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[DRAFT] A Murderous Agenda

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[DRAFT] A Murderous Agenda

Postby Tawgania » Tue Jan 12, 2016 5:51 pm

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A Murderous Agenda

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After the 7th time a murder has been in the headline of the newspaper this week, people are urging the government to do something about the high rate of murder in the nation.

Validity
High crime/murder rate

[option]"Disgraceful," states an old man with a pub hat sitting on a nearby bench, looking over his newspaper. "Someone ought to teach those... animals some human respect and decency. What they need is a good ol' decapitation! That'll set the right standard."
[effect] murder is solved by murder.
[stats] increase in law enforcement, authoritarianism and deaths by execution, decrease in crime rate and civil rights

[option]"Solving murder by KILLING? Are you nuts?" counters civil rights activist @@RANDOMNAME@@ as the front of a one-man rally. "What we need is rehabilitation programmes for all offenders! If they don't know that killing is wrong, we have to teach them that it is, no matter what it takes!"
[effect] convicted murderers spend the rest of their lives watching children's shows.
[stats] increase in civil rights and compassion, decrease in crime rate, authoritarianism and law enforcement

[option]"Mm, yes, but you're not going far enough!" exclaims your minister of interior, @@RANDOMNAME@@, with a glimmer in the eye. "Imagine if we 'rehabilitated' ALL our citizens from young age! We could teach them that killing is wrong, amongst other things, like stealing, spitting, disagreeing with you... Mm, yes, imagine such an obedient people! Crime would be no more. It'll be perfect, trust me."
[effect] citizens are educated into being mindless zombies.
[stats]heavy increase in authoritarianism, heavy decrease in civil rights and youth rebelliousness, increase in niceness, decrease in crime rate and compassion

[option]"You're all looking at this the wrong way," notes a shady man, wearing a trench coat and dark sun glasses, from the shadows in the corner of your office. "What if you simply legalized murder? That way, you could save jail space and resources as well as court fees. Besides, if you can't defend your life, you don't deserve it," he finishes, before disappearing into the shadows.
[effect] murder is a popular past time activity.
[stats]massive increase in crime rate and deaths by murder, heavy decrease in compassion, lifespan, authoritarianism, niceness and happiness



Well, it's my first issue. I've looked through existing issues and didn't see something quite like it, especially not with the last option, which I simply have always wanted to see. I hope I've been able to make it feel NS-y.
Last edited by Tawgania on Thu Jan 14, 2016 11:41 pm, edited 4 times in total.

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Postby Leppikania » Tue Jan 12, 2016 7:33 pm

Okay as far as spelling/grammar goes, but you missed a subquote in option 3.
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Postby Tawgania » Wed Jan 13, 2016 12:22 am

Leppikania wrote:Okay as far as spelling/grammar goes, but you missed a subquote in option 3.

Where? Looks fine to me.

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Postby Candlewhisper Archive » Wed Jan 13, 2016 6:17 am

I'd suggest that option 4 also perversely increases civil rights.
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Postby Leppikania » Wed Jan 13, 2016 6:44 am

Tawgania wrote:
Leppikania wrote:Okay as far as spelling/grammar goes, but you missed a subquote in option 3.

Where? Looks fine to me.

Tawgania wrote:"Imagine if we "rehabilitated" all our citizens

Also, one thing I missed, issues don't use NSCode.
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Postby Tawgania » Wed Jan 13, 2016 12:19 pm

Candlewhisper Archive wrote:I'd suggest that option 4 also perversely increases civil rights.

In my experience civil rights seem to be applied at policies that protect the rights of people rather than give them unlimited freedom. I've had issues where the most "free" response reduces civil rights instead of increasing.
I might be mistaken though.
Leppikania wrote:
Tawgania wrote:Where? Looks fine to me.

Tawgania wrote:"Imagine if we "rehabilitated" all our citizens

Also, one thing I missed, issues don't use NSCode.

I'm not sure I follow on the subquote. Should I've used ' instead of " ?

And is there another way to include italics in issues? Otherwise I'll remove it.

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Postby Leppikania » Wed Jan 13, 2016 12:28 pm

Tawgania wrote:
Leppikania wrote:
Also, one thing I missed, issues don't use NSCode.

I'm not sure I follow on the subquote. Should I've used ' instead of " ?

And is there another way to include italics in issues? Otherwise I'll remove it.

First: yes. Subquotes should use apostrophes. Second: no, but I can't know for sure without an issues editor. If you want to emphasize something put it in all caps.
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Postby Tawgania » Thu Jan 14, 2016 12:58 am

Leppikania wrote:First: yes. Subquotes should use apostrophes. Second: no, but I can't know for sure without an issues editor. If you want to emphasize something put it in all caps.

Does it look better now?

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Postby Candlewhisper Archive » Thu Jan 14, 2016 2:05 am

Tawgania wrote:
Candlewhisper Archive wrote:I'd suggest that option 4 also perversely increases civil rights.

In my experience civil rights seem to be applied at policies that protect the rights of people rather than give them unlimited freedom. I've had issues where the most "free" response reduces civil rights instead of increasing.
I might be mistaken though.


Yeah, that makes sense. Maybe a decrease to Authoritarianism then?
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Postby Tawgania » Thu Jan 14, 2016 11:41 pm

Candlewhisper Archive wrote:Yeah, that makes sense. Maybe a decrease to Authoritarianism then?

Yes, that sounds like a good idea. Would you think it's ready to submit now then?


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