ;)
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