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Afriko
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Pokemon Go Players Gone Crazy

Postby Afriko » Sun Aug 07, 2016 3:34 am

The Talking Point: Yesterday, dozens of Pokemon Go players have came to the backyard of @@LEADER@@'s office. The police arrested them and these players are going to pay lots of money for what they caused. Option: "Stop this game!", says the mayor of @@CAPITAL@@, @@RANDOMNAME@@. "Those players are so disturbing. They can go anywhere, anytime, looking at their smartphones and don't even know where are they now. They can go to our military bases or even our parliament house. If things are even worst, their phones will be snatched, they'll be crashed by cars and more terrible things. So, the best solution is BAN THIS GAME!" Effect: The game Pokemon Go have been banned in the nation Stats: Law Enforcement increase, Authoritarianism increase, Safety increase, Health increase, Intelligence decrease, IT Industry decrease, Human Development decrease Option: "There are nothing wrong with this game", say electronics shop owner @@RANDOMNAME@@ when she's paying attention into her phone. "You can play it anywhere and anytime. You can catch these Pokemons. It's fun. So. install the game to your smartphone then enjoy it." Effect: Pokemon Go players gather at the same location is a common sight in @@NAME@@ Stats: Crime increase, Death Rate increase, Youth Rebelliousness increase, IT Industry increase, Human Development increase, Charmlessness increase, Rudeness increase, Safety decrease, Health decrease, Lifespan decrease, Public Education decrease Option: "This game is stupid.", says @@RANDOMNAME@@, a sports fanatic. "Why do they always keep their eyes on that game? Thay can replace it with healthier games. Basketball, football, tennis. Forget video games. For a healthier @@NAME@@"! Effect: Video games are banned. Stats: Health increase, Lifespan increase, Wealth Gaps increase, Public Education increase, Public Healthcare increase, Safety decrease, Human Development decrease, IT Industry decrease
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Postby The Intergalactic Universe Corporation » Sun Aug 07, 2016 3:36 am

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Postby Evilland of Evil Business » Sun Aug 07, 2016 4:40 am

Issues need to stand the test of time and stay relevant. For all we know, Pokemon Go will be a fleeting craze like Flappy Bird or Crossy Road and be forgotten in years to come. My suggestion is to reword your issue to cover a much more vaguer trend that people will still be able to relate to. Maybe replace Pokemon Go with a sport like hockey or football?

Also, when formatting your answer, use the tags [option] [effect] and [stats], as well as spaces between options.

Plus there's numerous grammar mistakes that need to be adjusted, for example:

There are nothing wrong with this game

they'll be crashed by cars

the best solution is BAN THIS GAME


Minor issues, and I understand if English isn't your main language, just needs a bit of going over.
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Postby The Crestfallen » Mon Aug 08, 2016 12:07 pm

You could also make it a security issue with location based gaming and just not mention PokeGo, because Ingress has been around for a while and has not gone anywhere. (Same company). People are staring at their smartphones and breaching secured areas by trespassing and hijacking, etc.
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Postby Raionitu » Mon Aug 08, 2016 12:11 pm

Try giving this a look over, might help you out: viewtopic.php?f=13&t=80

Generally, format it so things have separation between them. Example:

The Issue: You need to decide what food to eat

Validity: Valid for nations with food

Options:
[option]Eat a banana
[effect] you ate a banana

[option]Eat an apple
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Postby Omigodtheykilledkenny » Mon Aug 08, 2016 3:58 pm

Ingress is owned by Nintendo?? :o
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