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[PASSED] Repeal SC #111 "Commend Krulltopia"

Postby Jean Pierre Trudeau » Mon Apr 13, 2015 1:40 pm

The Security Council,

Recognizing Krulltopia as the current delegate of The Pacific as well as Emperor of The New Pacific Order (NPO) for nearly six torturous years,

Noting that regions have a right to sovereignty, regardless of the prevailing international opinion,

Disclosing the horrible coup in Lazarus which has seen the displacement of hordes of native nations, and the complete eradication of The Peoples Republic of Lazarus orchestrated by Krulltopia, Feux, and A Mean Old Man,

Shocked Krulltopia was commended for playing a crucial part to halt a takeover of Balder which has now inexplicably began to fly a bastardized flag of the New Pacific Order and claims to be allied with both the NPO and New Lazarus Order (NLO),

Believing the actions taken by Krulltopia and the NPO fly firmly in the face of the Security Council's mission of "Spreading interregional peace and goodwill, via force if necessary",

Laughing uncontrollably at the author's accolade of Krulltopia stating "Further noting that, over the course of those three plus years, Krulltopia has worked tirelessly and meticulously with only the aid of a few, very close allies to maintain the flawless security and stability of The Pacific, while promoting the safety of the other Pacific regions" while surreptitiously infiltrating and corrupting the governments of Balder and, more recently Lazarus to bring them directly under NPO control, and inconceivably at the same time allowing The Pacific to sink into stagnation and obscurity,

Firmly believing a commendation authored by known cohorts of Krulltopia specifically Feux, and A Mean Old Man should be taken with extreme suspicion,

Deeming Krulltopia’s actions in Balder and Lazarus, as well as allowing their own region to stagnate to be an affront to the ideologies of regional sovereignty, self-preservation and not fitting of a nation which the World Assembly has bestowed the ultimate honor,

Hereby repeals Security Council resolution #111 "Commend Krulltopia".

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Postby Bhang Bhang Duc » Mon Apr 13, 2015 2:03 pm

The middle paragraph ("Laughing.....") seems a bit clunky and there are a couple of words incorrectly capitalised, but that's just being a bit picky. I'd point them out but I'm on my phone.

Otherwise looks good.
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Postby Jean Pierre Trudeau » Mon Apr 13, 2015 2:04 pm

Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:The middle paragraph ("Laughing.....") seems a bit clunky and there are a couple of words incorrectly capitalised, but that's just being a bit picky. I'd point them out but I'm on my phone.

Otherwise looks good.


I appreciate the support. I will touch things up here, when I am not on my phone, and see where we can take this.
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Postby Omigodtheykilledkenny » Mon Apr 13, 2015 2:17 pm

you're confusing "self-determination" with "self-preservation." "Self-perseverance" isn't a word.
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Postby Jean Pierre Trudeau » Mon Apr 13, 2015 2:21 pm

Omigodtheykilledkenny wrote:you're confusing "self-determination" with "self-preservation." "Self-perseverance" isn't a word.


You are quite correct. I was trying to think of a unnecessarily long word to use, but I guess I will just go with "self-determination". I appreciate you pointing that out.
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Postby Jean Pierre Trudeau » Mon Apr 13, 2015 10:38 pm

Have changed the draft slightly. If no major issues pop up, and with permission from Ainocra I intend to send this to the floor.
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Postby Red is the Correct Color » Mon Apr 13, 2015 10:51 pm

I can't believe I'm supporting Chester, but I am.

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Postby Ainocra » Mon Apr 13, 2015 11:19 pm

It looks good to me.
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Postby Ramaeus » Mon Apr 13, 2015 11:54 pm

I was going to write this. >:(

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Postby Great Brigantia » Tue Apr 14, 2015 12:02 am

I would remove the bits about Balder, as they aren't accurate, but otherwise I support this.
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Postby Ainocra » Tue Apr 14, 2015 1:43 am

Ramaeus wrote:I was going to write this. >:(

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What a coincidence :)
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Postby Bhang Bhang Duc » Tue Apr 14, 2015 2:42 am

Recognizing Krulltopia as the current delegate of The Pacific as well as Emperor of The New Pacific Order (NPO) for a span of five torturous years

Actually it's nearly six (5 yrs 333 d).

Like your modified version.
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Postby Wrapper » Tue Apr 14, 2015 4:40 am

Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:
Recognizing Krulltopia as the current delegate of The Pacific as well as Emperor of The New Pacific Order (NPO) for a span of five torturous years

Actually it's nearly six (5 yrs 333 d).

Perhaps the first 333 days weren't quite so torturous? :p

A few grammar quibbles, JP:

"in the face of the Security Councils mission" -- needs a possesive, "in the face of the Security Council's mission"

"Laughing uncontrollably at the authors accolade" -- again, needs a possessive, "Laughing uncontrollably at the authors' accolade" (plural possessive since a co-author is credited)

"corrupting the governments of Balder, and more recently Lazarus" -- kind of clunky, try "corrupting the governments of Balder and, more recently, Lazarus"

"Deeming Krulltopia’s actions in Balder, Lazarus" -- again, clunky, try "Deeming Krulltopia’s actions in Balder and Lazarus"

"self preservation" -- always needs a hyphen, "self-preservation"

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Postby Jean Pierre Trudeau » Tue Apr 14, 2015 11:00 am

Wrapper wrote:
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:Actually it's nearly six (5 yrs 333 d).

Perhaps the first 333 days weren't quite so torturous? :p

A few grammar quibbles, JP:

"in the face of the Security Councils mission" -- needs a possesive, "in the face of the Security Council's mission"

"Laughing uncontrollably at the authors accolade" -- again, needs a possessive, "Laughing uncontrollably at the authors' accolade" (plural possessive since a co-author is credited)

"corrupting the governments of Balder, and more recently Lazarus" -- kind of clunky, try "corrupting the governments of Balder and, more recently, Lazarus"

"Deeming Krulltopia’s actions in Balder, Lazarus" -- again, clunky, try "Deeming Krulltopia’s actions in Balder and Lazarus"

"self preservation" -- always needs a hyphen, "self-preservation"


Fixed. Appreciate the proofread.
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Postby Jean Pierre Trudeau » Tue Apr 14, 2015 11:20 am

Submitted, and campaign complete. Let see who Feux tries to buy off now...
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Postby Solorni » Tue Apr 14, 2015 11:52 am

Yeah... the bits about Balder in particular are unnecessary and untrue.
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Postby Jean Pierre Trudeau » Tue Apr 14, 2015 12:01 pm

Solorni wrote:Yeah... the bits about Balder in particular are unnecessary and untrue.


Are they?
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Postby The Iron Rebel » Tue Apr 14, 2015 12:01 pm

Krulltopia isn't even in Balder, I think I would have noticed if he was.
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Postby Solorni » Tue Apr 14, 2015 12:07 pm

Jean Pierre Trudeau wrote:
Solorni wrote:Yeah... the bits about Balder in particular are unnecessary and untrue.


Are they?


Shocked Krulltopia was commended for playing a crucial part to halt a takeover of Balder which has now inexplicably began to fly a bastardized flag of the New Pacific Order and claims to be allied with both the NPO and New Lazarus Order (NLO)

[Citation Needed] on Balder claiming to be allied to both the NPO and NLO.

while surreptitiously infiltrating and corrupting the governments of Balder and, more recently Lazarus to bring them directly under NPO control

Could you please list which members of Balder's government are members of the NPO and have infiltrated our government? As well, could you provide a citation that Balder is under NPO control?
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Postby Unibot III » Tue Apr 14, 2015 12:12 pm

The Security Council,

Recognizing Krulltopia as the current delegate of The Pacific as well as Emperor of The New Pacific Order (NPO) for nearly six torturous years,

Noting that regions have a right to sovereignty, regardless of the prevailing international opinion, but possess no similar right to international praise or commendation,

Disclosing the horrible coup Acknowledging the New Pacific Order's brutal subjugation of Lazarus which has seen the displacement of hordes of native nations, and the complete eradication violent overthrow of The Peoples Republic of Lazarus orchestrated by Krulltopia, Feux, and A Mean Old Man,

(the PRL hasn't been 'eradicated' per se - the Underground exists.)

Shocked Krulltopia was commended for playing a crucial part to halt a takeover of Balder which has now inexplicably began to fly a bastardized flag of the New Pacific Order and claims to be allied with both the NPO and New Lazarus Order (NLO),

(Weren't NPO and Lux in negotiations and they only ratted him out later on when it became apparent he was nuts?)

Believing the actions taken by Krulltopia and the NPO fly firmly in the face of the Security Council's mission of "Spreading interregional peace and goodwill, via force if necessary",

Laughing uncontrollably at the author's accolade of Krulltopia stating "Further noting that, over the course of those three plus years, Strongly disputing the resolution's claim that "Krulltopia has worked tirelessly and meticulously with only the aid of a few, very close allies to maintain the flawless security and stability of The Pacific, while promoting the safety of the other Pacific regions" when it is become manifestly clear that the New Pacific Order has been surreptitiously infiltrating and corrupting the governments of Balder fellow Game-Created Regions and, more most recently, Lazarus to bring them directly under NPO control, while and inconceivably at the same time simultaneously allowing The Pacific to sink into stagnation and obscurity,

(You should also have clause noting that Krulltopia's claim to a long stable reign is a bit meaningless when the endo cap is as small as an express grocery item limit).

Firmly believing a commendation authored by known cohorts of Krulltopia specifically Feux, and A Mean Old Man should be taken with extreme suspicion,

Deeming Krulltopia’s actions in Balder and Lazarus, as well as allowing their own region to stagnate to be an affront to the ideologies of regional sovereignty, self-preservation and not befitting of a nation others which the World Assembly has bestowed the ultimate honor,

Hereby repeals Security Council resolution #111 "Commend Krulltopia".

Co-Authored by [nation=short]Ainocra[/nation]
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Postby The Stalker » Tue Apr 14, 2015 12:16 pm

Well from an outsider's perspective, Balder does share embassies with both regions, appears to be flying a version of their flag, and is the only GCR not indigent about NPO's actions in Lazarus.

That paints a certain picture.
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Postby Solorni » Tue Apr 14, 2015 12:27 pm

More than what I have stated? :P
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Postby The Stalker » Tue Apr 14, 2015 12:47 pm

Solorni wrote:More than what I have stated? :P


Well it's easier to get people to believe something is true, than something is untrue.

Absence of evidence is not evidence of absence, you ask for proof but looking at the field it looks a certain way. Are you saying Balder is not allied with NPO and NLO? And the flag is just coincidental?
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Postby The Iron Rebel » Tue Apr 14, 2015 12:56 pm

The Stalker wrote:
Solorni wrote:More than what I have stated? :P


Well it's easier to get people to believe something is true, than something is untrue.

Absence of evidence is not evidence of absence, you ask for proof but looking at the field it looks a certain way. Are you saying Balder is not allied with NPO and NLO? And the flag is just coincidental?

I sure am, Krull isn't in Balder, no one in the NPO is in our government, I'd know I run most of said government and hired my entire cabinet :/
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Postby Zander Cerebella » Tue Apr 14, 2015 1:14 pm

Krull hasn't been on the forum in over 2 years(23 February 2013).
I'd also be gone if the NPO was in the region. I don't think they'd be happy that I fly the New Polar Order flag in Balder either :p

As to why we've not declared a side on the Lazarus matter, well did it ever occur to you that perhaps we decided to remain neutral on the matter?
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